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Hum, good. And it's longer than I expected! Well, now we can only expect the confrontation to develop. Mortal Kombat! I'll be waiting to see what happens next.

Godot's motive is still not entirely clear to me, though... but I'll wait to see what happens.
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Of course it should be long. It's one of the key plot scenarios in the story. Don't worry, You won't be let down with the surprises I'm going to put.
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Nice. :godot: I love Chapter 8; it's long, and it's adventurous! Also, the evil characters in it are pretty cool :uramidn: Dahlia is probably my favourite evil character. I can't wait for the plot to be revealed :edgy:
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I'm glad you liked the chapter :godot: Yes, The plot is almost going to be revealed soon. :karma:
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Chapter 9 is here! (Contains Bridge to the Turnabout actual dialogue)
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Chapter 9: Truth Unveiled
Phoenix: Dollie? Matt? Why are you working with Gant.
Matt: Payment dude.
Dahlia: He promised to fulfill my ambitions. Check the file and you will see why.
*Skims through file*
Phoenix:This was last month's case. The one in where Misty Fey was murdered.
Dahlia: Yes, and do you remember. That I can't go yet Feenie?
Phoenix:.... Yes, I remember now.
*flashback*
Dahlia:...How...coULd...I...loSe...to...THe...liKES...of...YOU?
Phoenix:It no longer matters. I don't care whether you win or lose anymore. The only thing I want is for you to come out of Maya's body right now!
Dahlia:AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
*spirit gets away from body*
Dahlia Spirit:...I'M...NOT...READY...NOT...READY...TO...GO...
*back to present time*
Dahlia: Now you know why I'm still here.
Phoenix: I know but...why are you wearing your outfit while you were still alive
Gant: I ordered an exhumation of the body and well...I have new supplies of life vials delivered to me.
Jake: But, nobody knew about those thingies.
Gant: That's because it goes to me. In private.
Dahlia: So now you see how I am like this. Now Feenie. Allow me to show my love to you.
Phoenix: What are you talking about?
*Dahlia moves closer to Phoenix*
Phoenix: Dahlia, what are you doing?
Iris: PHOENIX!
Matt:*pulls out a gun, points it at Iris* Dudette, stay down!
Edgeworth: Wright!
Gant:Not so fast Worthy.*blocks way*
Dahlia: I love you Feenie
Phoenix: What are you...
*Dahlia kisses Phoenix in lips*
Everyone: OH MY GOSH!!! *Matt drops his gun, Gant is frozen stiff, Edgeworth and the rest look in shock*
Phoenix: D-d-dahlia...why?
Dahlia: I just wanted to show you my love.
Phoenix:...
Chapter 10: In the works
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Great :godot: You gave a good reason for Dahlia being there, but... she's lying! She can't have wanted to show her love to Feenie Phoenix! She only met him twice!
I can't wait for the next chapter... the suspense is going to kill me. :minuki:
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Oh, but this will be the last time she lives so that's why she wants to do it now. It will be explained why in the next chapter :karma:
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Chapter 10 is here! (Contains Yatagarasu references)
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Chapter 10: Backfire.
Phoenix:*chokes* What... the... heck did you do to me.
Dahlia: I made you drink poison and I transferred it through my lips
Phoenix: Why the *coughs* heck have you done this?
Dahlia: Oh, Feenie. You still haven't figured it out yet?
Edgeworth: Somehow it involves the first few cases your mentor had.
Phoenix: Oh my *hack* gosh. But never mind that. Who has the antidote?
Edgeworth: I know just who has it.
Gant: Wait, Worthy...what are you doing?
Edgeworth: You want to go swimming right... Well why don't you? *pushes Gant into the pool*
*splash*
Gant: Oh my, the irony of my thoughts.
Jake: Now for you Mr. Engarde.
Matt: Wait, dude. Back off! *points gun to Marshall while moving back.
Adrian: Perfect timing Matt. *kicks Matt into the pool*
Matt: Oh you just did not, Adrian.
*splash*
Adrian: Oh I just did.
Jake: Hang on Bambina, almost out.
