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ときに雨が降る, ラヴミーはあなたですか? ON BREAK!!!Topic%20Title
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I will not be able to work on this comic for a while. I hope you understand! :maya:
Chapter 1:
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And a spolier from the next chapter:
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Enjoy!
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Too short to judge. Work on it.
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「エメラルドスプラッシュ」

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I see that you also use the D. Gray-Man backgrounds. Good taste. ^_^ Did you get them from the dimps-made sprite sheet? You should give credit whenever possible.
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Re: ときに雨が降る, ラヴミーはあなたですか?( When it Rains, Will you love me?)Topic%20Title
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Re: ときに雨が降る, ラヴミーはあなたですか?( When it Rains, Will you love me?)Topic%20Title
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You’re so small in such a big world...

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Oh, the suspense! Keep going with these.
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Oh my gosh! I'm sorry I haven't updated! the second chapter is almost done, I just need some sprites i requested. If anyone wants to speed up the process, here's a picture of what I need a sprite(s) of:
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I need a:
Smirk face, like in the picture
sad face
angry face
and regular face.
Thanks if you can help!
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I cant quite judge the comic yet but...What the heck is that girl?! And why is she in a pumpkin?! Or part of it?!
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Thank you Delsy for the Awesome Game Over Sig! If you're still here, I still love it!
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Game Over wrote:
I cant quite judge the comic yet but...What the heck is that girl?! And why is she in a pumpkin?! Or part of it?!

The pumpkin is a skirt.
She is a "Devil princess"! ^_^
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Like the others, would like to see a bit more... but in regards to your title -

雨が降ると、あなたはラブ・ミーの?/私が好きの?(ame ga furu to, anata wa rabu-mii no?/watashi ga suki no?)
... i'm assuming the title would be said by a girl, so i've used words like watashi/anata/no... and I guessing you want the sound "love me" specifically. While ヴ can be used to represent 'vu' as a sound, it's not really used that often, and 'rabu' is easily recognised as meaning 'love'. I've included another way of saying it, just in case... also because the first ver. doesn't sit well with me syntax-wise. (also, the first ver. puts emphasis on the subject 'you', and the second puts it on the object 'me').
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黒木香でゴザイマス。性の解放でゴザイマス。プ----ップ-------ッ…
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What is my liiiife?!?

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Name is really stretching the tables, so I'm shortening it to just the Hiragana name.
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Here is basically "Before" chapter one, but that is now the "Prologue"
Here is the begining of episode 1:
The Lovesick Melody of The Devil Princess!
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Comments and critz are helpful! Really!


CRAP!!!!!
I saved it wrong :larry: :larry: :larry:
Miss Suzumiya-san by Zinle :phoenix:
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You’re so small in such a big world...

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It's okay. This is a good start. As I said for the last one, this is a little too short, but it's good nonetheless.
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No moving mouths bother me. But JPG is excuseable.
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