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Patchouli Knowledge wrote:
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I don't want to add 'do not kidnap children' right under 'do not sexually harass Patch' in the Civil post rules :basil:

You just want to get rid of me, I understand...

Lol Lol.

No u :gant:
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Oliver wrote:
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I don't want to add 'do not kidnap children' right under 'do not sexually harass Patch' in the Civil post rules :basil:

You just want to get rid of me, I understand...


You amuse us, Oliver.

But at the same time, a lot of rules are needed to make sure that this post isn't flagged by a government agency :basil:

Edit: Also, I just noticed: you're a prosecutor already? It took me three years to become a prosecutor haha
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Hey, come on, I can just...get rid of the agency. :edgey:
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Oliver wrote:
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Good. If you have an Imgur Acc, you can delete anyone anytime. Otherwise, you can delete only once.

I thought Cesar was like a grumpy grandfather or something, with less sense of humor at all. Weird.

He captures children to make comments and then make himself look funny and cool.
I know because he...he...d-did it to me...


W-what?! I can't let you both say this kind of stuff...first of all, I am not a grumpy old man, I actually act around 15 despite being so old...besides, I don't kidnap children to make posts, I kidnap all sort of people for all sorts of purposes. And I only kidnapped you because you where going to tell the government about you-know-what...you had to be stopped somehow.

...ok I'll stop now before this gets any more off-topic...anyone remembers what this thread is about?
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Re: (Update 24/09/15) Robert Civil: Ace AttorneyTopic%20Title
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Something about barbie dolls, I believe.
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Some guy with a goatee. Can't remember his name.. Nice bloke. A bit self-entitled..

(Update, folks :basil: Loving the banter.)
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I'm in love with this series right now. Listening to music while reading these sprite comics are hell good.
It's funny that Batman makes a cameo in the sprite comics. That's very creative.
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I'm in love with this series right now. Listening to music while reading these sprite comics are hell good.
It's funny that Batman makes a cameo in the sprite comics. That's very creative.

It's not a cameo,
Spoiler: HOLY CRAP! SUPER MEGA SPOILER FOR EVERYTHING EVER IN HISTORY!
Robert Civil is actually Batman.

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I disapprove.
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AJtheprogrammer wrote:
I'm in love with this series right now. Listening to music while reading these sprite comics are hell good.
It's funny that Batman makes a cameo in the sprite comics. That's very creative.


Thanks :will: I'm really glad you're having some fun with them! They're pretty fun to make. Ever since I was a kid, I've always wanted to write mystery stories and this gives me a platform to deliver some mystery to people.

I'm working on case 3 as case 2 is released. I'm only about a fifth of the way through it, but it might be read for when its time to start.

Looks like you're all stuck with me for a little while longer :basil:

Oliver wrote:
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Civil is Batman


HOW DID YOU KNOW?! Well, that is the story I wanted to tell ruined..

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I disapprove.


I DISAPPROVE.... Of.... Your face...

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I take that back. I don't want Patch to hire ceaser to kidnap me.

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Quote:
Patch wrote:
I disapprove.


I DISAPPROVE.... Of.... Your face...

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I take that back. I don't want Patch to hire ceaser to kidnap me.


:that-b-word:
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Or even worse, hire Dogen or something.


...Whoa, 1971th Post. I can't believe I made a special post. :gant:
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Patch wrote:
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Patch wrote:
I disapprove.


I DISAPPROVE.... Of.... Your face...

Spoiler:
I take that back. I don't want Patch to hire ceaser to kidnap me.


:that-b-word:
Spoiler:
Or even worse, hire Dogen or something.


...Whoa, 1971th Post. I can't believe I made a special post. :gant:


Spoiler:
I never understood how a blind assassin works...


Congrats, Patch! I'm still trying to become an Ace Attorney. Have been trying since 2009 :basil:
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DefenceLawyer wrote:
Oliver wrote:
Spoiler:
Civil is Batman


HOW DID YOU KNOW?! Well, that is the story I wanted to tell ruined..

Oh crap! I'm sorry... :sadshoe:
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Re: (Update 26/09/15) Robert Civil: Ace AttorneyTopic%20Title
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We have ourselves another update, folks!

