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Go here, click Sprites, and she's at the bottom (because I submitted her the day before the contest closed
). You can view her (fully complete and comprehensive) set of sprite poses and sprite sheet! All animated, I'd really like your vote. </shamelessplug>
When wealthy and esteemed businessman Antonio Commerciante is found murdered in his apartment with much of his flesh missing from his chest, only one man confesses. The tradesman Sleale Shylock. An easy case for Katrina right? Well, everything is not as it seems, and underlying motives that seem simple enough but can mean the downfall of Katrina's case.
Intro Scene
Day 1: Trial
Scene #1: Good Morning Detective
Scene #2: Udgey's a Sucker for a Beard Compliment
Scene #3: He's Also Very Modest
Scene #4: Someone's Noticibly Absent from This Scene
Katrina Rainsford: Prudent Prosecutor is property of Big Corporate Things Inc.
Credits: Case Title Button by Greeny, Kristoph Sprites by Glace Leau & Me
It should go without saying that my superior in BCT Inc. has supplied me with a number of tools for improving the comic, espcially the logo. Thanks much Greeny!
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just 2 things: (1) You misspelled "Surely" (as "Surley") and I think you need a comma after that no in the first sentence of the first panel
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just 2 things: (1) You misspelled "Surely" (as "Surley") and I think you need a comma after that no in the first sentence of the first panel
Yeah, a friend caught me on that one, and I even thought I had changed that, I'll fix it later.
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just 2 things: (1) You misspelled "Surely" (as "Surley") and I think you need a comma after that no in the first sentence of the first panel
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It's about a prosecutor, right?
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Anyway, released chapter 1.
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Affection!
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I need moar! :O
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sprite comic style...
Though the secrets to 100% accurate text box and text placement
are, of course, not so easily obtained. *evil laughter*
So the prosecutor, eh? Sounds interesting. I wonder how you'll manage
certain things. Oh, I like how you conveniently mirrored the lobby. XD
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are, of course, not so easily obtained. *evil laughter*
*coughbluecorpcough*
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that of FE: AC (AA): Turnabout Renovation Scene #2.
Or, I could strike a deal to expand my empire under Big Corporate Things Inc.
I'd say
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sprite comic style...
Yes, because you were the first to use it../sarcasm
Looking good Perc, See you still didnt fix that spelling mistake....I told you....
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What do you mean.
EDIT: *pant pant* Ceres... Guess what... I just *pant* came all the way from
page 7 back... *pant* And yes, I was the first.
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Yay kindred spirits!!!! ^_^
And a female prosecutor? No wonder she chose Daryan... *cough cough*
Anyway, can't wait to see what happens in the case!
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Anyway, fixed the intro and added chapter 2.
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Anyway, I kinda don't get it...
Interrogator: Did you kill Antonio?
Sleale: Yes, I killed Antonio.
Interrogator: So you're guilty of killing Antonio?
Sleale: No, I'm not guilty of killing Antonio.
Isn't that kinda... explicitly contradictory? Unless he was saying that it was okay because it was part of the contract, but wouldn't Antonio weigh more than a pound?
I guess we'll find out soon enough
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Lol, pun.
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Lol, pun.
And it wasn't even intentional :P
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Though, just my opinion. D:
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In the game, there's only three lines per box, plus it's more
centered. That might help with reducing the text (it kind of
makes you automatically try to make your sentences shorter)
and it will look more game-realistic.
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In the game, there's only three lines per box, plus it's more
centered. That might help with reducing the text (it kind of
makes you automatically try to make your sentences shorter)
and it will look more game-realistic.
Yeah, there was something very wrong with the boxes other than that, but I can't figure out what...
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I'd say
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Perc, Don't snap at Dramatica like that, HE made a fair comment.XD
Looking good so far, keep it up.
edit: happy now XD?
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And nice one Ceres.
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I've re done both the intro scene and the first scene, and I'm going to be doling a good stream of updates.
So enjoy and critique!
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And I love that "What's a pound of flesh beetween friends?" line. Is that from something, or did you write that?
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i feel pretty
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Which song, and which play?
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Play: Merchant of Venice by William Shakspeare.
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ORIGINALITY!!! infinity/10
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Awesome.
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You still might wanna fix the manry neck tho =\
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