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Stephen is a rookie attorney at where else, Gavin & Co Law Offices. Yep, a new challenger appears in the OC sprite comic brawl. This story takes place in approximately 2021, two years after spiky hair got disbarred; therefore there might be spoilers for AA1,2, and 3. If it is anything major, I'll post a warning next to the case.
I'm also going to try to avoid any contradictions in the series.
Character Bios-
Smexy.
"Regal Relics" a local antique store is turned from a home for dusty chairs to a murder scene when a private detective is poisoned. Stephen must defend the CEO of Regal Relics against the infamous Rookie Killers son.
Prolouge: Scene 0:First Scene OMG!
Day 1: Trial
Scene 1: Krissy!
Scene 2: Fancy Pants Client
Scene 3: Screw being humble, I have cool hair!
Scene 4: Payne makes a point. Shock!
Scene 5: It's pronounced Tae-ah.
Scene 6: Coffee is a murder weapon, where have we seen this before?
Scene 7: Bit ahead of the game there Stephen. Just a bit.
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Made by me :D
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1) Make sure you colour match the Phoenix/Edgeworth hair. At the moment, they're two different grays and it's pretty noticable (at least, to a bunch of spriters)
2) When it comes to various Apollo poses, good luck with the Edgeworth hair :) My character Artemis uses Edgeworth's hair and it can be a pain to work with at times. Give me a buzz if you ever need help or anything.
3) Make sure you use all of Edgeworth's hair. You've cut him off by a few pixels. :)
I know, really anal things to pick at, but hey, you haven't given us anything else yet. >_<
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P.S. You wrote THREE suggestions, not TWO. Hey if you can be anal, so can I. :)
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If you want to send me his sprite sheet, I'm honestly quite happy to run through and fix up the colouring issues; it'll literally take me about 10 minutes and you're guaranteed to have a higher quality comic because of it. Lemme know either way, looking forward to seeing what you come up with! :D
I are the duck.
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WHOOOOOOOOOSH
That's the sound it made when the point went right over your head.
Mahaha. Anyways, go on, start your comic. I might let you join Bic Corporate Things Inc. Sprite Comic Division.
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WHOOOOOOOOOSH
That's the sound it made when the point went right over your head.
Mahaha. Anyways, go on, start your comic. I might let you join Bic Corporate Things Inc. Sprite Comic Division.
same here. also don't make me get the list out greeny!
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If you want to send me his sprite sheet, I'm honestly quite happy to run through and fix up the colouring issues; it'll literally take me about 10 minutes and you're guaranteed to have a higher quality comic because of it. Lemme know either way, looking forward to seeing what you come up with! :D
i will... when I get home, don't have my USB here at school.
Don't judge me Freakyalex! Also Greeny I think you mean "Big" not "Bic". Why is it I bring spelling screw-ops?
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Please, take your time. I will be watching!
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UPDATE!
Heh, that feels good.
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I'd suggest moving that bar down in the right-hand column so that the last panel doesn't have all that blank space over the hand.
Also, the spacing is on the text is a bit weird. I don't know why that is, or how you can fix it.
We didn't really have much visuals besides that, but the actual text seems fine.
Credit to Evolina for the sig+avatar!
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I'd suggest moving that bar down in the right-hand column so that the last panel doesn't have all that blank space over the hand.
Also, the spacing is on the text is a bit weird. I don't know why that is, or how you can fix it.
We didn't really have much visuals besides that, but the actual text seems fine.
I'll move the bar later, true it is not great.
The text, bitmap text writer's fault, switched to paint.net's text for the next one, which may be up today. You most likely, at this point, see a custom sprite(that I put effort into
) at the third or fourth scene.
I hate Klaviema >_>
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Other than that, good so far~
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Credit to Evolina for the sig+avatar!
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UPDATE
Also Bad Player, I may look for that... just not now.
I also apologize for the badly coloured thinking text, you can thank for my stupidity of making the text white at first.
Edit: Holy Snackoo's another update! In fact there may be a few more today.
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UPDATE
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Holy whack! Unlyrical lyrics Andre
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P.S. All credit for the coffee belongs to LadyK.
I mean...
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By the force of me being to lazy to edit the evidence.
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I am looking forward for the next pages
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I am looking forward to it!And welcome back!
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