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Author: | Hesseldahl [ Thu May 22, 2014 1:51 am ] |
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Hessehl sprites and stuff. Ask please before using something please? Also I'm really slow at doing stuff so yeah. Sprites Channing Fey(Animated by ApolloGrimoire) Spoiler: Margaret Jing(Animated by ApolloGrimore) Spoiler: Ali Care 2.0 animated by ApolloGrimoire: Spoiler: Henry Park animated by ApolloGrimoire Spoiler: Judge's grandaughter animated by ApolloGrimoire Spoiler: Extra Ema poses Spoiler: Angie for ApolloGrimoire and animated by him Spoiler: Cambrio DeLite for the competition "EVERYTHING IS RELATIVE" in AAO, got third place animated by ApolloGrimoire Spoiler: Young Spoiler: Teen Spoiler: DeMasque Mari Possa for The Sound of Music competition animated by ApolloGrimoire: Spoiler: Spoiler: Judge Junie Spoiler: Boo Kristal Spoiler: Alberto Quintero Spoiler: Apollo Justice front sprites Spoiler: Dual Destinies Edgeworth Spoiler: Dual Destinies Phoenix Spoiler: Edit of Rajin's DD Phoenix sprites Spoiler: Trucy DA Spoiler: Gretta Danllo (Animated by SuperAJ3,ApolloGrimoire and Novaraven747) Spoiler: Mae Mee (Animated by ApolloGrimoire) Spoiler: Malina Chell Spoiler: Maya Fey SoJ Spoiler: Aelia Senft Spoiler: Ema Skye SoJ |
Author: | ApolloGrimoire [ Thu May 22, 2014 6:35 pm ] |
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These are pretty good for a first attempt. |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Thu May 22, 2014 8:22 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Hessehl´s sprites |
ApolloGrimoire wrote: These are pretty good for a first attempt. Thanks! Do you have any suggestions? |
Author: | ApolloGrimoire [ Thu May 22, 2014 8:58 pm ] |
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I'm no spriter, only an animator. I can make these into gifs. (Will post them in this thread soon.) If you want some proper feedback/suggestions, I can recommend mercurialSK to you. |
Author: | Ropfa [ Thu May 22, 2014 10:49 pm ] |
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My thoughts: They're pretty good. Definitely not bad for first time sprites, especially considering that they've mostly been made from scratch. Recommendations: -You need to work on the arms and hands, especially around the shoulders and elbows. In some sprites, her elbow is a different spot on her arm than in other sprites. You need to make sure she's anatomically consistent (I'm looking at her sprite where she's holding the paper... She has almost no forearm in that one). Also, you should adjust the seams around her shoulders in a few of the sprites (specifically the desk pound one, comes to mind). -In a few of the sprites, she looks really thin. When she turns to the side, maybe thicken her up a bit. -What is her right hand doing in the sprite where she touches her face? It looks like it's shoved down her pants. I can think of more, but I don't have much time to write at the moment. I might add later. Good work so far. Edit: Those were all referring to Margaret. |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Fri May 23, 2014 2:58 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Hessehl´s sprites |
ApolloGrimoire wrote: I'm no spriter, only an animator. I can make these into gifs. (Will post them in this thread soon.) If you want some proper feedback/suggestions, I can recommend mercurialSK to you. That would be nice! How can i return the favor? |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Fri May 23, 2014 3:00 am ] |
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Ropfa wrote: My thoughts: They're pretty good. Definitely not bad for first time sprites, especially considering that they've mostly been made from scratch. Recommendations: -You need to work on the arms and hands, especially around the shoulders and elbows. In some sprites, here elbow is a different spot on her arm than in other sprites. You need to make sure she's anatomically consistent (I'm looking at her sprite where she's holding the paper... She has almost no forearm in that one). Also, you should adjust the seams around her shoulders in a few of the sprites (specifically the desk pound one, comes to mind). -In a few of the sprites, she looks really thin. When she turns to the side, maybe thicken her up a bit. -What is her right hand doing in the sprite where she touches her face? It looks like it's shoved down her pants. I can think of more, but I don't have much time to write at the moment. I might add later. Good work so far. Edit: Those were all referring to Margaret. Thanks for the recommendations! (I LOVE CONFLICT OF INTEREST) |
Author: | ApolloGrimoire [ Fri May 23, 2014 12:36 pm ] |
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Hesseldahl wrote: ApolloGrimoire wrote: I'm no spriter, only an animator. I can make these into gifs. (Will post them in this thread soon.) If you want some proper feedback/suggestions, I can recommend mercurialSK to you. That would be nice! How can i return the favor? A sprite of a OC, but I need to show you my works first. Done Channing Fey I had to add a middle blinking sprite for the last set. As for the sprite, I'll pm you with that in a moment. |
Author: | SuperAj3 [ Fri May 23, 2014 2:30 pm ] |
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Nice work! (I've seen these on dA as well!) Just Margaret's face when looking to the side is kinda squished in. Maybe don't have her face so flat, and a protruding nose, and round it out. Other than that, a great start to spriting! All those poses are good practice! |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Fri May 23, 2014 8:32 pm ] |
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SuperAj3 wrote: Nice work! (I've seen these on dA as well!) Just Margaret's face when looking to the side is kinda squished in. Maybe don't have her face so flat, and a protruding nose, and round it out. Other than that, a great start to spriting! All those poses are good practice! I have seen your works to! I really love your new Ocs, my favorite is Dimitri Thanks! |