Been pretty good with these daily updates so far...

Let's try and keep that up :basil:
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Holy crud, I'm dumb...
I only just noticed that his name is Gatewater :bellboy:
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Oliver wrote:
Holy crud, I'm dumb...
I only just noticed that his name is Gatewater :bellboy:


*puts head in hands*

It's addressed in case 3, where we will be spending quite a bit of time in the Gatewater hotel! :bellboy:

(Spoilers!)
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DefenceLawyer wrote:
Oliver wrote:
Holy crud, I'm dumb...
I only just noticed that his name is Gatewater :bellboy:


*puts head in hands*

It's addressed in case 3, where we will be spending quite a bit of time in the Gatewater hotel! :bellboy:

(Spoilers!)

If the bellboy doesn't appear you will DIE
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Oliver wrote:
DefenceLawyer wrote:
Oliver wrote:
Holy crud, I'm dumb...
I only just noticed that his name is Gatewater :bellboy:


*puts head in hands*

It's addressed in case 3, where we will be spending quite a bit of time in the Gatewater hotel! :bellboy:

(Spoilers!)

If the bellboy doesn't appear you will DIE


I'm seeing what I can do. Right now its difficult, but I'm trying to switch some things around.

Civil may just meet the bellboy... Which would make him the first AA crossover character! (Since the judge and Payne don't count.)
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At least you remembered they don't count.
The bellboy is the sexiest character in AA
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Thought you wouldn't update. It was 4:00 AM here and you still haven't. Usually, you do it within then.
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Thought you wouldn't update. It was 4:00 AM here and you still haven't. Usually, you do it within then.


It was a Friday night! :basil: I'm usually back home by midnight, but didn't get back till past one/two AM last night.

When I get back to uni in a week or so, the updates will be a lot more sporadic.

I'm going to try and stick to the daily schedule, but that day's comic may not go up till later on the next day.

Hopefully the change won't be too noticeable and will be easy to adjust to :will:

We've still got
Spoiler: Don't read if you don't want to know how many comics are left of this case
47 days
left of this case, after all!
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It's Friday over there? Heh...
I know what you were doing on the night of the crime which is updating the comic later than usual...
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(Up to this point I've been bluffing...
But now I can crack out that one piece of evidence conjecture!)

You had to have been...
>Playing Soccer
>Going to a petting zoo
>Partying
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Clearly you were partying!
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Oliver wrote:
It's Friday over there? Heh...
I know what you were doing on the night of the crime which is updating the comic later than usual...
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(Up to this point I've been bluffing...
But now I can crack out that one piece of evidence conjecture!)

You had to have been...
>Playing Soccer
>Going to a petting zoo
>Partying
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Clearly you were partying!


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You made an error, Mr Phoenix Wright!

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Granted, there was partying...

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But you failed to realise that it was a party... In a petting zoo.

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AND IT IS CALLED "FOOTBALL" NOT "SOCCER." FOOLISH FOOL.
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W-W-WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!
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(Aha! I've got it...)
Prosecutor von Karma...
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You were spending time with the defendant, and therefore!
YOU ARE AN ACCOMPLICE!
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WHAT IS THIS? MY DAUGHTER WAS OUT LATE WITH A SPRITE-COMIC MAKER AND ALCOHOL?!

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GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!

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On account of Miss VonKarma being tazered to death, the court rules Defence Lawyer...

GUILTY
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*confetti starts falling*
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Eheh...it actually worked!

Well that was fun. :yogi:
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I think that should be made into an extra :acro: haha

Update, folks!
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DefenceLawyer wrote:
I think that should be made into an extra :acro: haha

Update, folks!

Oh that'd be glorious.
Take a picture of yourself, make it into a sprite, and we're all set.
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Alright, this one had some problems. First of all, a grammaritical error at the third strip of the comic. It should've been "part and parcel of this case". Sorry, my inner Grammar Nazi couldn't stop.

Next is the 15th strip of this comic. "We ran his fingerprints"? Is it even possible for one to run in a fingerprint? That's extremely impossible. Again, another Grammar Mistake. You really should perform a spell check or revise the comic once after you finished making.

