The cuteness of Neneko compels you <3
Location: Suomi, Finland, Perkele!
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Much like DEqu here said; not bad first one.
Personally I'd go with different kinda middle gray (meaning the color between the dark gray used to on his lower part of jacket and light gray on the shoulder/chest area)
not much different, but something bit more...gray like and less gray-brown like.
Also, the white sihrt needs editing on the chest area a bit.
The cloros change to bit darker ones, but then become white again soon after.
The lines on the bandages need some shade editing just like the hair and the beard jada jada jada etc.
That is a blooded...injury(?) btw?
If so, then I'd suggest (someone care to disagree with me) not making it exactly like that.
I mean, it has darker...ummm...what's the word again? Edges? Outlines? Sides?
...Whatever; it's brighter at the middle while other is darker, while it'd look better (again; care to disagree) if it'd be other way around.
Darker in the middle and changes to lighter/brighter the more it continues.
Okay, this is pretty much self marketing / self advertising, but I show an example with our "bearest
I suggest ya keep at this though.
*turns to others*
Strong the force in this one is.
Promising young ling he(?) seems to be.
EDIT: Oh yeah, I'll be here.
I've just more lurking these days, but I'm here.
..as a lhurkerrrrrrrsssssshhhshssshhhssshh...!
Last edited by Zinle on Wed Jun 27, 2012 11:28 am, edited 1 time in total.