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Pleading Eyes' One Shots, Got a Moment?Topic%20Title
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I feel violated... and crispy...

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So, just a little fix I whipped up in my spare time. Hope you guys don't completely hate it! :gant:

Title: Kiss The Girl (Yes, like the song from "The Little Mermaid")
Author: Me. ^^;
Genre: Humor/Comfort
Rating: PG for Larry in a dress
Status: Complete, but possibility of a sequel
Summary: Edgeworth gets swindled into taking our favorite Fey cousins to see The Little Mermaid on stage. But something smells, and you know what that means... It's inconceivable! These things simply do not happen to Miles Edgeworth!

Title: Pirated Memories
Author: Me. ^^;
Genre: Humor
Rating: PG for implied intimacy
Status: Complete
Summary: On request, Maya tries to tell her son the story of how she and his father got together. But Maya's memory may be a little... skewed.

Title: Routine
Author: Me. ^^;
Genre: Humor/Fluff
Rating: PG-13 for impropriety!
Status: Complete
Summary: Edgeworth is a man of his routines. Throw a wrench in the finely-tuned system, and it all falls apart. But is that necessarily a bad thing?
I know who Apollo's real father is, and I have evidence...
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It was a very good one, though I'm sure I've read it before. But it was good to read it again. You did a good work!
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:edgy: I love it!
That was written very, very well! And you really gave us a little incite to the minds of both Edgeworth and Maya.

Sequel! Sequel!

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:pearl-blush: :pearly: :-P :think:


So, so cute! And yet, angsty at the same time! You've done a great job with the characterizations and when I saw that Larry was going to be in a dress, I was sold!!! LOL I love this and I hope to see more!!

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GUYS! Thank you SO much for the reviews! It means a ton! ^_^

I was a little worried. While it's not a romance story, it still implies an unusual pairing, and I was a little concerned that people wouldn't like it. ^^;

But I'm so happy you did! YAAAY.

The sequel will have to wait a bit, since I'm currently working on a Franziska-centric fic. But her story will definitely tie into the sequel when and if it comes around...
I know who Apollo's real father is, and I have evidence...
Spriters needed for fanmade GS5! It's gonna be BIG!
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So cute, heart-warming, and very good writing! I applaud your skill to handle such a comical story in a rather professional manner. :edgy:
While I am more of a :franny: / :edgeworth: fan, I do have also enjoy :edgeworth: / :maya: but to be quite honest I've never really found a fanfic that has written that pairing well. You, however, have changed that! I enjoyed this story immensely as it kept the characters as in-character as humanly possible (Edgy's just a pain to deal with, lol) and was well-written.

The ending surprised me, but was awfully cute. Well, the whole story was just cute. And not only did it have cuteness, but it also had some depth between Maya and Miles, which could seem daunting to someone who doesn't think it through ;)

Absolutely adorable. Completely captivating. Bravo! XD
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:cody-shock2: Pleady! *glomp* I didn't know you were here XD Okay I love this fic to death, but you've already heard that :maya:

I've always been so jealous of how well you characterize Edgeworth and Maya and sequel = VERY YES please :minuki:
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You should know by now, Shawni. I am everywhere, at all times.

Also, I am that obsessed with AA.

WHEN WILL YOU BE MINE, GK? ;_;
I know who Apollo's real father is, and I have evidence...
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Looks like I was late for the party :payne: but WOW, that was very very nicely written! I love the ending too! Very good job. By the way, when Edgeworth was cornered against wall, the cornered theme was actually playing in my head. :edgy:
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I really like it! =3
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Thanks Purple Angel =D
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Thanks you guys! =D

I'm so glad people liked it despite the unusual (under-appreciated >_>) pairing.

I'm working on a Larry/Franziska fic now, but these two may call me back. I just can't stay away from them!
I know who Apollo's real father is, and I have evidence...
Spriters needed for fanmade GS5! It's gonna be BIG!
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I feel violated... and crispy...

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Added a couple stories.

Pirated Memories

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Routine
I know who Apollo's real father is, and I have evidence...
Spriters needed for fanmade GS5! It's gonna be BIG!
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I liked all of them. They were really funny and sweet.
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Just finished reading all of these - Great job! Your writing style is excellent, and your characterization is spot on. Keep up the good work, I look forward to more!
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