*rope unties*
Jake: Come on, kiss him now bambina
Iris: Yes, I'm going.
Dahlia: Oh no you are not going to.
Iris: Oh, but I will.
Phoenix: Come *choke* on!
Iris: Feenie...*moves closer*
Phoenix: Iris...*kisses Iris in the lips*
Edgeworth: Well, did it work?
Phoenix: Yes, it's gone.
Edgeworth: Good. Gumshoe, get the judge. I have a feeling this is where the confession will be made.
Gumshoe: Yes, sir.
*goes out of warehouse while Godot steps in*
Godot: I'm guessing the truth wasn't so sweet at all was it, Trite?
Phoenix: I know. It really isn't
Godot: Here. *hands Phoenix another file* This is how the kidnapping plot worked out
Phoenix: It says that the places were planned out, no people were detected and all evidences of the kidnapping were completely concealed
Godot: Do you know now how this happened Trite?
Phoenix: No, please explain why.
Dahlia: I will not allow this explanation to continue!
Iris: Hold it sis!
Godot: One, Who can know the exact locations of all the victims?
Gant: No, I will not...
Edgeworth: Face it, face reality.
Godot:Two, who knows the criminal mind and knows how it works?
Matt: Dude, please...
Adrian: Sorry, Matt.
Dahlia: And three, who can conceal all the evidences?
Phoenix: Now I know how this all happened.
Judge: I hope I'm not too late.
Chapter 11:In the works.
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I read Chapter 9, and I was like "OMG, this could be the best Phoenix X Dahlia fic EVER if it stopped there: I mean, Dahlia goes through the trouble of allying herself with the villains, kidnapping people, only to get to Phoenix who wouldn't leave her mind for an instant even in the afterlife, and then kiss him..." or something of the sort. But of course, I imagined that would never proceed. I see that you made a good plot-twist and I liked the reference to the Yatagarasu. Very nice work there.
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Thanks for the compliments :godot: I told you I won't let you down with the surprises I was going to give. :karma:
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I kinda don't understand the last chapter... the Yatagarasu bit. How is that related to the kidnappings?
But it's still a great surprise! :redd: I hope the next chapter will explain everything.
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I was planning on using an AAI group reference that shows how they did the kidnappings without flaw or errors. Yes, the next will be the 2nd to the last chapter I think
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Chapter 11 is here! (Contains Logic usage)
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Chapter 11: Knife's Edge
Phoenix: Of course, you're not Your Honor.
Judge: Well, why don't we know who the real killer is so we can no longer have a trial.
Iris: Please sis, confess the truth now so all of this madness can be resolved.
Dahlia: I-i-I can't.
Edgeworth: Gant, what ave you done to her? Why can't she confess?
Gant: Oh, you don't know yet? I implanted a chip on the vials liquid which will stick to her neckl. I have control on whether to kill her or shock her.
Phoenix: Where is that remote?
Gant: In here. And it is waterproof too.
Edgeworth: Gant, why do this?
Gant: She is nothing but a disposable pawn in my arsenal.
Dahlia: I WAS A PAWN?
Gant: Yes, now be quiet. *pushes zap button*
Dahlia: GAAAAAH! *zaps*
Phoenix: Your Honor. Can't you do anything about this?
Judge: I don't know what to do here.
Godot: Trite, You must do the confessing yourself. Tell the judge of all the facts behind this madness.
Matt: Oh Mr. Wright dude, if you fail to deliver a credible confession. Everyone in this warehouse will get poisoned except you, me and Gant. So are you ready?
Phoenix: Yes, I am.
Judge: Alright, what is it that you have to say?
Phoenix: (I must think carefully of the facts in here.)
Regina: Mr. Lawyer, we still don't know who the kidnapper is. Logic: We still don't know the kidnapper is. Who can this be?
Dahlia: Think about the directives card. Do I look like I can write something in that kind of language? Logic: Dahlia can't write a language like that on the directives card so who could?
Godot: Gant used to be a chief of police if you recall Logic: Gant used to be the Chief of police, How can I tie his former job to this kidnapping?
