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Bam! Wait. That's a fish?!

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DefenceLawyer wrote:
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I have updates,
first a small revamp of my older pearl:
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Because it still looks like a Plucy...

...

Other sprites look good. I can't wait to see the final version of Proto Badger/

still? Is it the hair or the facial features?


Facial features. It still kinds of looks like Trucy.
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DefenceLawyer wrote:
still? Is it the hair or the facial features?

I think using trucy's parts to make an older pearl it's what makes her a plucy.
I think that she shouldn't have trucy's hair.
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It's your sprite, use what you like to make it :yogi:
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OniXera wrote:
I quite like Eion Ville's sprite. ^^

But, yeah, those white borders on some of those later sprites... :adrian:

Those sprites are terrible, I'm going to fix them all now.
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Ok then, I need as many people as possible to tell me how to improve this new sprite,
here's the original:
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and here's the recoloured one:
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please comment and tell me how to improve it. :will:
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All 4 buttons are at one side....
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.:looby:. wrote:
All 4 buttons are at one side....

... like kristophs?
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More importantly, the buttons are on the wrong side. We can clearly see that the right side of the jacket overlaps the left side, yet the left side holds the buttons; if the buttons were being used to hold the jacket closed, they would be on side of the jacket overlapping the other. Also, the pockets aren't in the same place on either side. One is near the navel, the other near the hip. The same goes for the vertical creases next to the pockets.

The variance in the width of the outline is also an issue, especially on the shoulders. It's thick and jagged on top, but thin and smooth on the arms. Some of the outlines, especially on the chin, have inappropriate right angles in them. The shading is also a bit off... It starts at the very tops of the shoulders, yet on the body it doesn't start until the abdomen. The lower pockets don't match the shading around them, either.

Finally, the sprite just feels lacking. It's fine if this is a Grossberg-caliber character, but your average prosecutor or witness has a fair amount of flair, or at least something that makes them stand out.
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Chesu wrote:
More importantly, the buttons are on the wrong side.


I'm sorry, this is what I meant xD
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Chesu wrote:
More importantly, the buttons are on the wrong side. We can clearly see that the right side of the jacket overlaps the left side, yet the left side holds the buttons; if the buttons were being used to hold the jacket closed, they would be on side of the jacket overlapping the other. Also, the pockets aren't in the same place on either side. One is near the navel, the other near the hip. The same goes for the vertical creases next to the pockets.

The variance in the width of the outline is also an issue, especially on the shoulders. It's thick and jagged on top, but thin and smooth on the arms. Some of the outlines, especially on the chin, have inappropriate right angles in them. The shading is also a bit off... It starts at the very tops of the shoulders, yet on the body it doesn't start until the abdomen. The lower pockets don't match the shading around them, either.

Finally, the sprite just feels lacking. It's fine if this is a Grossberg-caliber character, but your average prosecutor or witness has a fair amount of flair, or at least something that makes them stand out.

Thank you, I'll work on it right away :will:
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Oh, and another thing I forgot... If you really want those four buttons to stay, make sure that they all fit on the part of the jacket that overlaps the other side. Since, y'know, that's how buttons work.
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I'm kind of stuck here, what else can I do?
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I'd say move the buttons and overlapping section of the jacket to the left more, so that you can also move the pockets... Shade the collar of the jacket, clean up the collar of the shirt...

Stylistically, I have no idea. You could give him shoulder guards and medals pinned to his shirt, turn him into a navy hero... Heh. Sorry, I really don't know.
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Chesu wrote:
I'd say move the buttons and overlapping section of the jacket to the left more, so that you can also move the pockets... Shade the collar of the jacket, clean up the collar of the shirt...

Stylistically, I have no idea. You could give him shoulder guards and medals pinned to his shirt, turn him into a navy hero... Heh. Sorry, I really don't know.

that's a brilliant idea, thank you. :will:
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Ok then, how's this (new one to the right)
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and an example:
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DefenceLawyer wrote:
Ok then, how's this (new one to the right)
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and an example:
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EDIT:I've made a front pose for him also.
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also, does anyone know where I'm going wrong when animating?
It comes out clean when saved in PNG, but when I animate it:
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any one know what happens? I use photoshop elements 6.
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Probably because you used the brush or C&P some parts. on PNG those are transparent
Example:

Spoiler: PNG & GIF
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To solve that, I recommend that you make the BG transparent and open it on paint, all the white bits will shpw up.
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Auraion wrote:
Probably because you used the brush or C&P some parts. on PNG those are transparent
Example:

Spoiler: PNG & GIF
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To solve that, I recommend that you make the BG transparent and open it on paint, all the white bits will shpw up.

hmm... i've tried that, and that's how the PNG one is so clear.
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That's bizarre... I've never seen anything like that. What did you mean about the PNG coming out clear? Were the white bits there while you made the sprite? Give me a file with the sprites used in the animation and I'll see what happens when I animate them. Also, a bit of a critique... his blinking animation is scary. Why does his cheek move up to meet his eyelid?
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Chesu wrote:
That's bizarre... I've never seen anything like that. What did you mean about the PNG coming out clear? Were the white bits there while you made the sprite? Give me a file with the sprites used in the animation and I'll see what happens when I animate them. Also, a bit of a critique... his blinking animation is scary. Why does his cheek move up to meet his eyelid?

http://tinypic.com/r/nodm6u/5
here is the sheet, like I said, there's no white dots... is it the program I'm using?
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Okay, let's have a look...

