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Ryder Lexus: The Pursuit of Constitutionality WTF UPDATE 5/1Topic%20Title
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Hey everyone =D
It's been a while, but I finally got some of my Comic done =]
Eventually I hope to develop this page as much as my sprite comic.
If you want to go to my sprite page, click the Ryder
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Mmm, by the way, Constitutionality also means "Justice"
Tehe.
The slogan of the car co. Lexus is "The pursuit of perfection"
So well, you get it ahah.


Well then, anyway XD
I am ready to premiere my Sprite Comic.



Turnabout Supermarchè
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Defendent: Rayce Lexus
Victim: Albert Smiths
In Ryder's first case, he learns the ropes of being a Defence Attorney. Practicing on his own brother.

1-1 Whaddup with the Cantelope?
1-2 Meeting your Client
1-3 Your name is what?
1-4 Ha, I won!
1-5 Details, details.
1-6 So... what are they?
1-7 It's hard out there for a pimp.
1-8 We're gettin serious.
1-9 Faith and Prunes
1-10 He's So Sweet!
1-11 You are kidding... Right?



Funnies, With Ryder and Will
Me and Skeledude got together and decided to make a mini series about funny things happening in court or something. Will and his location is made by Skeledude
Ryder is made by me =D
BOOM!
Dear Journal

More to come soon =D
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i think i sh** my pants

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lol "the trial will begin in five minutes""great..."VERRY funny to me for some reason :eh?:
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Looks interesting so far, Sammie. =3
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No DSis in the courtroom please.

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XD Thanks =]
I'll have a page or two up today.
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and winner of the most unpronouncible sprite comic goes too...

I kid, I kid. This looks interesting, something I'll have to watch. Good so far Sammie, keep it up!
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Your originality is great! I love how you managed to perform murder in a shopping center! It's quite original. Also, I'm starting to like this "Father your mentor and brother your client" thing! Your originality keeps on coming!

I rate this comic:
WCTR

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alone...
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My OTP of OTP's. <3

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LOL, using your French knowledge for your comic titles? XD

Besides a couple of grammatical errors in the script, it looks great so far! :edgy:
Thanks to .•°٭blinq٭°•. for the lovely sig. ♥
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Haha thanks everyone =D
Your support rocks.

I got a new page up.
It seems there was a little mix up in court XD
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*scribble scribble*

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My favorite line: (from memory so it's not perfect)

Ryder: ..."Hello!"
Udgey: "Oh, hello my boy! When did you get here?"

Keep it up, though. You have an advantage right now because you're updating ;D It's cool apart from the grammar stuff.
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No DSis in the courtroom please.

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Thanks =D
I'm going to try to update a few times a week...
As long as I have the sprites XD

But anyway, about the grammer.
I realize I made a few mistakes.
Partially becuase I'm totally out of it this week becuase of exam, and partially becuase its how people talk.
Not just talking about Rayce XD
If you are really nitpicky and stuff, I'll fix it I guess XD
But thats just how the characters roll =D
Although, rereading it sometimes, I kinda go
WTF WAS I SAYING.
I'll fix that eventually ahaha.

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He loves his music

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I'm quite loving this. Very original and very funny! I can't wait to read the next chapter! :edgy:
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My OTP of OTP's. <3

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Haha. Nice, Sammie. XD Wouldn't it be conflict of interest to defend your brother, though? XD Ah well.

And if you need any help with the grammar or anything, you can always ask me. ^_^
Thanks to .•°٭blinq٭°•. for the lovely sig. ♥
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This seems pretty near! Just a little hint:
1. Try and get more poses for your characters!
2. When someone is speaking and the camera is on them, show a sprite with their mouth open. When the camera is on them but someone else is speaking, give them a sprite with their mouth closed. Trust me, this will make your comic look a lot better.

Also, use the PW font if you can get it. It should be in Greeny's sprite topic.
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Bad Player wrote:
This seems pretty near! Just a little hint:
1. Try and get more poses for your characters!
2. When someone is speaking and the camera is on them, show a sprite with their mouth open. When the camera is on them but someone else is speaking, give them a sprite with their mouth closed. Trust me, this will make your comic look a lot better.


Fix'd.

...meaning that there was nothing to fix.
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Haha, Sammie, it's awesome! And pretty funny too...that is part of the awesomeness, of course. XD

I did notice that Ryder was talking with his mouth closed too much...maybe he trained as a ventriloquist. :godot:

Just kidding. Please continue. This trial sounds like it will be awesome!
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The defense is So Zetta Slow!

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It's pretty awesome :D

But, my only problems are essentially what Bad Player said.

But, I'm interested in seeing the rest :keiko:
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Strawberry Wine is a very epic thing.

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Tehe!

"Is Mr Lexus in the room?"

"Here"
"yes"
"yes"
"fo shizzle"
"right here"
"yup"

"GAAAH THERE'S SO MUCH LEXUS!!!"

xDDD
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Avatar and sig made by the awesome Vicki, and Robyn sprite in avatar made by Sammy.
Thankyou!! <333
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Hey everyone =D
I took your suggestions, and I hope the new page pleases you =]
Theres open mouths, and more poses.
Kinda XD

I have another page ready for tomorrow ^^
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>> Nice family...

Now add Italian Background and you got a mafia! XD

But looks cool so far! Even though Ryder looks like in a pinch.
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lol Ryder's awsome XD

and I don't blame him for not talknig to his brother.
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Nice~

I like where this is going so far (lol at the "Don't you ever talk to your brother!?" situation).
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Yay! The open mouths look much much better!! ^_^

Also, I think there should be a sprite where his father is actually looking at him.... ._.
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New page =D
Haha He's a military man good sir ~
Always stands straight and looks ahead XD
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O_O

That person's the killer...?
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I have no clue what you just ment right there, but I think we will figure out the killer soon enough XD
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Soon enough...

so it was Ema...
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Imma likin' Rayce right now. Ryder seems to be the type who will have many "words cannot describe how screwed I am..." moments. Good work!

I am also convinced that Payne now has a wig. Not even age can stop the hair, it would appear.
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Haha, Ryder is just at a loss for words <3
And I'm not gunna spoil it Drammy.
Tehe.
O man.
TEHE.
Thanks Drammy =D


ALSO!
Skele and I did a little funny togeather.
We hope you like it =]
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*scribble scribble*

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I LOVED that comic (the funny.) The last panel=win.
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:haha: awsome! i love that one!
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Hahaha! OVERLOAD! XD
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Boku ITALIA~!

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Rayce is hysterical!! "Fo sho" LAWL! :gant:
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Page 6 is up =D
I sware this will get more indepth soon T.T
I'm just trying to study for my finals this week XD
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I actually wonder what they are too!. :P
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*scribble scribble*

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Vordox wrote:
I actually wonder what they are too!. :P


Little fried snack things that are sometimes chocolate-covered? :P

I wish you luck on your finals, Sammie! I have finals next week too ><
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That's all? I thought it was something good... *Pouts* :(

*Waiting for next sprite cominc*
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XD I just updated today!
Wait another day or two ahah.

Dude, that sounds pretty tasty.
Ima make some.
Like, I make this really good doughnut dough, so I think I"ll just cut up the dough, and fry it.
Then put some of my doughnut chocolate.
OMG TASTY.

OH MAN.
Idea for a funny XD
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Page 6= EPIC WIN!! :gant-clap2:
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yuzikichan wrote:
Page 6= EPIC WIN!! :gant-clap2:

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rock on and peace out everyone!!!

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They're great Sammie!
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