Location: The Netherlands
Rank: Decisive Witness
Joined: Fri Apr 23, 2010 1:24 pm
I like this so far~ However (because I'm picky) it's irritating me that Giovanni keeps using Italian pronouns because pronouns in Italian are literally never used :3 Go to Italy and you won't catch a single person using them unless it's for special emphasis.
I know this can't be changed now- I just thought I'd let you know. But the plot's looking good and the comic's nice and clean.
I'm posting this right from my (mini) notebook PC.
I'm going to remake those pages with Giovanni in it.
I'm not about to change the fact that he's from Itally. BUT. I'm going to change his accent, and sprites. So, his script will be English with a little bit Italian. You could refer it too Klavier Gavin. ''Is that so, Fraulein?''. So i hope it wont ''irritate'' anymore ;-).
I'm planning to make...about....6 or 7 cases. The last will be a trail case. Most likely Edgey vs Corvo. I'll promise you guys i won't quite at a random point in the comic just as all the others. (NOT EVERYONE). Because i have ''the ultimate plot''.
Futher i like to reveal another point. The serie will continue with no more ''rebuttals,logic,confrontation,the specific AAI investagations'' but with the classic defense lawyer style. So that means that you guys will read (OR PLAY) with this ''certain'' Defense Attorney. It won't be one of my OC's. But a real AA character.
Yes, i have the perfect plot. With the ''situations'' with the unknown Reveals.
With the Return of an old legend.
With the rise of an another legend.
With the rise of she who wanted to follow in her fathers footsteps.
With the fall of an ''fake'' legend.
In short.I won't disappoint you guys.
See ya later, I'm taking some waves!