It would've been better if the sentence was like "We ran through his fingerprints." Yes, that's better. AAI references lol.

Sorry. I wasn't completely amused. Today had errors. Two, actually. Pardon me for suddenly 'judging' your comic. I meant to write a review of today's comic. And I did...

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It's not judging, it's simply criticism. And you will get a suitable punishment for it.
*readies fire*
Anywho, I suppose I may as well join in on criticizing today's issue.
It would sound better if you said "Because he didn't appear in our database, we can assume he's an illegal immigrant" instead of "He didn't appear on any of our databases, so we can presume he's an illegal immigrant"
And I think it'd sound better if you said "The defendant killed him" instead of "The suspect killed him"
And the part about the victim having no identification might sound better if it were, "We were unable to find anything to identify the victim"
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Patchouli Knowledge wrote:
Alright, this one had some problems. First of all, a grammaritical error at the third strip of the comic. It should've been "part and parcel of this case". Sorry, my inner Grammar Nazi couldn't stop.

Next is the 15th strip of this comic. "We ran his fingerprints"? Is it even possible for one to run in a fingerprint? That's extremely impossible. Again, another Grammar Mistake. You really should perform a spell check or revise the comic once after you finished making.

It would've been better if the sentence was like "We ran through his fingerprints." Yes, that's better. AAI references lol.

Sorry. I wasn't completely amused. Today had errors. Two, actually. Pardon me for suddenly 'judging' your comic. I meant to write a review of today's comic. And I did...

-Patchy


Oliver wrote:
It's not judging, it's simply criticism. And you will get a suitable punishment for it.
*readies fire*
Anywho, I suppose I may as well join in on criticizing today's issue.
It would sound better if you said "Because he didn't appear in our database, we can assume he's an illegal immigrant" instead of "He didn't appear on any of our databases, so we can presume he's an illegal immigrant"
And I think it'd sound better if you said "The defendant killed him" instead of "The suspect killed him"
And the part about the victim having no identification might sound better if it were, "We were unable to find anything to identify the victim"


Let's play the "guess who was half asleep" game! :basil:

Thanks guys, I am opening the file now and will run over it :will:
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How dare you get tired? This is INEXCUSABLE!
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Oliver wrote:
How dare you get tired? This is INEXCUSABLE!


Oliver, I am NOT going on trial again! :basil: *whispers* Franny, grab the whip. I have a court case coming up next month...

I've fixed it and put a new version up. There was another grammatical error in terms of a misplaced 'that' and some other things which didn't feel right as well.

I appreciate you guys pointing the bits and pieces out, as I'm only human at the end of the day. Sometimes the comic will be lazily put together to meet the daily update, especially if I am exhausted, but I'll always strive to do my best.

I guess the rest of you guys have Patch and Oliver to thank for picking up my slack today :basil:

Thanks again guys!
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This is excellent...I'm getting credit for something my robot did!
And you're welcome. I'll be seeing you in court next week. *bows*
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In fact, as a way of apology, I have an extra for you guys.

It's a bit of a weird one, but I thought that you guys might enjoy it.

Go check the first page! :will:
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W-What was that...?
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Oliver wrote:
W-What was that...?


I went for weird and trippy.

I tried to do an extra with Civil's mother, but whilst I was making the sprite, I used Victoria's as a placeholder.

Seeing Victoria speak as Civil's mother made me chuckle, so.. This weird thing was born :basil:
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DefenceLawyer wrote:
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W-What was that...?


I went for weird and trippy.

I tried to do an extra with Civil's mother, but whilst I was making the sprite, I used Victoria's as a placeholder.

Seeing Victoria speak as Civil's mother made me chuckle, so.. This weird thing was born :basil:

...Where's the extra of your trial?
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Oliver wrote:
DefenceLawyer wrote:
Oliver wrote:
W-What was that...?


I went for weird and trippy.

I tried to do an extra with Civil's mother, but whilst I was making the sprite, I used Victoria's as a placeholder.

Seeing Victoria speak as Civil's mother made me chuckle, so.. This weird thing was born :basil:

...Where's the extra of your trial?


It'll happen eventually.
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Eventually? EVENTUALLY?! Unacceptable. :edgeworth:
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