Edgeworth: The kidnapper must have known the places very well. Logic: The kidnapper managed to know the exact locations of the victims. Who could have done that?
Jake: The bandit also knows how to get past security system like me before. Logic: The kidnapper knows how to get past security. Who can do such a thing?
Lana: Gant used to sign documents regarding foreign affairs Logic: Gant used to sign Foreign affairs documents. How can I link this?
Adrian: Remember that Matt used to be a former criminal Logic: Matt was a former criminal. How can I link this.
Bikini: The kidnapper also did not leave any single piece of evidence behind. Logic: The kidnapper was smart enough not to leave any evidence behind. Who does this?
Godot: Also, the kidnapper has 3 defining traits Logic:The kidnapper had 3 defining traits. But who has this?
Dahlia: I am so sweet looking thatnobody seems to want to check me out. Logic: Dahlia is so sweet to deceive anyone into not really looking into her. How can I link this?
Phoenix: Guys, I thank you for the info you have provided me. Now I must concentrate and think.
Chapter 12:Almost done
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And at long last...CHAPTER 12 THE FINAL CHAPTER IS HERE!
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Chapter 12: The end of everything
Logic combining: 3 defining traits + unknown kidnapper identity=(The kidnapper was not one person but a 3-part group in reality)
Foreign affairs documents signing history + Unknown directive card's language=(So gant really was the one who wrote the message on the directives card.)
Phoenix: Gant what does it say in the directives card?
Gant: It says to make sure you don't get caught, keep no evidence behind and do it swiftly.
Phoenix: (It just proves my point)
Criminal history + Knows how to get past security system=
Phoenix: Matt, you are the one who can get across all the security
Matt: How is that so, dude?
Phoenix: Two words: Criminal Mind.
Edgeworth: True, with a criminal mind, he can get across the security like a real one.
Matt: Dang, dude. You got me.
Deception ability + single evidences were not found =
Phoenix: Dahlia please stop hiding the evidences just for the sake of Gant.
Dahlia: WHO GAVE YOU SUCH AN IDEA?
Phoenix 3 words, facts and logic. All you just do is charm your way out of things
Dahlia: Well... you got me (smiles)
Phoenix:(Another point proven)
Chief of police status + places were known beforehand=
Phoenix: Gant, it was you who knew all the places beforehand and where they were.
Gant: H-h-how did you know Wrighto?
Phoenix: Just some fact combining is all. Being the chief of police you could have known where the victims were.
Gant: I guess you are right Wrighto.
Edgeworth: Feel like shouting something, Wright?
Phoenix: I guess so. But first, Gumshoe, get Max's body and deliver it back here
Gumshoe: Yes, sir.
Phoenix: Now I can shout it out loud.
Edgeworth: Well then, go ahead Wright, no one is stopping you
Phoenix: Alright here goes...
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Phoenix I have found the answer!
Judge: Well, what is it you have to say Mr. Wright?
Phoenix: Here is what really happened: Gant who was watching the trial from his prison cell heard what Dahlia said before she went away. Knowing he needs to fulfill what Dahlia wants. He broke out of his cell. He got Matt Engarde for he had a criminal mind to evade all security. They escaped from prison heading to Dahlia's cemetery. They exhumed Dahlia's body, then they used the life vial to bring her back to life.With this they begin their kidnapping. Gant knowing where the victims were located. Matt with a criminal mind knowing the securities. And Dahlia with her deceiving looks can hide away evidences. Gant also committed the murder to pin the blame on Maggey.Well, am I right Gant?
Gant: Wrighto, you are absolutely right on that. I will not kill Dahlia as promised.
Matt: You figured it out Lawyer dude. Congrats.
*Gumshoe barges in.*
Gumshoe: Here is the body, pal!
Regina: MAX!! *cries*
Phoenix: Where are the life vials Gant?
Gant: On the table
*Phoenix picks one up*
Phoenix: Well, here goes *drops fluids in Max's mouth*
Max: Guh...ahh... Where am I?
