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Nice to see you clicked on my sprite form. Sprites rock.
*jazz hands*
Here are my sprites!
My Original Character.
My (kinda stupid looking) Neil Marshall sprites.
My Greggy, Feenie, and Sean front facing sprites.
Requests.
Also requested by a friend of mine on DeviantArt.Gifts.
Gift for Ace Pointer. 
Gift for Mijumaru. 
Gift for Backburner.
Gift for Tailsdoll6 on deviantART.Espella Cantabella Sprite. (Finished.)
Diego Armando Bench Sprite (Vastly unfinished.)
Some idea thing that maybe will get a full sheet.
One of my favorite characters.
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Oh and if you want to put smileys, use colons. Not to mention, animate 'em. No one wanna use any still sprites or like them lot. You can ask to animate them through the request thread. If you like.
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Oh and if you want to put smileys, use colons.
Sorry I'm so noobish to this.
But I'll try to do that.
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OMG! I can even begin to imagine what Mij (SuperAj3, a good spriter.) is going to do when he will look at your sprites!!
EDIT: Great that you learnt it abit faster. Good thing for a fast learner, right?
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- I see you used pure black for the outlines of the shirt in you fan character sprites : You should instead use a shade of dark blue, it'll look better
- The arms aren't quite consistent from one sprite to another : For example, in the deskslam one it's thin, but it's thicker in the objection sprite
- You use a lot the same head, you should try to change it (on the deskslam sprite for example, it could benefit from a more "determined" head that the current sprite has)
Keep practising and you'll definitely improve !
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I think your sprites look excellent! Great OC designs! Nice Originality!
I also like how the female character looks like Tsubasa from GK2, we have sprites of another dead attorney!
http://www.court-records.net/mugshot/tsubasa.png<- Tsubasa
Also awesome Neil Marshal sprites!
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I think your sprites look excellent! Great OC designs! Nice Originality!
I also like how the female character looks like Tsubasa from GK2, we have sprites of another dead attorney!
<- TsubasaAlso awesome Neil Marshal sprites!
Thanks!
So, you're the person who Ace Pointer was talking about!
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Also I see you updated with more sprites! Looking good! Can I suggest something? With Phoenix and your OC's sprites, move the move up a little, or give it some more definition. (It looks fine for Sean, just a pixel or 2 too low, but for Nick, look at his profile Icon's nose for reference: )
http://www.court-records.net/mugshot/phoenix.png
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Also I see you updated with more sprites! Looking good! Can I suggest something? With Phoenix and your OC's sprites, move the move up a little, or give it some more definition. (It looks fine for Sean, just a pixel or 2 too low, but for Nick, look at his profile Icon's nose for reference: )
Oh my, you're right about the nose.
Fixed
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Oh and Sean, the Gregory Front looks pretty nice. The only peoblem here is the Nick's front sprite. It looks... Kinda Ridiculous.
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Yeah, I wanted to comment that I didn't think the chracter looked like Tsubasa, but it just felt rude for some reason.
Also. No idea what the white suit is called.
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There are a lot of creative sprite components you've arranged in those bench sprites. Neat. I like the guy attorney's design. His proportions make him different from a lot of the attorneys around.
If you're looking to improve, I second Silver's advice. I'm going to quote and elaborate since it's really good to begin with.
Pure black and pure white are usually no-gos when it comes to non-sprite art because they make things too dark or too extremely bright. There are exceptions with sprites since they use greater contrasts, but at your current skill level I'd suggest avoiding them.
The values (contrast) between the shades in the shirts and the shades in the suit are different. I'm guessing they're both cotton? Then the shading colour you use in the shirt should be a bit darker.
Be careful with the arms. For some sprites particularly the objection pose, try imagining where the elbow is beneath the sleeve.
I can give you more advice but I disagree here (sorry Silver). You'll only improve if you're wanting to.
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There are a lot of creative sprite components you've arranged in those bench sprites. Neat. I like the guy attorney's design. His proportions make him different from a lot of the attorneys around.
If you're looking to improve, I second Silver's advice. I'm going to quote and elaborate since it's really good to begin with.
Pure black and pure white are usually no-gos when it comes to non-sprite art because they make things too dark or too extremely bright. There are exceptions with sprites since they use greater contrasts, but at your current skill level I'd suggest avoiding them.
The values (contrast) between the shades in the shirts and the shades in the suit are different. I'm guessing they're both cotton? Then the shading colour you use in the shirt should be a bit darker.
Be careful with the arms. For some sprites particularly the objection pose, try imagining where the elbow is beneath the sleeve.
I can give you more advice but I disagree here (sorry Silver). You'll only improve if you're wanting to.
Thanks! I already tried my hand at fixing the inconsistent arms, and I think I did well.
I also tried to make the outline more bluey.
And, I haven't been using pure black or pure white in any sprite I've made so far.
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Hmm. I updated the link.
