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Hello. I've seen a bunch of writers make a fanfiction thread, and I've decided to do the same. It's all posted on Objection Fanfics, if anyone else goes there, but I'm hoping to get a few more readers.

Here 'goes.

EDIT: Hi, guys! I'm back. I won't be on as much anymore, but I'll try to update all of my stuff soon.

Pointless Oneshots and Shortfic

Catching the Bus: Phoenix is late for a trial, and must make a mad dash to the bus stop.

My Peeps: Edgeworth's search for that famous candy. Franziska/Edgeworth loosely implied. My personal favorite.

Rainfall: Sad, angsty little thing I pounded out on a rainy day. Implied Diego/Mia and Phoenix/Mia, spoilers 3-4 and 3-5, slight AU.

Autographed Photograph: Ema's childhood hero. Just a short oneshot.

Mochaccino: Miego fluff written for a prompt. No spoilage.

Once Forgotten: My first fic! A quick look at a day in the von Karma household. Funnier than it should be.

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Slightly Longer Matters

Taming a Wild Mare: Light Franziska/Edgeworth. Unfinished threeshot that will remain unfinished. Too many people are dead-set against this, and I find myself uninspired to write the rest.

An Interview with Godot: Exactly what it sounds like. Godot/Mia, Diego/Mia implied. Spoilers for all of T&T, especially 3-4 and 3-5. Finished twoshot.

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Reviewers will be glomped.
Pairings: Miego, FeenRis, EdgeyFran, KlavEma, CloTi, Zerith, Vincrecia.
Just a note, all: I haven't been on in a while, so I'm trying to get my little persona here back in order. I won't be on as much in the future, maybe a few times a week. Sorry!


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I read the interview with Godot one ^^ I can't remember if I reviewed it or not... And I read My Peeps. That was really good ^o^
<< >> If you write a fic with just Diego and Mia in it, I'll love you forever... and add it to a ff.net community...
I can't believe I've stooped to bribing various authors to get my OTP fix >.<
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Don't worry. I share your burning desire to write Miego - it shall be done! And, thank you.
Pairings: Miego, FeenRis, EdgeyFran, KlavEma, CloTi, Zerith, Vincrecia.
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Hahahah!! I await it with baited breath! You keep writing, I'll keep reviewing ^___^
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Good Miles/Franziska fics! I like what you've got going here. Right now I'm a bit occupied with Crime and Punishment, but I suspect you'll be a bit of a formative influence on my work in this domain when I start it.
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Hm. If you're intending to pair off Fran and Miles, I think you should probably spend more time exploring how and why their feelings are changing. Part One of "Taming" is extremely heavy on the brother/sister thing and then suddenly they're looking at each other with new eyes. I tend to think that if they had been regarding each other as brother and sister for over 15 years up until this point there might be more introspection and consideration required about how this has changed. Just my two cents.

It's not a pairing I like generally as I do regard them as completely a sibling couple regardless of legal paperwork. But I've read good birth-sibling incest fic before and it doesn't bother me as subject matter provided the case is clearly made. While I accept that they are not birth-siblings they have been raised as brother and sister for certainly almost as long as Fran has been alive so I still think you need to take the time to make the case as it is a huge mental leap for them both I would think.

I'm also not sure Miles would be that clumsy around Fran generally. To my mind she's one of the few people that actually he can relatively be himself with as she has seen him grow up. I would imagine that would be part of the attraction to him, in fact, given the way you're writing him.

Poor Manfred. He's quite the ogre here. :godot:
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I don't support that pairing quite as much as I used to. Miego is much, much easier to justify, and I may not finish TAWM.

Still, thanks for all of your comments. It's nice to know that my fics are being read!
Pairings: Miego, FeenRis, EdgeyFran, KlavEma, CloTi, Zerith, Vincrecia.
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Also, Miego is fun XD If I could get my head round Diego I would try it myself but his patterns of speech and bizarre metaphors don't come naturally to me at all.
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Trust me, I have sympathy for you.

As difficult as Godot was to accurately imitate, I found Franziska, despite the fact that she is one of my favorite characters, almost impossible. As awesome a character as she is, she's essentially my opposite, and I STILL can't get rid of her lingering OOC in my fics.

Thank God for caffine and Thesaurus.com.
Pairings: Miego, FeenRis, EdgeyFran, KlavEma, CloTi, Zerith, Vincrecia.
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Yeah, Fran is tough to write if you need to make her more human than caricaturish. It's not helped by the fact that a lot of her screentime is on the silly side.

I had to rope in back-up to write an argument between her and Miles in my ongoing as I couldn't make her work at all. I admire those who can pull off her character perfectly. Same goes for Larry actually who's another problem area for me.

Someone wrote me a Young Miles/Diego fic that was PERFECT and I just know I'll never get that good with Diego. Sigh.
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I'm rather lucky in the sense that Diego comes far more easily to me, but, as I hail from the darkness of the Horror genre, I find ANYTHING involving romance a bit difficult. Still, I'm getting better, and I plan to attemp a pre-mortum Miego in the near future (after a few angsty things, finishing the above fics, and a series about blind dates and crack pairings).
Pairings: Miego, FeenRis, EdgeyFran, KlavEma, CloTi, Zerith, Vincrecia.
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I can give you romance help :edgy: It's kinda my niche that I read/write when it comes to fanfiction ^_^
Lemons on the other hand... that might take some doing...
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Oh, no no no.

DID NOT mean it that way.

I'll get better on my own, but thanks. <3
Pairings: Miego, FeenRis, EdgeyFran, KlavEma, CloTi, Zerith, Vincrecia.
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Hahahahahahaha, that's too bad :3 XD
Seriously, though, if you need help with Diego's voice, just let me know ^^
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Nope, I'm really good, thanks. 0_o;
Pairings: Miego, FeenRis, EdgeyFran, KlavEma, CloTi, Zerith, Vincrecia.
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I scared you, didn't I...
I was only kidding, pal... :sadshoe:
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...Yeeeeaaaah.

