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Blake Turner - Ace Attorney **[Page 12 ready]**Topic%20Title
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The story takes place eight years after TAT, and Phoenix got his badge back because of his actions to improve the court system.
Credits to Darklord Qwerven for the Phoenix Side Sprites.

Chapter 1 - The Unknown Turnabout
A little girl is found dead at the foot of a cliff, but her body suffered such injuries that it is not identified. A clumsy witness, a shabby prosecutor and a sharp attorney may lead to a "Not Guilty". Then who did really kill her?

NEW!
#0 - Prologue

Day 1 - Trial
#1 - Introductions
#2 - Yep, That's The Defendant.
#3 - The Trial
#4 - Decisive Evidence?
#5 - Please, Anyone but HIM!
#6 - THE Testimony
#7 - Cross-Examination A
#8 - Cross-Examination B
#9 - Cross-Examination C
#10 - Contradiction! A
#11 - Contradiction! B
#12 - Testimony 2: The Killer


Spoiler: Blake Turner
  • Name: Blake Turner (Turner=That who turns things (cases in this case) around)
  • Age: 25 (Born February 27, 2001)
  • Gender: Male
  • Origin: New Zealand
  • Occupation: Defense Lawyer at Wright & Co. Law Offices
  • Personality: A friendly person, although very temperamental. Can be very passionate at times. Very fond of his friends, and very cold with his enemies. Has a powerful deductive skill and intuition, although his lack of experience makes him slip up frequently.

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Spoiler: Phoenix Wright
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The great attorney we all know and love. Took the bar exam again and retrieved his badge. He's now Blake's mentor, and helps him in the trials.


Spoiler: Winston Payne
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The prosecutor for Blake's first trial (yay, such originality). He has a quite trascending role in this story


Spoiler: Zelinda von Karma
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Franziska's older sister. A retired prosecutor who came back to work for unknown reasons. Has some kind of grudge against Blake, which we also know nothing about at the beginning. She has some sort of obsession with time and punctuality.(Zelinda is a German name that means "Protector of victory")


Spoiler: Vincent Egnever
Blake's first client. A quiet man with a mysterious aura. He generally keeps his cool, but can suddenly explode and quieten in a second.

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Last edited by Blake on Sat Jan 02, 2010 9:51 am, edited 39 times in total.
Re: [Just Starting] Blake Turner - Ace AttourneyTopic%20Title
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A NZer? Awesomesauce. I like him already.
Re: [Updated: Characters' Profiles] Blake Turner - Ace AttourneyTopic%20Title
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Well I just updated the post with the characters' profiles so if anyone's intrested in reading them and commenting, they're welcome to.
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Re: [Updated: Characters' Profiles] Blake Turner - Ace AttourneyTopic%20Title
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Interesting and I like those sprites you've created. Only one problem I see is Attourney. I don't know if it's spelt differently in Argentina, but according to the Oxford and Macquarie Dictionaries, it is spelt Attorney. Feel free to correct me on this if I'm wrong and it's Wright & Co Law Offices, not Phoenix & Co Law Offices.

Ptapcc
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Ptapcc wrote:
Interesting and I like those sprites you've created. Only one problem I see is Attourney. I don't know if it's spelt differently in Argentina, but according to the Oxford and Macquarie Dictionaries, it is spelt Attorney. Feel free to correct me on this if I'm wrong and it's Wright & Co Law Offices, not Phoenix & Co Law Offices.

Ptapcc


Ups :sadshoe: , thanks dude, you're right, I was kinda distracted there, but it's like you said. Corrected!
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Re: [Frequent Updates: First Pages] Blake Turner - Ace AttorneyTopic%20Title
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If I may suggest something, if you're going to use scaled down anime/manga/visual novel pics, you should at least retrace them so they work a little better. :) At the moment they're kinda blurry, and ten-fifteen minutes on the heads could really sharpen them up.

EDIT: But jesus christ your text. Oh my god that text is so neat and tidy. Lovin' ittttt.
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SMASHING DAY FOR A BARBEQUE.

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Pretty cool, but

THEY TALK WITH THEIR MOUTHS CLOSED!! *gasp* :beef:

Nah, most comics make that mistake too. Not that I've made a comic XD
seriously, its no big deal. Just somethin' to think about next time, thats all

But great so far! I wanna see franzys sis in action!
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Christophomicus wrote:
If I may suggest something, if you're going to use scaled down anime/manga/visual novel pics, you should at least retrace them so they work a little better. :) At the moment they're kinda blurry, and ten-fifteen minutes on the heads could really sharpen them up.

You were right, I took my time and retraced some edges and face features and they look slightly better now. I corrected only the sprites so the comic will show the changes from page 3 onwards.

Christophomicus wrote:
EDIT: But jesus christ your text. Oh my god that text is so neat and tidy. Lovin' ittttt.

Thanks! But it was quite easy. It is a 10px white Verdana, on a 25% transparent black rectangle. The box with the name uses size 8 (or 7, I can't remember now)

Scarred_owl wrote:
Pretty cool, but

THEY TALK WITH THEIR MOUTHS CLOSED!! *gasp* :beef:

Nah, most comics make that mistake too. Not that I've made a comic XD
seriously, its no big deal. Just somethin' to think about next time, thats all

But great so far! I wanna see franzys sis in action!


You know, it ocurred to me, but after I've done the pages. I don't think that it looks that bad, but it would add a touch of reality. I'll consider it when I keep doing my pages.
Thanks for your intrest! Unfortunately, the first prosecutor is Payne, although... How much could it take to beat him? :payne:
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Pages 3 and 4 are up. I did what Scarred_owl said and it really looks better with the mouths open.
More to come!
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SMASHING DAY FOR A BARBEQUE.

