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Southern Corn: Story CrafterTopic%20Title
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This is basically the place where I post my works,which include poetry and some short stories. I'll start with this simple little haiku:
Murder-A Haiku
Shot right in the heart
The weapon,a stray arrow
The victim,a hawk

Stay tuned for more soon!
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Here's a new one:
Celebration
They open the door,crowd into the room wildly
While the centre of the show just stands there mildly
They bring the sacrifice on a plate with some dishes
and a knife and give good wishes
The room gets illuminated by mild candlelight,
But then the person in the centre blows them,losing all sight
Then the lights are switched on again,and the sacrifice,poor thing,
Gets cut into pieces,while everybody in unison sing
The sacrifice is divided among all equally
And there's room for more,as far as their stomachs see
And then everybody cheers,and they all chant and say,
"We all wish you a happy birthday!"
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Guess I should also include my Mad Libs.
So,basically,there'll be a space where you'll have to write some given words (with a paper,usually), and then there'll be a story which will be half complete. You'll just have to finish it using the keywords you wrote. Oh,and no looking before writing the words.

Show me the list you came with and we'll all have a good laugh at it.

Here's one:
Spoiler: long list
    1) Noun
    2)Adjective
    3)Gender indicating ownership(eg. His or her)
    4)Noun
    5)Verb (past)
    6)Same gender but w/o indicating ownership (eg. He or she)
    7)Verb ending with ing
    8)Animal
    9)Name
    10)Verb (tense neutral)
    11)Verb (tense neutral)
    12)Number
    13)Insult
    14)Verb (past)
    15)Bird
    16)Verb (tense neutral)
    17)Adjective
    18)Adjective
    19) Colour
    20)Body part
    21)Verb ending with ed
    22)Body part
    23)Amount (eg.much,little)
    24)Verb ending with ed
    25)Negative quality (eg.lazy,boring)
    26)Adjective
    27)Name of someone evil
    28)Your role model
    29)Positive quality of role model (eg.smart,strong)
    30)Farewell (eg.bye,see you soon,see you later,alligator)


And the story for this:
Spoiler: the greatest story of all time brace your seatbelts cause you gonna fall off yo
There once was a great 1. The 1 was very 2, and 3 4 5 6 for it. One day, 6 was 7, when suddenly a 8 appeared! It cackled," My name is 9, and I wish to 10 the world! I will 11 you and your 12 friends!

But the 1 replied," No! I will never let you do that to my world! Die,you 13 ! But 9 attacked 3 first,and 3 14 to the ground!

It looked as if the great 1 was about to die,when suddenly a 15 appeared! It said," Oh, 9, I will 16 you!" And so it did. The 1 gaped in surprise. " Who are you,oh 17 15? You amaze me with your 18 19 20! It also 21 me how you kicked 9 's 22 so 23! I also really 24 your 25 -"

"Now,now", said the 15 ,"Enough with the compliments. If you must really know,I am...the 26 27!" " Whoa,really? I'm your biggest fan!" "O really? Who might you be,then?" "Oh,me? I'm just a 1 . My name is 28! But everybody hates me because I'm too 29 ."

" Ah,I can see why,you suck. Screw you. 30 !

The End :gant:


That was neat,eh? Please do tell me if it doesn't work for you properly.

Alright,another one coming!
The list:
Spoiler:
    α)Adjective
    β)Noun
    γ)Noun(plural)
    δ)Noun(plural)
    ε)Noun(plural)
    ζ)Noun(plural)
    η)Random noise (i.e ooh,ah,oink)
    θ)Number
    ι)What you would name your child
    κ)Random noise
    λ)Random noise
    μ)Adjective
    ν)Animal (plural)
    ξ)Verb ending with ing
    ο)Verb ending with ed
    π)Worst insult you've ever heard
    ρ)Random noise
    σ)Verb ending with ed
    τ)Adjective
    υ)Your best friend
    φ)Your least favourite human being
    χ)Your favourite food
    ψ) Number
    ω) Positive quality or trait

And the story:
Spoiler: The spooky story brace yourselfs yo or you gonna die lol
A Tale of α β

There once was a world where γ ruled, δ were eaten, ε were drunk,and ζ was used as toilet paper. The world's name was η . It was in the θ ι galaxy,right in between the two planets κ & λ .
This is the story of η 's attempted invasion by the μ ν .

One day,the γ were having a nice time by ξ each other,when suddenly, ν appeared! The inhabitants ο to try and scare them off,but it didn't work. They cackled,"We have come from κ . We have already killed all of λ 's inhabitants. Now it's your turn to perish,you π !"

And with a battle cry of ρ ,they went and killed the poor γ ! But they weren't alone. Suddenly,warriors σ out of nowhere and killed the evil ν .
THE END :godot:

.... OR NOT! :udgey:



There was only one invader left,who had killed all the warriors- the τ υ ! It killed all the inhabitants except for their ruler,the famous,kind hearted,beautiful,and renowned φ! Everybody obviously loved them,and they killed the last invader,and lived happily ever after,eating χ for ψ more years. They're just so ω ,aren't they?

ok the end for realsies remember to subscribe to my twitterbook and twitchtube kthxbai :edgey:


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This counts as a work,I guess,so here's my detailed case rankings,complete with scores and detailed explanations on their respective rankings. It's still in progress though. You can read it simply,or open the spoiler tag in that post to skip to any writeup you'd like.