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...Yeah, it's the program you're using. I use Animation Shop 3. If you're wondering why his jaw isn't moving much, it's probably because I didn't use all of the frames provided.

edit: Wow, six minutes from your post to mine... Looks like I checked the board at just the right time!
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Chesu wrote:
Okay, let's have a look...

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...Yeah, it's the program you're using. I use Animation Shop 3. If you're wondering why his jaw isn't moving much, it's probably because I didn't use all of the frames provided.

edit: Wow, six minutes from your post to mine... Looks like I checked the board at just the right time!

thanks a lot for your effort and advise, I'll be sure to credit you on the final product. :will:
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small update, after getting inspiration from this guy here:
:will: :godot: :karma: http://forums.court-records.net/sprites/raiho-kuzunoha-sprite-palooza-010-t18090.html
I decided to try some older AAI main characters, except gumshoe and miles look to old compared to franziska and... kay looks in her thirtys.
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These sprites... aren't half bad.
That topic on the other hand... :beef:
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Quote:
These sprites... aren't half bad.
That topic on the other hand... :beef:


Is the best sprite topic ever.
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Oh god, that topic you linked too made me laugh so hard.
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Spoiler Rules are still on.
The first three sprites have spoiler sprites on them.
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Auraion wrote:
Spoiler Rules are still on.
The first three sprites have spoiler sprites on them.

done.
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Oh god, that topic you linked too made me laugh so hard.

I know, Ceres must have been in a very good mood that day. :will:
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Edit: Whilst I'm here, I might as well post something requested by someone on deviant art, credit to blinq for the cammy base and ¢ħłөвø $ħөЌª for the.... female parts of her cammy, here we go, mature content I guess:

[url]dk[/url]why it was requested? God knows, lets hope it's a fangame.
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DefenceLawyer wrote:
Edit: Whilst I'm here, I might as well post something requested by someone on deviant art, credit to blinq for the cammy base and ¢ħłөвø $ħөЌª for the.... female parts of her cammy, here we go, mature content I guess:

http://www.glowfoto.com/static_image/22-060745L/7737/png/03/2010/img5/glowfoto
why it was requested? God knows, lets hope it's a fangame. :hotti:


Hahaha. No.
Just no. Sorry.
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DefenceLawyer wrote:
Edit: Whilst I'm here, I might as well post something requested by someone on deviant art, credit to blinq for the cammy base and ¢ħłөвø $ħөЌª for the.... female parts of her cammy, here we go, mature content I guess:

[url]dk[/url]
why it was requested? God knows, lets hope it's a fangame. :hotti:


Hahaha. No.
Just no. Sorry.

you didn't have to make to talking animations for it. :yogi:
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DefenceLawyer wrote:
34Chan wrote:
DefenceLawyer wrote:
Edit: Whilst I'm here, I might as well post something requested by someone on deviant art, credit to blinq for the cammy base and ¢ħłөвø $ħөЌª for the.... female parts of her cammy, here we go, mature content I guess:

[url]dk[/url]
why it was requested? God knows, lets hope it's a fangame. :hotti:


Hahaha. No.
Just no. Sorry.

you didn't have to make to talking animations for it. :yogi:


That's hilarious. Gumshoe has himself a good catch.
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OniXera wrote:
DefenceLawyer wrote:
DefenceLawyer wrote:
Edit: Whilst I'm here, I might as well post something requested by someone on deviant art, credit to blinq for the cammy base and ¢ħłөвø $ħөЌª for the.... female parts of her cammy, here we go, mature content I guess:

[url]dk[/url]
why it was requested? God knows, lets hope it's a fangame. :hotti:



you didn't have to make to talking animations for it. :yogi:


That's hilarious. Gumshoe has himself a good catch.

Ok than, to start off, the 'e' on my laptop is broken, so I have to use my phone, but when I logged in today, I saw those sprites and....
......*Hits head against desk*
...Tap, it's happened again, *sigh*
those sprites are not by me, it's my mysterious 'hacker' again, whoever it is has somehow aquired my password again....
...deviant art? really?
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update, I was looking at the official art today, and decided to make sprites of that awesome detective:
http://img186.imageshack.us/img186/1372/45418400.png
what do you think? If you like them I might make the whole crew.
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update, I've made some Payne co-council sprites
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Payne looks... a bit too big compared to the court sprites. And I'm sure that Payne's not that tall.
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Payne looks... a bit too big compared to the court sprites. And I'm sure that Payne's not that tall.

that might be the problem, he just doesn't look right...
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Happy easter everybody, I have updates,
GK bell boy!
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also, I was thinking of entering the sprite competition, shall I use one of my current sprites or make a new one?
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DefenceLawyer wrote:
Happy easter everybody, I have updates,
GK bell boy!
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also, I was thinking of entering the sprite competition, shall I use one of my current sprites or make a new one?


Amazing!!!!!!!!!
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I like your sprites! They're very good! Keep it up! :keiko:

DefenceLawyer wrote:
GK bell boy!
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Ha, ha, everyone loves the bellboy! Good job! :gant:

DefenceLawyer wrote:
Ok then, how's this (new one to the right)
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and an example:
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There's been something bothering about this one though. :yuusaku:
I think it's because the buttons on his jacket are too...straight? Usually buttons like those are at the front of the torso, not at the side like they are currently on the sprite. They need to be angled a little more.
That and his back is too straight. He's supposed to be on the chubbier side, right? His back needs to have more...fat applied to it. A little but more round.
With how it looks now, to seems like his body is shaped oddly. :think-pw:

I hope you don't mind the critique...:nick-sweat:

Regardless, awesome sprites! Keep up the good work! :pearly:
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