Regina: MAX, YOU'RE ALIVE! *Regina is happy*
Max: Regina? Where are you?
Regina: I'm right here!
Max: Mr. Wright, I thank you for putting my killer into justice.
Phoenix: No worries Max.
Judge: Well, I don't think we will need a trial for this anymore. I find Ms. Maggey Bryde :not-guilty:
*10 minutes later outside the warehouse*
*Gant, Matt and Dahlia are being escorted to the police car*
Dahlia: I thank you Phoenix for saving me even though I was part of it. Allow me to show you my gratitude. *Dahlia kisses Phoenix again in the lips*
Phoenix: Well... er... you're welcome.
Lotta: That was a tad awesome, city boy!
Shelly: Fantastic work back there, Mr. Wright
Jake: That was a great performance there, pardner
Bikini: I have never seen thrill like that for a long time.
Maya: Nick! Thanks for saving us.
Pearl: Yeah, it was scary in there.
Franziska: Guess you're not foolish after all in rescuing us.
Ema: Thanks for saving us Mr. Wright
Lana: Yes, thanks a lot Phoenix
Adrian: We're glad you were there to save us.
Godot: Good job for once, Trite
Maggey: Thank you Mr. Wright, sir!
Regina:Mr. Lawyer, we would like to hear your famous catchphrase
Shelly: Yes, it's terrific. Come on.
Jake: Yeah, the winds are waiting to hear it.
Lana: Yes, come on let's hear it.
Gant: Come on, let's hear it.
Matt: It's awesome to hear it dude.
Dahlia: Yeah, Feenie. Come on!
Lotta: Yeah, come on! We are all dying to hear it!
Godot: It will be as good as blend #102
Bikini: Ooh, I'm getting goosebumps now.
Maggey: Come on, sir! Don't be shy.
Ema: Let's hear it Mr. Wright.
Franziska: Yes, it ain't foolish for once.
Max:It's going to be FABOULOUS!
Maya and Pearl: COME ON NICK. LET'S HEAR IT!
Everyone: YEAH! LET'S HEAR IT!
Phoenix: Alright if you say so... Here goes...
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And that ends this story. Before I give acknowledgements. I would like some comments on this. Thanks for supporting this.
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I read this, but I forgot to comment. Sorry. *A-hem* Anyway... you've done a pretty good approach, the story is quite interesting as a whole. I'm sure it took some time to assemble the idea into one story too, and you are to be congratulated, but... I don't know, maybe it's just me, but some parts are a bit confusing on that ending. ;_; Don't be mad, but I'll raise some questions.

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The first is Gant's knowledge of the victim's locations, and the fact he was delivered the life vials. It is true he was powerful enough in the force to be able to get that information, but how could he do this now if he wasn't the chief of police anymore? In the case of the victim's locations, maybe he could have thought of looking them up BEFORE he was arrested, but why would he? And this doesn't explain how he was delivered the life vials... I guess.

The second is: why exactly did Gant murder Max? I saw no reason for him to do so...

Lastly: why did Iris have the antidote for Phoenix? It's weird to think Gant let her have it for no reason... unless it was in case Dahlia herself ended up swallowing the poison unintentionally?


It's a cool story, bro... and somehow, it involved a lot of people. Good work. :phoenix:
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I'll tackle these questions, AAI style since it looks like an argument you present
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Rebuttal 1: He carries a tracking radar (much like Franziska's except this reveals the exact locations) post-arrest now that he has no power anymore. After Rise from the Ashes. He will attempt to mark all the locations of all the targets after each trial including the ones from Kurain and Eagle Mountain. The life vials were a secret request nobody knew. He needed those to exhume any dead criminals so he can order them around to do crimes. Remember, he is corrupt.
Rebuttal 2: All he just wants to do is pin the murder on Maggey since she was getting wind of the kidnapping plot.
