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wait, there's gonna be another chapter right?
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There will be another chapter, yes.
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O good.
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Sorry for the later review I can't believe she refused him.
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I'm surprised nobody has guessed what Phoenix had realized. It was quite obvious if you think about it hard enough.
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Um why I can't think of it why?
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Phoenix and Maya Fan wrote:
Um why I can't think of it why?

Please revise your testimony to include the English language. No offense. I just don't understand what you posted.
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Huh I do speak english I live in the USA even I just sometimes mix up my words.

I mean I can't think of why she rejected him sorry.
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Phoenix and Maya Fan wrote:
Huh I do speak english I live in the USA even I just sometimes mix up my words.

I mean I can't think of why she rejected him sorry.

It's a figure of speech. I just didn't understand your post.
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Oh sorry my bad. :bellboy:
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Hazri wrote:
I assure you, that chapter was no dream


:ack: Noooooo! She's an impostor then. I've decided. :edgy:
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Chapter 9 added to the first post!
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Oh :eh?: Maybe not an impostor then! Well, that was better than Maya being an impostor anyway. I'm happy now :jazzedgy: But I don't want anything bad to happen in the wedding :edgeworth:
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I'm liking the story a lot more now that it isn't as fast paced. Good work on that.

I wasn't expecting him to accidentally be proposing to Mia, though that does make sense. I was thinking that Maya was pregnant, or something like that...

Nick, I'm pregnant! And Edgeworth's the father!

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Heh heh, just kidding about that. But I did think she was going to be pregnant.

And you sure know where to throw in sexual jokes...
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I actually predicted that it was Mia. Would you believe it?
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This is pretty good! It's well written, but the number of dreams in the chapters are unbelievable. D: It totally threw me off when Maya died, but it turned out to be a dream.. D: Poor Nick. Anyway, I eagerly await the next chapter! :D
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Renodin wrote:
And you sure know where to throw in sexual jokes...

Is that a good thing? ^^
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Hazri wrote:
Renodin wrote:
And you sure know where to throw in sexual jokes...

Is that a good thing? ^^


Yeah, it's a good thing the way you're using it. Just as long as the whole thing doesn't become a playboy magazine, heh heh.
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This is funny XD I like it. I can't wait for the next chapter XD
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I should have seen the mia thing coming and Pearl gets traumtized great chapter!
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Chapter 10 added to the first post!
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Oh noes, someone hates me. *cries*
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...
And then Phoenix woke up!
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Ugh. I'm sorry, but if you were trying for a humorous story you failed miserably. The comedy felt forced, and all the story did was depress me by the end.
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Nope. This never happened.

Phoenix is going to wake up in a moment.
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Ugh. I'm sorry, but if you were trying for a humorous story you failed miserably. The comedy felt forced, and all the story did was depress me by the end.

I have lost passion for this. Hilarity must have run off with it.

Renodin wrote:
Nope. This never happened.

Phoenix is going to wake up in a moment.

That was the last chapter. EVER.
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Ugh.....what a terrible ending.
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justis76 wrote:
Ugh.....what a terrible ending.

In what terms? Part of me wanted it to be canonical, the other wanted to get the damn thing finished.

EDIT: Right now I'm conflicted. Should I continue Phoenix Wrong or get dedicated to another FF? :beef:
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Ending of Chapter 10 and epilogue edited a little. Don't make me spell it all out for you...
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That ending was suprising really I mean I think I cried.
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Oh dear, now I read if from prologue to epilogue.

Even if it was confusing, unexplained and illogical at some parts, the writing was excellent and it had some very sweet moments.
The approx first half of the fanfic was great, all in all.
Then the multiple nightmares and other-reason seemed a bit forced, but it was still entertaining. I didn't like the "since chapter 5" joke either.

But the ending was really shocking. Not only it's very sad and depressing (almost made me cry), but totally unexplained.

(Oh and it's not canon. It didn't include GS3 in the first place and there are a few other differences between this and the canon.)

But seriously, what kind of ending is this? It it supposed to be funny? Seems like a major slap in the face after 10 chapters of seriousness and romance. Way to ruin it.
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Lovely fanfic. It was sweet, cute, romantic. I was blushing and nearly got a nosebleed. My heart stopped at some points and some parts bummed me out...Especially that ending.

A wonderfully decent fanfic. :pearl:
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