Warning,this contains spoilers,for the six main games,the two AAIs,DGS and the Layton crossover. So all of those. If you'd like,though,you can just skip the DGS ones (labelled D-x,where x is the case number).
Hi,I'm Southern Corn,but you can call me SC. My friends are great and my enemies irate.

Every single Ace Attorney case,ranked with detailed explanations. Includes cases from DGS and AA6, so read at your own risk. Also comes with a wonderful hint box. Now complete!

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Do you get inspiration from Romanticism or some poet in particular for your poems? I like them. Even if you are not intentionally getting influence from Romanticism, they seem kind of Byronic.
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I personally love subversion,and this is what they're all about. 'Murder' ends with a twist that it was only a hawk,and 'Celebration' ends with a twist that it was only a birthday party,but it was worded rather cruelly. Either way,glad you like them!
Hi,I'm Southern Corn,but you can call me SC. My friends are great and my enemies irate.

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Been a while since I posted here,but I'm bumping this thread to inform you that my next work is on my way! Promise!
Hi,I'm Southern Corn,but you can call me SC. My friends are great and my enemies irate.

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Had a bit of writer's block,but finally,here's the poem!

Oh Christmas Tree

Oh,Christmas tree
How much do I adore thee?
Your dark green leaves give me bliss
And the way you've been decorated just is

Absolutely great
Like a piñata at a party
Where even if I'm late
I can take part and be wonderful and hearty

The ornaments,the stars and the candy canes
All so beautiful,without blemishes or stains
The golden star right at the top
Positioned careflully,even if it is a bane
To do so without it being a flop
In the end,it's still

Absolutely great
Like a piñata at a party
Where even if I'm late
I can take part and be wonderful and hearty

Oh Christmas tree,
I still love and adore ye
Your wonderfulness consumes everyone
Gives them laughs and is a lot of fun
I'll always love you,even if you aren't there-
Wait,you're taking it where?!

Stop! Please cease and desist
That tree is ours,and it will be missed
But not if you let it stay,
And let it adorn our living room,
Just the thought of it gone forever makes me swoon,
Please,I beg you,let me have my way-

Fine,I do understand,I guess
Christmas is over,and it will be missed
But that tree is very important to me-
Sigh,fine,take it. Happy 'Holidays'.

-----

And thus the tree was taken down
All of its ornaments,and its starry crown
The wood was chopped open,and taken who knows where
But now the living room feels so bare

Oh,Christmas tree,you will be missed
I'm sorry I failed to resist
With out you,it'll never be the same again
And I'm not sure if I can be sane again
You were

Absolutely great
Like a piñata at a party
Where even if I'm late
I can take part and be wonderful and hearty

But not anymore,gone forever
When will I see you again? Most likely never
Your green leaves filled me with bliss
And you will most certainly be missed.

Oh Christmas tree
Come back to me
I will come where you are now just to see ye
Oh,I know! You're up in the sky
With the angels,letting loose
I think I can get there with the help of this noose!

Yes,just tie it around this wonderful neck of mine
And I hope to see you there being just fine
Oh,and I hope you will be just

Absolutely great
Like a piñata at a party
Where even if I'm late
I can take part and be wonderful and hearty

XOXOX


I hope you like it. I was particularly happy about the double meaning behind the refrain at the end myself. See y'all later!
Hi,I'm Southern Corn,but you can call me SC. My friends are great and my enemies irate.

Every single Ace Attorney case,ranked with detailed explanations. Includes cases from DGS and AA6, so read at your own risk. Also comes with a wonderful hint box. Now complete!

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You've seen my short stories and poems,and now time for my...er,other works. So here are my totally cool OCs. Starting with...the mysterious Prosecutor Socot!

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After waking up from a poison-induced coma which he was in for 7 years,Socot decided to take to prosecuting,hoping he would discover his true identity (as he woke up an amnesiac) by doing so. The blue thing behind him? That's his tail,which got severely wounded during his fatal and mysterious accident 7 years ago. His eyes were also heavily damaged,and he has to wear a helmet to even see. Even with it,he cannot see yellow on white,which has seriously confused him several times in the bathroom. So far,he has gone undefeated,but has not regained his memory. Will he get it back? Find out soon!

Thought that Prosecutor Socot was garbage? Then you haven't even seen my next dumb OC,Captain Socot!

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As you can tell,this is Prosecutor's Socot's alternate identity! After prosecuting several cases,Socot realised that there's more to him than the courts can provide answers for,and became a superhero! Just like the Yatagarasu,he's on the search for the truth-the truth of whom he really was,that is. Every month,at midnight,he sneaks into his outift (with some evil eyebrows pasted on his helmet,red laser eyes emanating from his helmet,a fake metal mouth sneering at his foes,a wonderful moustache and a cape with his initials (CS-Captain Socot (but could it be more than that? :hotti: ) on it covering his weak tail),and steals (get it?) into several warehouses and embassies and other offices to get more info on who he was-even if he was traitor scum from an organization larger than him. Will he truly steal the truth,even if his life depends on it? Or will he have to stick with being a prosecuting amnesiac? Find out soon!

made by me in 10 minutes with MS paint as a joke for Pierre

...Yeah,um....I'll go now. :sadshoe:
Hi,I'm Southern Corn,but you can call me SC. My friends are great and my enemies irate.

Every single Ace Attorney case,ranked with detailed explanations. Includes cases from DGS and AA6, so read at your own risk. Also comes with a wonderful hint box. Now complete!

Want to see more of my beautiful posts? Then click here! Includes classics like Mad Libs,the Memory Game,and Story Crafter,where I post all my works.

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