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I've decided to start working with Phoenix Wright sprites. I hope to improve my anti-aliasing, efficient use of color palettes, and texture design (especially hair and cloth).
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he looks like from 14 to 16
good job
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How old does he look? Or, does he just look like a smaller, happier version of the normal Larry sprite?
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on the sprite I don't see any errors, its quite well done...anywho good luck on future sprites
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How old does he look? Or, does he just look like a smaller, happier version of the normal Larry sprite?
Very nice. It's clean and well done. I can't see anything to crit :)
I'm looking forward to your next sprites.
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To me it doesn't look that young at all,
but then again, the child Larry in 1-4 was allmost too adult like too.
So no complains here, then.
New one in the group, eh?
After seeing that one it would be fun to see more works.
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A lot of PW1 sprites don't look fantastic, so their bodies need some touching up... but I'm more concerned with the hair. On the left we obviously have palette swapped Franziska, and the one on the right probably needs bigger hair to compensate for the small head. I've always been terrible with hair, so I'm considering baldcapping them both and drawing it from scratch, for practice. Unfortunately... I'm also terrible at coming up with hairstyles.
edit: Larry's static sprite was getting on my nerves, so I gave him a talking animation.
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could tell me how old you think the younger Maggey looks?
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Personally, I wouldn't change hair on this one. It looks perfectly fine as is.
I'd rather work on the other one - the eyes look slightly too dark in comparison to the rest of the sprite, and the mouth is a bit too far to the right to look natural.could tell me how old you think the younger Maggey looks?
I'd say...10-11.
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Like I said, it's not finished yet. I haven't done any shading on the blazer, or touched up the outlines. I actually haven't decided whether she'll wear a necktie, a bow or something else... This is a school uniform, mind you.
Hrm, you're right about the eyes, I'll fix that if I ever touch the sprite again. The mouth is supposed to be that far to the side though, she's smirking.
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...I'm surprised everyone likes the hair though, it's just her normal hair lowered and flood-filled. I haven't even started shading or detailing it yet...
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If I ever do Gumshoe, it'll probably be as a twenty-two-year-old officer.
edit: Maggey's done! Well, for now, anyway. I wasn't sure which piece of neckwear I wanted, or if she should have a hair ribbon, but I eventually decided to go double-bow, as seen in the animation.
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EDIT: You ninja'ed me xD Still, good decision ;3 Double bow fits her nicely.
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Oy. I still haven't added them, her shirt is plain white below the bow. I knew there would be small details that I forgot.
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I love your younger Larry and double bow Maggey! <3
Fantastic.
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I added the buttons to her shirt, and fixed a minor color issue with the bow.
I guess I'll apply these changes to the normal pose, then animate the sad one.
edit: How does everyone feel about Emote Bow? The mouth on Moe's hat did something similar.
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how the sprite is supposed to be animated, but is more secure from theft, and takes up less space.
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The emote bow is a little creepy to me.. for some reason. O.o;
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Thanks to this, by the time I'm done I have a long line showing the progress of the sprite... and can do this!
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Thanks to this, by the time I'm done I have a long line showing the progress of the sprite... and can do this!
spacerThat's pretty interesting. But I like your sprites, keep it up and have some fun while you're at it!
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Thanks, though... and I always have fun.
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A butler, as requested by Auraion.
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A butler, as requested by Auraion.
Thanks a lot Chesu
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Especially your young Larry and Maggey, personally I would have prefer the tie but the bow fits her very well too. The animated Maggey is my favorite. Can't wait to see more of your works
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Also, by popular demand...
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I wonder what a young Diego would look like?....
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Just keep doing those things and you should see a clear difference to your old works after few months.
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Okie dokie. You should enter the OC Contest, your really good at spriting.
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EDIT: Nevermind...Allready have my answer.
Iish! Time to get to work again! ^^
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Just keep doing those things and you should see a clear difference to your old works after few months.
Well I'm not going to pretend that the hair is good, just because the flaws are only clear up close. It's only the second PW-style sprite I've ever made... and learning to sprite hair is one of the reasons I'm doing this to begin with.
I was thinking about it, but I'm not great at designing original clothing... For that contest I would want to make a flashy prosecutor or something.
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Do you ever have an idea that just won't leave you alone until you bring it to life? 
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