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The rise of a defence attorney (may include spoilers)Topic%20Title

Sup

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Location: Canada

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The adventures of Issac Nickels begens his quest on becoming a defence attorney but the road isn't as easy as it seems...



please rate from 1-10 with 10 being the highest and tell me how you think of it so i can make changes if i have to
notes
*= spelling /grammer mistakes
**= profiles
***= evedince* (exculuding profiles)



Spoiler:
Two men were fighting. One with a gun, the other without. There fists collided* and the one of the men drew there gun.
???: Going to kill me? Even after i saved your life?!
BANG it all ended there



October 10 2026
10:00 am
Testing Court Lobby 3



???: (Hi. My name is Issac Nickles and I'm one of the few chosen to take the bar exam to become a defence attorney. Those who passed the written test get to take the practical exam.)
Issac: (If i pass this then i get my badge and join a law agentcy* and the prossucuter* i'm facing fails. But if i don't win...)

Baliff: Mr. Nickles, please proceed to the court room. The trial is about to start.

Issac: Alright defence attorney badge, here i come!


October 10
10:05 am
Test Court Room 3




Judge: The Test Trial of Larry Butz is now about to began. Is the defence ready?

Issac: Yes your honor. (Actually, i have no piece* of evedince* at all. The defence was told to start off with no actual evedince* which sucked alot.)

Judge: Is the prosecution ready?

???: Of course your honor .

Issac: (The prosecutors name is Terry Hawks. Though everyone calls him a prodegy. Rumors are that he passed the written test with a perfect mark. This is going to be one tough test trial.)

Judge: Very well. Please began your opening statement.

Hawks: With pleasure. Larry Butz, a 33 year old man was arrested for murduring a 45 year old man by the name Micheal Von Karma, whose profession was a defence attorney. The cops arrested him since he was the only person at the crime sceane*.

**Larry Butz profile added to court record (details include: gender: male, age: 33 profession: none)**

**Micheal Von Karma profile added to court record (details include: gender: male, age 45, profession: Defence Attorney )**



Hawks: We found a bullet in the victims body.

Judge: The court allows this as evedince*.

***Bullet added to the court record***

Judge: Anything else?

Hawks: There is the revolver he used.

:objection:

Issac: [slams fist on wall] You can't say HE used it. You still have no proof!

:objection:

Hawks: Please examine the revolver if you would. Here, take this fingerprint scanner to.

Issac: Are you saying my clients fingerprints are on it?!

Hawks: You catch on fast.

***Revolver is added to the court records (details include finger prints of Larry Butz)***

***Fingerprint Scanner added to the court records***

**Micheal Von Karma profile updated in the court records('killed by revolver')**


Hawks: The prossicution* would like to call up a witness.

Judge: Very well, though the verdict will be pretty easy to find out.

???: Hello there!

Hawks: Name and occupation please.

???: Gladly. My name is Richard White. My occupation is world domana- gardening.

Issac: ...

Hawks: Please testify about what you witnessed.

White: Gladly.

Issac: (There has to be a contradiction some where. I just know it!)


:testimony:
So the truth must always be told right?

So I'm going to tell the truth to bring justice to the man!

And the truth?

I saw that man, your client, Larry Butz murder Mr. Von Karma!


Issac: ... (he's not giving alot of info, is he? Now if someone didn't give contradictions i was to press right)

Judge: Very well, Mr. Nickles you may began your cross examination.


REBATTULE
:examination:


:testimony:

So the truth must always be told right?

So I'm going to tell the truth to bring justice to the man!


:holdit:

Issac: Err, bring justice to that man?

White: Yes, whats your problem?

Issac: Nothing.

Hawk: May I suggest a penlty* for Mr.Nickles?

Issac: Wha- No!

Judge: Pressing statements that aren't related to the case will cause you to get penilized*.

Issacs Penalty Bar Has 10 segments-1=Issacs Penalty Bar is Now 9 segments

Issac:(darn it, got be more careful!)

White: Nice try attorney.


:testimony:

And the truth?

I saw that man, your client, Larry Butz murder Mr. Von Karma!


:holdit:

Issac: How did the murder look like?

White: Well, I saw to men. And one of them grabbed the revolver in there pocket and... oh dear

Judge: Is this importent Mr.Nickles!

Issac: Of course its importent! Oh and Hawks?

Hawks: Yeah?

Issac: Who owned the revolver?

Hawk: Von Karma owned the revolver. During the struggle, he shot at the defendent but missed. Then he dropped the revolver after that.

Issac: Then it could have been self defence!

Hawk: Nope, 'cause the witness saw him attempt to strangle Von Karma. So it was self defence for Von Karma.

Issac: Darn it! (Thought I could make something of it, I need to think this through), the defence requests a 10 minute reccess!

Judge: Very well, we will break for 10 minutes.

To Be Continued...
Re: The rise of a defence attorney (may include spoilers)Topic%20Title

Sup

Gender: Male

Location: Canada

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Thu Aug 11, 2011 1:09 pm

Posts: 10

well, the case 1 will be finished sometime today or tommarow and i'll have a name for it by then, i'm thinking turnabout test but i'll think a bit longer.

tommarow spelling/grammer mistakes will be fixed

and thats about it
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