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Spoiler: Riu Istina
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YES!! FINALLY FINISHED!! ...
well kinda, I like it, but I may need to clean it up a little

Spoiler: Franzy's sis
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:beef: :beef: :beef:

Spoiler: Trini Skye (old)
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Trini Skye: Ace Sidekick! (you get 3 guesses to where I got the name from)
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Spoiler: Udgey
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This one was for lolz, It's Udgy's sister. O.o

Spoiler: Ema Without her coat
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This might be the only good sprite here, lol. It's Ema without her labcoat.... The arms were impossible to do right ><#

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Spoiler: Samara Morgan
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..........7 days...........


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These aren't that bad.
The Girl-Fran-Feenie thing is a little weird though XD
and small >.>

I would just work on customizing them more, and work on the hair.
You can kinda tell to much that you just changed the color and put someone elses hair.
Keep going =D
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*tries to make pictures bigger*
As for Franny's sister (because that is obviously who it is) I know that it is weird, i was bored. The neck was really hard because Phoenix's head was wider than Franny's shirt.

I'm bad at hair..... :payne:
But getting better! :edgy:
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Haha, It's ok
I suck at hair.
UGH, it takes foreverrr.
Anyway, on the first OC hairstyle, a chunk of his shoulder is missing.
So uh, you might wanna put that on XD.
It's hard to desk slam with a bad shoulder =D
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:udgy: AH! You're right! *goes to fix it*
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XD no big deal.
I once did a front sprite of one of my Defence attorney OC's
And the hair color was different then the objecting sprite.
It was 2 different hair colors T.T
I was like, WTF.
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I like the new hair. It's less Apollo had some weird congealed DNA primordial ooze with the Butz.
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For some reason, it's coming out a little blurry.
I can see that you saved in .png, but it comes out strange.
Did you save in something else, then open it, and then save in .png?
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genodragon1 wrote:
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I like the new hair. It's less Apollo had some weird congealed DNA primordial ooze with the Butz.

I know the hair did look unnatural on the first one :payne:
SupwithyouSammie wrote:
For some reason, it's coming out a little blurry.
I can see that you saved in .png, but it comes out strange.
Did you save in something else, then open it, and then save in .png?

:payne: Darn, you're right.
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Ha don't worry.
Just do what you did again
It's good practice XD
Ugh memories *shivers*
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They're alright. Nothing special but not terrible either. However, the "female" Judge just looks dodgy. The hair looks more like a helmet, IMO. Try and adapt to the sprite to make it more natural. I also think the hair on Riu looks a bit odd (the Godot/Kaminogi-esque one), because there's a splodge of colour beside loads of shading. It takes away from the overall look of the sprite. The recolour's cleanly done though.
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Darzie P wrote:
They're alright. Nothing special but not terrible either. However, the "female" Judge just looks dodgy. The hair looks more like a helmet, IMO. Try and adapt to the sprite to make it more natural. I also think the hair on Riu looks a bit odd (the Godot/Kaminogi-esque one), because there's a splodge of colour beside loads of shading. It takes away from the overall look of the sprite. The recolour's cleanly done though.

The judge one was just for fun I did it in like 10 seconds so I don't really care
As for Riu, I making an updated version of him as we speak.
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Just a tip--try to cut down on white space in the sprites. That makes them look a whole lot better.
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Spoiler:
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That's really scary. XD
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And now, presenting the Prototype-finalized version of Riu Istina! (front-view)
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Riu Istina: Annoyed Attorney! I know it looks like a Edgey clone, but it took alot of work!
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Trini Skye: Ace Sidekick! (you get 3 guesses to where I got the name from) She's Riu's equvilent of Maya. Unless I come up with a better character.
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...Hopefully someday... xD

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Well...Kenji Bunshin looks bit fat...
Maybe it's cose hands are little bit thin or something... :yuusaku:
Ideas?
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Some constructive criticism:

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And now, presenting the Prototype-finalized version of Riu Istina! (front-view)
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Riu Istina: Annoyed Attorney! I know it looks like a Edgey clone, but it took alot of work!


Double-wide attorney. I dunno if he's supposed to be heavy-set, but it looks...I dunno how to articulate this.
- His right arm looks skinny.
- Shading is weird.

Riu wrote:
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Trini Skye: Ace Sidekick! (you get 3 guesses to where I got the name from) She's Riu's equvilent of Maya. Unless I come up with a better character.


- Nice edit! Although she would be a nightmare to be around for poor Riu...

:sassy: I like really like like these like snackoos like I like got like out like of like my like magic like panties like scientifically like speaking like.
Riu: Please...shut up...
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Some constructive criticism:

Riu wrote:
And now, presenting the Prototype-finalized version of Riu Istina! (front-view)
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Riu Istina: Annoyed Attorney! I know it looks like a Edgey clone, but it took alot of work!


Double-wide attorney. I dunno if he's supposed to be heavy-set, but it looks...I dunno how to articulate this.
- His right arm looks skinny.
- Shading is weird.

Riu wrote:
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Trini Skye: Ace Sidekick! (you get 3 guesses to where I got the name from) She's Riu's equvilent of Maya. Unless I come up with a better character.


- Nice edit! Although she would be a nightmare to be around for poor Riu...

:sassy: I like really like like these like snackoos like I like got like out like of like my like magic like panties like scientifically like speaking like.
Riu: Please...shut up...