Author: | mercurialSK [ Fri May 23, 2014 11:31 pm ] |
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Oh, I like your technique. The way your sprites are rendered is pretty nice. I'm a little confused why some lines are anti-aliased while others (the cords off Margaret's headphones, primarily) are uncleaned and not anti-aliased at all. Though one of her sleeves in the pose where she lifts a hand to her ear isn't shaded consistently with the other sprites. I would say that the most pressing thing to improve right now is anatomy - specifically, understanding of the torso. This problem is most evident in Margaret's objection pose. (There is also the issue of objection startups having one frame only instead of the two you have there, but that's a minor detail compared to her torso.) I look forward to seeing more of your work. :) |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Sat May 24, 2014 2:49 am ] |
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ApolloGrimoire wrote: Hesseldahl wrote: ApolloGrimoire wrote: I'm no spriter, only an animator. I can make these into gifs. (Will post them in this thread soon.) If you want some proper feedback/suggestions, I can recommend mercurialSK to you. That would be nice! How can i return the favor? A sprite of a OC, but I need to show you my works first. Done Channing Fey I had to add a middle blinking sprite for the last set. As for the sprite, I'll pm you with that in a moment. They look awesome! I just love it I really want you to know how happy i feel Send me as soon as possible the information of your OC please! |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Sat May 24, 2014 2:54 am ] |
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mercurialSK wrote: Oh, I like your technique. The way your sprites are rendered is pretty nice. I'm a little confused why some lines are anti-aliased while others (the cords off Margaret's headphones, primarily) are uncleaned and not anti-aliased at all. Though one of her sleeves in the pose where she lifts a hand to her ear isn't shaded consistently with the other sprites. I would say that the most pressing thing to improve right now is anatomy - specifically, understanding of the torso. This problem is most evident in Margaret's objection pose. (There is also the issue of objection startups having one frame only instead of the two you have there, but that's a minor detail compared to her torso.) I look forward to seeing more of your work. :) The thing is Margaret where my first sprites, and making them in Paint its some times frustating, i tried to use Gimp but i´m a little bit idiot using it. Thanks! I love your works too |
Author: | ApolloGrimoire [ Sat May 24, 2014 9:40 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Hessehl´s sprites |
You asked for it, Hesseldahl, you shall receive it. I had to do some sprite clean ups here and there, but it's all good. |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Sun May 25, 2014 3:09 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Hessehl´s sprites |
ApolloGrimoire wrote: You asked for it, Hesseldahl, you shall receive it. I had to do some sprite clean ups here and there, but it's all good. Thanks! Working right now in your Oc |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Sun Jun 01, 2014 10:18 pm ] |
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New sprites! |
Author: | athenacykes [ Thu Jun 05, 2014 5:24 pm ] |
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Mario! This is thena! ^^ I've yet to add my icon but its meeeeee I wanted to tell you that I really love the sprites and also could I throw some DA poitns your way for an aditional MArgaret sprite? I wanted to make her abreakdown one and I drew it out and everything but I like I said I don't do digital art. Anyway I wanted to say hi and nice sprites and all ~ UuU |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Fri Jun 06, 2014 2:23 am ] |
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athenacykes wrote: Mario! This is thena! ^^ I've yet to add my icon but its meeeeee I wanted to tell you that I really love the sprites and also could I throw some DA poitns your way for an aditional MArgaret sprite? I wanted to make her abreakdown one and I drew it out and everything but I like I said I don't do digital art. Anyway I wanted to say hi and nice sprites and all ~ UuU Don´t worry about that, im going to do that pose for free. Good luck Athena in Court records! |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Mon Jun 09, 2014 3:01 am ] |
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Preview of a character I´m doing Comment your thoughts about him and if there´s something wrong or things of that nature |
Author: | SuperAj3 [ Mon Jun 09, 2014 4:56 am ] |
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Hesseldahl wrote: Preview of a character I´m doing Comment your thoughts about him and if there´s something wrong or things of that nature Looks great! the lines are nice and smooth, and the composition is well done! I really like it! If you want me to give you some nitpick-y advice, would I be able to slightly edit this sprite and explain the changes? (If I put it into words, it'll sound a lot larger an issue than it really is, so showing you might be easier) |
Author: | athenacykes [ Mon Jun 09, 2014 3:57 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Hessehl´s sprites |
I don't know too much about sprites but the collar, some of the lines on it look a little too flat, I guess? IDK also, maybe make the glasses a little bit rounder in shape, or change the color? they look a little blah right now~ |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Mon Jun 09, 2014 9:21 pm ] |
