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Crimson Delight & Cobalt Star [ UPDATED 04/21/08 ]Topic%20Title
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Sho is so awesome, he objects.

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I've been wanting to make my PW OC's story for some time.
I was expecting to make in in fanfiction format, but since I'm brazillian, I have a lot of trouble with detailing scenes in english...
So BAM! Of course, I'm a sprite comic addict, so I ended up making my OC's story in a comic.

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Page 1 - Where were you?
Page 2 - It's the Butz
Page 3 - Let's begin the operation!
Page 4 - Witness Testimony
Page 5 - I object

Main Characters:
Image ~ Kai Crimson: Has just finished law school in Australia. Intends to be a great attorney.
:mareka: ~ Desiree DeLite: Younger sister of Kai.
:larry: ~ Larry Butz: When something smells, it's usually the Butz!
Image ~ Hoshi Heart: Sweetness, dum dum dum...
:yuusaku: ~ Ron DeLite: Don't ignore the cinnamon roll haired girl!
:kyouya: ~ Klavier Gavin: Went to dinner with Hoshi. One year ago. Yeah... Ok.

A little preview of what's to come...
Spoiler: Preview!
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"What's the problem, sis? You hearing something weird?"


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I decided to make a completely paralell and nonsense comic for Hoshi. She needs moar attention y'know.
This comic will most likely NOT have any courtroom scenes but the flashbacks. While Crimson Delight is a comic for turnabouts, Cobalt Star is a comic for totally random happenings in Hoshi's life.

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Page 1 - An old friend at christmas eve
Page 2 - Our past becoming memories

[ In page 2, there are Phoenix front sprites in two panels. These are Tajiri Ami's work. THANK YOU AMIIIII! ]

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My sprite thread:
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Out of the fire and into fire again... You make me want to forget... And start all over.


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Re: Crimson Delight ~ My comic!Topic%20Title
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Four is Death

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Can you lighten your text?

I love it, just a bit hard ti read some of it.
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「エメラルドスプラッシュ」

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You make dialogue bubble like I do! Effective, isn't it? ^_^ This looks nice so far. I look forward to reading more.
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Re: Crimson Delight ~ My comic!Topic%20Title
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Sho is so awesome, he objects.

Gender: Female

Location: I live in the bottom. I mean, Brazil

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Tajiri Ami wrote:
You make dialogue bubble like I do! Effective, isn't it? ^_^

It's very useful, since it doesn't take half of the panel like the normal PW dialogue thing ^^!

Page 2 is up! Is Kai gonna mess up!? D:
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Out of the fire and into fire again... You make me want to forget... And start all over.
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Rise and shine, Mr. Judge.

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Is my sprite gonna be on page 3? =D
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Re: Crimson Delight ~ My comic! [ UPDATED 02/17/08 ]Topic%20Title
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I may or may not be here.

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Nice! I can't wait to see how this progresses.
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Re: Crimson Delight ~ My comic! [ UPDATED 02/17/08 ]Topic%20Title
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Justice with a G!

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Great sprites,but when are you going to have an update?
Married to Tooth_Paste_Kisses ^^
Father of Jade Edgeworth,skyfairie,and SuzuneAyasato

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Re: Crimson Delight ~ My comic! [ UPDATED 02/17/08 ]Topic%20Title
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Sho is so awesome, he objects.

Gender: Female

Location: I live in the bottom. I mean, Brazil

Rank: Desk Jockey

Joined: Thu Jan 31, 2008 5:16 pm

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FINALLY MADE IT, GUYS! Sorry for such a long delay. I lost the inspiration while doing page 3. But now I'm back! Making page 5 right now. Hope you like it!~


I also added a little preview of Kai's 4th case... Guess who's the suspect?
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Out of the fire and into fire again... You make me want to forget... And start all over.
Re: Crimson Delight ~ My comic! [ UPDATED 04/21/08 ]Topic%20Title
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Justice with a G!

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Nice.
Married to Tooth_Paste_Kisses ^^
Father of Jade Edgeworth,skyfairie,and SuzuneAyasato

(Trying to make sig awesome)
Re: Crimson Delight ~ My comic! [ UPDATED 04/21/08 ]Topic%20Title
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Sho is so awesome, he objects.

Gender: Female

Location: I live in the bottom. I mean, Brazil

Rank: Desk Jockey

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I'm on a roll! Added Cobalt Star to the comic collection, plus page 5 of Crimson Delight.
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Out of the fire and into fire again... You make me want to forget... And start all over.
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