Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 6:06 pm I declare the trial of Gaston LaTarte open.The two parties are ready ?

Yes,your honnor

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

What happen,Mr.Wright ?

I forgottted to watch off my T.V. !! It's horrible !

I'm sure tat all will go for you TV.

Are you sure ?



Phoenix blow himself the nose

The defense is ready,your honnor

Very good,we shall can begin.Bugger,your preliminary declaration.

Do you know what he tell you the bugger ?

Sory,this retort was destined at the maggoty attorney...

Shut up ! Let's go Hunty !

Do confine this dotard old man !

Shut up everybody !

Then,the casualty...

ATICHOO !

Who did that ?

Continue

Then,I sayed...

ATICHOO !

MMMMMMMMMMM...

Renex I think that's enough now

I know,justely.

I absolutely loved your depiction of Edgeworth and Phoenix there. Finally a fanfic that doesn't rush headlong into courtroom action but prioritises characterisation and atmosphere. I think you nailed many of their personality's nuances spot-on. Edgeworth had such carefully written lines ("Then,the casualty...") that underline his hole as the series' tragic hero ("bugger"). The judge finally showed some guts, too, which I've always missed in PW ("Shut up everybody !" - I've always wanted him to grow a spine.)
This grand piece of literature is as captivating as a giant bald eagle shitting apple pies on a freshly waxed SUV is American or your great grandfather Seamus P. Flannery O'Reily, a professional leprechaun from Dublin, clinging to the side of the ship, singing Erin Go Bragh in Gaelic while chugging down gallons of Guiness, is Irish.

I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

Your sarcasm wins, sir. Here, have an internetz.

Last edited by Somestickguy on Fri Jan 25, 2008 1:04 pm, edited 2 times in total.

Ethed - have this Interweb, I am not worthy.

If you're not going to ignore a troll, at least do it with style XD

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Golly gee, it's good that you put posts on every freaking forum linking to this masterpiece, or we wouldn't have noticed.

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