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SuperAj3 wrote: Hesseldahl wrote: Preview of a character I´m doing Comment your thoughts about him and if there´s something wrong or things of that nature Looks great! the lines are nice and smooth, and the composition is well done! I really like it! If you want me to give you some nitpick-y advice, would I be able to slightly edit this sprite and explain the changes? (If I put it into words, it'll sound a lot larger an issue than it really is, so showing you might be easier) That would be nice! |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Mon Jun 09, 2014 9:22 pm ] |
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athenacykes wrote: I don't know too much about sprites but the collar, some of the lines on it look a little too flat, I guess? IDK also, maybe make the glasses a little bit rounder in shape, or change the color? they look a little blah right now~ I could change color but i don´t think i can´t make them rounder since the person told me to do it rectangular |
Author: | SuperAj3 [ Mon Jun 09, 2014 11:00 pm ] |
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I whipped this up last night, (just wanted your OK before uploading!) Here: Spoiler: Comparison |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Mon Jun 09, 2014 11:27 pm ] |
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SuperAj3 wrote: I whipped this up last night, (just wanted your OK before uploading!) Here: Spoiler: Comparison I really like what you did and thanks for let me use it! |
Author: | athenacykes [ Tue Jun 10, 2014 6:42 pm ] |
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I agree- it looks great, and I meant more like not totally rounder, leav them rectangular, but make them a little les... flat, I guess? Like regular glasses always have a hint of curve, or of shading, or SOMETHING. I noticed this with mragret's glasses too- eeryhting eles is super pretty and shaded adn stuff and then the glasses just sort of look like lines.... |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Sat Jun 14, 2014 10:39 pm ] |
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Finished case 2 defendant of Turnabout Attorneys Henry Park! Opinions and criticism is always appreciated |
Author: | ApolloGrimoire [ Sun Jun 15, 2014 7:34 pm ] |
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Gets better for you. |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Sun Jun 15, 2014 9:28 pm ] |
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HenryPark wrote: Oh, he's done? You didn't tell me... Nice sprites Hessehl! I am now confident that you will do a great job. I was going to, my bad Thanks! |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Sun Jun 15, 2014 9:29 pm ] |
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ApolloGrimoire wrote: Gets better for you. Thanks they look awesome! |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Sun Jun 15, 2014 10:36 pm ] |
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HenryPark wrote: Thanks Apollo! Hessehl, I just want to tell you that it is unsafe for you to post the sprites of Turnabout Attorneys here on C-R. The issue is that, people can easily use those sprites without permission and I don't feel confortable with that. Just make people know that "Henry" can only be used with my permission. But we can get promotion,lets just put a disclaimer ok? |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Tue Jun 17, 2014 2:26 am ] |
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Judge's grandaughter She has more idea in what she's doing than her grandpa Spoiler: My entry for the competition The Bright Age of the Law |
Author: | Nearavex [ Tue Jun 17, 2014 5:28 pm ] |
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She's so... small. o-0 |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Tue Jun 17, 2014 10:16 pm ] |
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Nearavex wrote: She's so... small. o-0 Mr.Nearavex, have you seen the evidence correctly? because if you compare the two judges THEY ARE ABOUT THE SAME SIZE! |
Author: | ApolloGrimoire [ Mon Jul 07, 2014 3:57 pm ] |
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Small and still beautiful. |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Mon Jul 07, 2014 11:00 pm ] |
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ApolloGrimoire wrote: Small and still beautiful. Thanks! But she can´t be compared to the beatiful sprites of our inmortal judge |
Author: | Nearavex [ Tue Jul 08, 2014 12:55 am ] |
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I commented on size, not on height. Contrarily to your argument, it would be fine, were she to be shorter, actually. It's size, not height, that causes problems. Given the proportions of the Judge's bench so far, I'd expect more something like this We shouldn't see too much of her body, since most of it chest down should be covered by the bench. If she's smaller, it doesn't make sense for her to be taller than Udgey and show more of her body above the bench as a result. |
Author: | Hesseldahl [ Tue Jul 08, 2014 1:32 am ] |
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Nearavex wrote: I commented on size, not on height. Contrarily to your argument, it would be fine, were she to be shorter, actually. It's size, not height, that causes problems. Given the proportions of the Judge's bench so far, I'd expect more something like this We shouldn't see too much of here body, since most of it chest down should be covered by the bench. If she's smaller, it doesn't make sense for her to be taller than Udgey and show more of her body above the bench as a result. |
Author: | Nearavex [ Tue Jul 08, 2014 1:43 am ] |
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*her My spelling is awful. |
Author: | ApolloGrimoire [ Wed Jul 09, 2014 4:44 am ] |
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Hey Hesseldahl, if you decide to fix the Judge, I'll animate them too. |
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