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Thanks for listening to my advice, it does look a lot better, doesn't it?

Anyway, it's catching my eye so far, so keep up the good work! :edgy:
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OK, page 5 is ready! Next is page 6, the testimony, but it's still under construction.
Enjoy!
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Everything is okay except Payne doing his Rookie Killer act. He isn't throwing any shred of arrogant coments towards the "fresh from lawschool" attorney. You should work this small issue.
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Scent wrote:
Everything is okay except Payne doing his Rookie Killer act. He isn't throwing any shred of arrogant coments towards the "fresh from lawschool" attorney. You should work this small issue.

I thought about it, I really did. But, it's just that... After losing to three rookies and only winning a case against a phony attorney, I think his confidence and arrogance should have faded away. I dunno, I just see it that way.
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Blake wrote:
Scent wrote:
Everything is okay except Payne doing his Rookie Killer act. He isn't throwing any shred of arrogant coments towards the "fresh from lawschool" attorney. You should work this small issue.

I thought about it, I really did. But, it's just that... After losing to three rookies and only winning a case against a phony attorney, I think his confidence and arrogance should have faded away. I dunno, I just see it that way.

Spoiler:
He was a senior prosecutor even though he confronted Mia Fey in her second case, meaning that he wouldn't drop the Rookie Killer act. I'd advise using it a bit, since in AJAA, he didn't seem that focused on intimidation.

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“Bros before hos, man.”

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It sees like its going in a good direction but one thing... I would appreciate it if you would PM me before using my sprites, I know I said use with credit and I'm not angry but its nice to know when my sprites are being used.
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Page 6 is ready. Next is the first Cross-Examination of our rookie attorney.

Darklord Qwerven wrote:
It sees like its going in a good direction but one thing... I would appreciate it if you would PM me before using my sprites, I know I said use with credit and I'm not angry but its nice to know when my sprites are being used.

Yes, you are right. Now that I think about it I should've sent you a PM apart from the credit. At the time I thought the credits were enough. Sorry '^.^

EDIT: I just uploaded pages 7 and 8, part of the Cross-Examination. The rest is coming soon!
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EDIT: Added the prologue page at the beginning, so make sure you read it as well!

2nd EDIT: Added page 10! More to come

Still waiting some comments, people!!! :damon:
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FINE

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Sos groso, sabelo!
(how do you translate that?)
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They don't :c

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I quite like the idea so far. Just one thing: What is wrong with Blake's head? You should fix that, it seems like his neck is stuck looking backwards.
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Auraion wrote:
Sos groso, sabelo!
(how do you translate that?)

Umm... "You rule, dude"? XD I can't think of anything else
Anyway thanks for your intrest, I'm glad you're liking it so far


DeMatador wrote:
Ah, I stumbled upon TWO fellow Argentinians in the SAME THREAD! What are the odds ^^
(Ah, me encontré justo con DOS compañeros Argentinos en el MISMO THREAD! y toda la cosa)

Jaja parece que había más de los que pensaba!
(Haha, it seems there were more that I expected!)


DeMatador wrote:
On Topic:
I quite like the idea so far. Just one thing: What is wrong with Blake's head? You should fix that, it seems like his neck is stuck looking backwards.


I know what you mean. His positions are a bit weird. It's like he looks at everything sideways. I was aware of that when I made the sprite, and I didn't think it looked bad. Although I admit many people may find it very bad-looking, and I would have preferred a normal look, but it takes a lot of work to change: I'd have to redo the head completely, and I'm not that good with Paint. I hope it doesn't draw your intrest away, anyhow.

EDIT: Page 12 is up
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DeMatador wrote:
Ah, I stumbled upon TWO fellow Argentinians in the SAME THREAD! What are the odds ^^
(Ah, me encontré justo con DOS compañeros Argentinos en el MISMO THREAD! y toda la cosa)

On Topic:
I quite like the idea so far. Just one thing: What is wrong with Blake's head? You should fix that, it seems like his neck is stuck looking backwards.

Jajaja lo siento jamas leí eso.
(lol sorry, i never read that.)
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i'll use my last will to drink a cofee!

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hi blake , im here to thank you for the spirte , and to see your comic , its great and original , any time i can im gonna read your comic , everytime i can.
good thread.

see ya later.
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hmm... I'll read through this one day, but everytime I try that attorney sort of makes me not want to :eh?:

maybe you should use an attorney sprites head or something for him.... It might make it more appeling. :odoroki:
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This project is abandoned.
games/looking-for-voice-actors-for-the-phrases-male-and-female-t18222.html
blake wrote:
It seems that my sprite comic didn't work out as I expected, mainly because of some sprite problems. As I don't want to waste the story I wrote, I decided to make a game out of it, using RPG Maker XP. It'll be an Ace Attorney Investigations kind of game, viewed from above all the time, in 3rd person.
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Auraion wrote:
This project is abandoned.
games/looking-for-voice-actors-for-the-phrases-male-and-female-t18222.html
blake wrote:
It seems that my sprite comic didn't work out as I expected, mainly because of some sprite problems. As I don't want to waste the story I wrote, I decided to make a game out of it, using RPG Maker XP. It'll be an Ace Attorney Investigations kind of game, viewed from above all the time, in 3rd person.

Oh, makes sense, is this getting locked or is it going to die?
*que cool mod quote*
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Oh, it can be closed, I have abandoned it alright.
Just close it and stop necromancing it.
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