Rebuttal 3: Somehow this idea was incorporated from an anime I used to watch. Wherein a fake heroine made the hero swallow a poison. But he was cured to the power of love. But I don't think that's how it really went. The poison had no effect on Dahlia because it was specially formulated only for Phoenix. Somehow, Iris managed to get the antidote to prevent the poisoning that her sister would have planned

That's my rebuttal. Sorry if I did not explain all these. Anyway thanks for supporting it and helping me out in any way you can. Have some cookies :cookie: :cookie: :cookie:
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I loved it! :godot: The ending was great! It had a nice twist... and I'm glad everyone is alive. :minuki:
I agree with Aliucon, you didn't explain those in the story. And how could Gant track people because he was put in jail earlier than Matt... so I still don't get that one.
I also think you should of included more about Maggey and her knowing about the kidnapping plot.
But it was an excellent story! :will:
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Sadly, I forgot to place those extra plot explanations in the story so...forgive me :payne: Anyway thanks for supporting it to the very last chapter. I'm glad you liked my story ending. :godot: Have some cookies. :cookie: :cookie: :cookie:
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Now I guess I have a firmer grasp of what happened. Well, thanks for enlightening those points. And thanks for the cookies!
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No problem. At least you understand now. The cookies were homemade too.
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Now for some acknowledgments so we can close this up. I would like to thank Clarouche for supporting form the very start. Especially Aliucon for the critical critique. And biel90 for at least supporting it. All plot twists and plot were planned by me. Phoenix Wright belongs to CAPCOM.
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And for one final post. Here is a deleted section of the warehouse showdown part.
Spoiler: Deleted part
Phoenix:What are you talking about?
*Dahlia moves closer to Phoenix*
Phoenix: Dahlia, what are you doing?
???: She's doing what I ambitioned to do.
Phoenix: What the?
Dahlia: Feenie, who are those two?
Gant: Are they your friends, Wrighto?
???: Of course we are!
Edgeworth: Oh god. Not her again
Oldbag: EDGEY-POOOOOOO!
Larry: Phoenix, what's up?
Phoenix: Um, Larry...what are you doing here?
Larry: Oldbag here has got her eye on Edgey. So I decided to tag along and see if I can see you.
Phoenix: Define "got an eye on Edgeworth"
Larry: She's got a radar. To track down Edgey.
Oldbag: Oh...Edgey-poooo! How I've missed you!
:holdit:
Edgeworth: GO AWAY!
Oldbag: You are telling me to go away! Well let me tell you something. I traveled for how many hours just to see where you are, yet you keep ignoring me and playing hard to get. you know how that makes me feel. Its like that one time when
Gant: Please...anyone... STOP THIS RAMBLING!
Matt: On it. *reveals gun*
Oldbag: Oh so now you've got a gun. Well listen here. I would sacrifice my life to be with Edgey-poo. But you just want me to die. With a modern weapon which I don't even know how to wield. When I was young... I never got into any fights and
Matt: DANG IT! She just won't shut up.
Dahlia: Allow me. *becomes her demented self*
Oldbag: You think you can just go around and make me scared of you? Well, I used to be in my best dress way back then and everyone stood there frozen. I thought of that they were shocked in awe but all they just did was stand there frightened by my dress' flashiness and
Dahlia: Gah! She's a human walkie-talkie.
Edgeworth: No power on earth can stop HER mouth.
Phoenix: I can't believe I'm saying this again...
Everyone: When something smells, it's usually the BUTZ!
Larry: But... why everyone against me?
Edgeworth: Gumshoe... arrest her.
Gumshoe: But why sir?
Edgeworth: For being extremely annoying. And Larry. Go home.
Oldbag: But Edgey-poo!
Gumshoe: Sorry palette. Orders are orders *snaps on handcuffs*
Oldbag: EDGEY-POOO! I don't know why you are doing this but I promise you, you will love me! Like that time when I was in junior high and many guys liked me so much that they all wanted...
Everyone:BE QUIET!!! *Oldbag is silent*
Edgeworth: Well that was inconvenient.[/b]
I deleted this part because it has absolutely no connection with the plot whatsoever. But it's good for lols
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XD I love the last chapter. Oldbag + Edgey = Win. Her ramblings are quite funny, too... :godot:
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Haha. Glad you liked my little extra I put in :karma:
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