I really don't want to know how one would teach someone else to write lemon.

Teacher: Hello, class. Please [censored] and remove [censored] from your [censored].
Pairings: Miego, FeenRis, EdgeyFran, KlavEma, CloTi, Zerith, Vincrecia.
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XD I was thinking more "Cruel Intentions" style myself.
Of course, you could just read a whole lot of it...
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Eh, I dislike PWP.

It's not really fiction; just another vessle for pr0n.
Pairings: Miego, FeenRis, EdgeyFran, KlavEma, CloTi, Zerith, Vincrecia.
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I agree to a point. I have actually read some where there was a lot of plot, build up, and general development of the characters before anything happened. Those are great, if well written. PWP... eh, not so much. I suppose it could be alright, if it gave background or something, otherwise... eh.
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Yeah. I don't mind Pr0n with Plot as much.
Pairings: Miego, FeenRis, EdgeyFran, KlavEma, CloTi, Zerith, Vincrecia.
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I loved Rainfall. So...so beautiful. :acro: You have talent. Well done and keep up the good work :godot:
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Thank you...:larry:

I saw your review on Objection. <3 A few Miego things are coming soon... So yeah.
Pairings: Miego, FeenRis, EdgeyFran, KlavEma, CloTi, Zerith, Vincrecia.
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Sw33t! I can't wait to read them. I wonder...what motivates you to write fanfiction? I've wanted to write fics ever since PW1 but i just can't bring myself to do it.
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Well, writing has always been my thing. I have never been able to draw well, so, when I was a little kid, I had to find a different way to tell stories. It comes naturally to me, like athletics come easily to others (I still can't do a pull-up).

I got off lucky. A lot of people study for years before they start writing, and I pity them. But, I think you should go for it! I mean, look at my first fic. It's awful. Yet it's my most-liked story on Objection. You'll never know how good you are until you try.

Now, I suffer from disabling writer's block, so this may not help, but when I want to write something...

Sad? Crank up the tearful tunes. If I can get into the character's mind, y'know, feel what they would've felt... It's a rare experience.

Funny? Hang out with my friends. They're hysterical, and put me in a good mood so a crackfic doesn't turn emo.

Ohh, it seems I've ranted. -shot-

Hope this helps, and I'd love to read it!
Pairings: Miego, FeenRis, EdgeyFran, KlavEma, CloTi, Zerith, Vincrecia.
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THATS IT! Im gonna quit procrastinating and write me a fanfic. You've inspired me :edgy:
Its gonna take me a while seeing as i have the imagination of a wet flannel
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Nonsense. You like Miego, right? <3

I usually start by picking a setting. From there, it tends to write itself.

Good luck.
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Hey Graph, thanks for the kind words on OBJECTION!
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Good stuff - never really thought much about reading AA fic as of late, but then again when done well, it's quite freaking good.

You have a good style going, and I could read plenty more...

as a Writer myself by nature and lover of the series, I've personally got a burning desire to write a little Godot/Mia Fic myself, because I'm continually told that I've been able to capture the essence of Diego well in Rp, and have always wanted to take a crack at something like that...

Heck, who knows - only gonna take copious amounts of Coffee, a few too many listenings to Godot's theme, a little inspiration and a whole lotta luck to be in the right place at the right time when I start writing something, heh.

(Ha - I can still hear the bitterness calling me to arms even now, heh...)

Miego - the sweetest, bitterest drink...and perhaps, simply the most addictive too.

Will be awaiting more of the same! :godot:
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Glad you liked it, Stark. Moar Miego's on my list o' things to do.
Pairings: Miego, FeenRis, EdgeyFran, KlavEma, CloTi, Zerith, Vincrecia.
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Graph, your fanfiction is some of the best I've read. They're funny (or in some cases, well portrayed as dark and dismal), but in any case, addicting.
Heck, if I could read 17 of your fanfictions per day, I would.
Keep going! <3

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...Meep.

((Where did that come from...?))

Um. Thanks, Teef... :nick-sweat:
Pairings: Miego, FeenRis, EdgeyFran, KlavEma, CloTi, Zerith, Vincrecia.
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UPDATED: Haze.

(Will someone please tell me how to edit the topic title...?)
Pairings: Miego, FeenRis, EdgeyFran, KlavEma, CloTi, Zerith, Vincrecia.
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Ah...editing the topic title? I just learned that recently myself. You edit the first post in the thread. To alter the title, change the text in the "Subject" line. Presto! New title!
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You write some fun things, Graph. I'll have to read some more (only read Catching the Bus thus far I'm afraid) when I get a chance.
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Thanks! Been having a bit o' writer's angst lately; it's nice to have a review or two.
Pairings: Miego, FeenRis, EdgeyFran, KlavEma, CloTi, Zerith, Vincrecia.
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Just read Rainfall, kitten. :javado: Very touching. You just made me like Miego a little bit more. I just have one very minor wording correction: as Phoenix is male, he should technically be referred to as Mia's "protégé". It's extremely pedantic and people confuse noun genders like that all the time, but I thought you might want to know. Still, that was a wonderful story. You did fandom a good turn writing it.
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Nice work! "Rainfall" is my personal favorite. It was just so sweet and sad. "An Interview With Godot" was interesting as well (although you may want to check the link to it as it seems to take you to "Taming A Wild Mare"). I look forward to more stories.
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Writers angst happens to the best of us, Graphy. I'm glad I could perk your spirits, though Gregory completely on-uped me on the complements department. *fist waggle* Curse you inability to speak pretty without a pencil!

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