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The main problem I had with the ending scene was that I didn't think the dialogue felt natural. I remember that while writing it, I kept thinking, "Who talks like this?" That said, the alternative scene was Ema discovering her passion for science by watching Rick and Morty, so the finished product probably wasn't the worst idea.
Maybe I'll write that later just for the heck of it...Anyways, thanks for reading!
EDIT: Eh, screw it.
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