Oh! Also, I changed the head poses for the Pointing and Deskslam sprites.
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Yeah, I wanted to comment that I didn't think the chracter looked like Tsubasa, but it just felt rude for some reason.
Also. No idea what the white suit is called.
Haha. I guess it doesn't. Her outfit in game is just a costume, but the face and hair reminded me of her. ("Looks like" and "is" are different things)
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Hey, thanks for fixing Prosecutor V. Ivan!
but few parts of the hair sorta look... weird. 
But since you did your best, I will probably use the new haired Ivan you made. Don't worry, you will be given credit for collaboration. Oh, and great outlining. @SuperAj3:
Looks like we both use smartphones... Pard'ner.
You're probably using an iPhone to post that. Am I Right?
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Hey, thanks for fixing Prosecutor V. Ivan!
but few parts of the hair sorta look... weird. But since you did your best, I will probably use the new haired Ivan you made. Don't worry, you will be given credit for collaboration. Oh, and great outlining. Thanks!
But you can tell me what's wrong with the hair, I'll try to fix it.
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Hmm. I don't get how it looks ridiculous...
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Explain what?
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Well, the sprite is exactly as wide as edgy's front view... Are you calling edgy fat?
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http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/forum/viewtopic.php?f=15&t=9894
Visit my Sprites page! I post regularly and whenever I finish a set that I am working on.
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Thanks!
Any Requests?
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Visit my Sprites page! I post regularly and whenever I finish a set that I am working on.
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Thanks!
I'm glad that my arrival to this site was well received!
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But I need to agree, Nick looks fat,even If those are Edgy poo proportions.
And in random practice, delete the Maya DA edit,I don't want to see you in problems because of that edit.
That's all, keep the good work.
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But I need to agree, Nick looks fat,even If those are Edgy poo proportions.
And in random practice, delete the Maya DA edit,I don't want to see you in problems because of that edit.
That's all, keep the good work.
Thanks for the feedback!
I removed the Maya DA sprite.
And I'm not changing Nick's front view, sorry. I think it looks fine.
Also, any requests?
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Also, Thanks for the gift! Forget that I said I'll explain something. The sprite is abit Ok.
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Just something with your line work, It looks really nice inside the hair, but then you transition from a lighter brown to black and it looks a little inconsistent. Try to blend your colours, even outlines!
And that brown-suited attorney with glasses on looks perfect!
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Just something with your line work, It looks really nice inside the hair, but then you transition from a lighter brown to black and it looks a little inconsistent. Try to blend your colours, even outlines!
And that brown-suited attorney with glasses on looks perfect!
OK. Thanks. I think I did OK on the espella sprite.
I basically captured footage from a youtube video, then removed the background, filled in everything with solid color, changed it to real in-game colors, added my own person color touches.
Then Shaded it. It took roughly 1 1/2 hours in total.
The Vest guy's name is Sean.
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What else I come up with, Eh?
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Just something with your line work, It looks really nice inside the hair, but then you transition from a lighter brown to black and it looks a little inconsistent. Try to blend your colours, even outlines!
And that brown-suited attorney with glasses on looks perfect!
OK. Thanks. I think I did OK on the espella sprite.
I basically captured footage from a youtube video, then removed the background, filled in everything with solid color, changed it to real in-game colors, added my own person color touches.
Then Shaded it. It took roughly 1 1/2 hours in total.
The Vest guy's name is Sean.
Yeah, I've done a couple of sprites like that too! (My Ryunosuke sprites)
I was talking about this sprite:
Is Sean on OC of yourself as a lawyer? Or just same name as in your username?
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Just something with your line work, It looks really nice inside the hair, but then you transition from a lighter brown to black and it looks a little inconsistent. Try to blend your colours, even outlines!
And that brown-suited attorney with glasses on looks perfect!
OK. Thanks. I think I did OK on the espella sprite.
I basically captured footage from a youtube video, then removed the background, filled in everything with solid color, changed it to real in-game colors, added my own person color touches.
Then Shaded it. It took roughly 1 1/2 hours in total.
The Vest guy's name is Sean.
Yeah, I've done a couple of sprites like that too! (My Ryunosuke sprites)
I was talking about this sprite:
Is Sean on OC of yourself as a lawyer? Or just same name as in your username?
OH! The brown suit guy! I don't believe he has a name yet, the person who requested it hasn't named him yet.
Also, yes, my OC's name is Sean.
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What else I come up with, Eh?
These are some sick sprites dude, thanks!
(In case you dont know, sick means good. Have a great day!)
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I animated them all myself.
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Anyway, I really like your latest sprites man !
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Nice to see you clicked on my sprite form. Sprites rock.
*jazz hands*
Here are my sprites!
My Original Character.
My (kinda stupid looking) Neil Marshall sprites.
My Greggy, Feenie, and Sean front facing sprites.
Requests.
Gifts.
Espella Cantabella Sprite. (Finished.)
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