THe shading was Hard! I had to use Edgey's body, Edgeworth's head from a different pose, Godot's hair, I had to get rid of the Cravat, put in a magatama, erase part of the sleeves. :sadshoe:
It was hard to keep track of shading
also, this is just a front-view-prototype-near-finished-but-not-quite version, hopefully the Attorney, facing-sideways (courtroom view) one will be better

As fo Trini, that's actaully what I pictured her to act like, only without the 'like's or the panties or the scientificlly part, basicly she just talks a lot. (And likes snackoos)
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I know, I know. I'm not even good at spriting. But I'm just trying to help out the best I can (which in the end, is not really much at all).
Btw...that was a magatama? I didn't notice it. I thought it was a weird bow tie of sorts.
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I know, I know. I'm not even good at spriting. But I'm just trying to help out the best I can (which in the end, is not really much at all).
Btw...that was a magatama? I didn't notice it. I thought it was a weird bow tie of sorts.

:sadshoe: You couldn't tell, oh well, it's supposed to be a secret anyways.... :yuusaku:
BTW I'm leaving for the next 2-3-4 days, to visit relatives, so I won't ve spriteing.... :payne:
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I zoomed-up these sprites and transparentized them....
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i cant help but say one thing...every time i look at Riu Istina for some reason it looks like his ear is partially cut of by his hair (maybe its just me)...other than that ive seen improvement...keep working at it Image
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i cant help but say one thing...every time i look at Riu Istina for some reason it looks like his ear is partially cut of by his hair (maybe its just me)...other than that ive seen improvement...keep working at it Image

I know, but those are the old versions anyway, working on the final copy as we speak.
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For the front view, you might want to use a Apollo sprite base...
Since in court you used Apollo.
You could send Jeti a PM requesting it, although she hasn't been on in a while.
Or you could even use the screenshot and clean it up.
Then if you want that pose, just edit the heck out of Kristoph.
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I think Jeti made it clear that Apollo is free to use, as long as you give credit for the base.
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You need to work on the Riu forward sprites, as Edgeworth has a totally different facial structure than Apollo which you based the forward and court sprites on respectively. It doesn't really make that much sense otherwise. I suggest maybe using a different facial base, reconfiguring the face to make it look simliar to the court sprite, or using Edgeworth as a base for the court sprite. The sleeves also seem slacker than they should be, you can edit these easily to make the more natural.
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Hmm, you all misunderstood, the forward-facing sprite is one I'm never going to use, it was just to try to get an idea of what the finalized version would look like, I'm taking it down once I put up the finished version. Plus the facial structure has changed to match the change in persanality, the original Riu was supposed to have basicly the same personality as Apollo, but then I decided to change him into more of a character who would say "Why the hell do you think I care?" With a straight (and extreemly bored looking) face.

(Now you have to wonder how he gets any clients.)
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So er, are you sticking with Apollo for the base as a court sprite?
Cause if you do, there is always the problem of "he is smiling" and such XD
But if you use Edgey for a courtroom base sprite, you will have to extend him since GS-3 sprites are shorter.
Especially the court ones.
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SupwithyouSammie wrote:
So er, are you sticking with Apollo for the base as a court sprite?
Cause if you do, there is always the problem of "he is smiling" and such XD
But if you use Edgey for a courtroom base sprite, you will have to extend him since GS-3 sprites are shorter.
Especially the court ones.

I put Edgey's head on Apollo's body....
Granted the head looks a bit large, but it still looks pretty good.

NOTE: I'm almost finished with the (hopefully) final-copy of Riu, i just need to
1. finish recoloring and all around editing his shirt
2. put some awesome hair on him
3. put in and fix anything else
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Ahh I see.
Well, can't wait to see it =]
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SupwithyouSammie wrote:
Ahh I see.
Well, can't wait to see it =]

agreed :D
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Riu wrote:
Hmm, you all misunderstood, the forward-facing sprite is one I'm never going to use


It's very easy to "misunderstand" something when you don't specify that it's a WIP. :/
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Darzie P wrote:
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Hmm, you all misunderstood, the forward-facing sprite is one I'm never going to use


It's very easy to "misunderstand" something when you don't specify that it's a WIP. :/

Sorry, :sadshoe:
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YAY!! UPDATE!!!
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Ema without her coat!! YAY!! The arms are a little messed up....
And where her arm meets her shoulder the shading is weird but I tried my best.
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O_O uhh....the only thing i have to say is.....where is her waist?
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IT WAS HARD TO MAKE!! SHE has a small waist....
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O_o ok ok....dude calm down! it was a joke!
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Oh ><#
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IT WAS HARD TO MAKE!! SHE has a small waist....


Jesus, calm down. I know it's hard to accept criticism but there's no need to react this way. Take the criticism and work with it. I agree with Ike, the waist is far too narrow. She might not be the heaviest set person in the world, but a person's waistline doesn't magically disappear once a jacket is off. Use the labcoat as a reference for her waistline and try and improve that. Secondly, I think that the shirt she wears under her waistcoat would have longer sleeves that you've drawn here. Maybe you could keep part of the labcoat sleeves in as far as the elbow (like it is in the sprite) and recolour it using the colours of the shirt you have, maybe extending the pallet a few shades. The arms, while they look slightly odd, look better everytime I look at them.
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