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Franzise Deauxnim wrote:
I was being mostly fatuous with the "rejected" comment, hence the
smily. Regardless, my point stands; I'd rather take actions and comments as proof of a character's...character than a name that may or may not be ironic.
I took that 'Ziska smiley to mean that you thought you had me thoroughly whipped on that point
...pal. Hehe. Regardless, point taken. I see where you're coming from.
Franzise Deauxnim wrote:
Quote:
Valerie: The girl... Let her go!
Terry: Shut up! C-Come closer... And I kill her!
Valerie: Sorry, but you're not going to get the chance...
Again, this was staged. Valerie knew damn well Terry would never try to kill Dahlia, so her words at this point are meaningless. As for the note:
Right. We can't use this to judge her personality. And the note isn't enough to judge her character either, which was my initial point. All we have is the knowledge that Valerie was going to confess everything and get Dahlia to confess everything.
Franzise Deauxnim wrote:
3-4 wrote:
...The story starts after Terry Fawles escaped. He called Valerie and told her he wanted to meet. This is the note she left... It says, "Talk to Dahlia. Tell her this time, the whole truth must come out." ...Valerie Hawthorne gave Dahlia a warning. She told her she was going to reveal to the world the whole truth.
Valerie wasn't asking Dahlia to confess. She said she herself was going to come out with the truth, whether Dahlia wanted to or not.
Those are Mia (the character, not the user)'s words. Note that Mia (the character) claims that
Valerie was going to "reveal the whole truth", but the note says nothing of the sort. Valerie's note, by the "talk to Dahlia" line, indicates that Valerie was trying to convince Dahlia to tell the truth. Subtle difference, but a big one.
Quote:
Well...
Franzise Deauxnim wrote:
:youngmia: This woman IS a demon. And there was one more person who helped make a demon out of her. Her sister... Valerie Hawthorne.
Again, that's Mia (the character)'s assertion that Valerie made Dahlia into a demon. I don't agree with that. That certainly isn't a proven fact, and when Mia (the character) was trying to convict Dahlia, it only makes sense that she would play every card in the deck trying to take her down, even if it meant playing a Joker.
Franzise Deauxnim wrote:
It's also stated that Dahlia's body was lost in the Eagle River. She had the gem in her pack, strapped to her back when she jumped. She didn't lose it.
"She didn't lose it"?
Speculation. We know Dahlia's body wasn't lost, because she's in court. But no one ever challenges what happened to the gemstone. In a raging river, sometimes backpacks become unzipped or un-velcro'd and things fall out. Especially a river as violent as the Eagle River. Again, IIRC, no one challenges the whereabouts of the gem, not even Mia (the character) when trying to grill Dahlia. If there's a line that suggests otherwise, please tell me, but I don't remember the profile of the gem ever changing from "lost in the Eagle River".
Franzise Deauxnim wrote:
You mean why didn't Dahlia bring up the diamond? Because she didn't want to mention the diamond, she's the one who took off with it.
If Dahlia wanted to smear Valerie somehow, she would have suggested exactly what you did: That Valerie was trying to get the gem. And Dahlia was trying anything to get herself acquitted, but the one thing she
didn't do was claim any misdoing on Valerie's part.
Franzise Deauxnim wrote:
“Once you eliminate the impossible, whatever remains, no matter how improbable, must be the truth.” I've already explained why Valerie didn't go through with the kidnapping for Dahlia's sake. The only remaining motive is money.
How did you prove that Valerie didn't do it for Dahlia? I don't think there
is any "proof" to that extent. I ask again:
Why was it Dahlia's plan that Valerie was following? If Valerie really just wanted the cash, then why did she go through all the trouble to follow Dahlia's plan, fake Dahlia's death, set up a patsy and help Dahlia change her identity? She goes so far out of her way to unnecessarily help Dahlia when she could use her status as a police officer to leave her stepsister high and dry and no one would believe a 14-year old girl over a policewoman. I claim that there's a stronger evidence that she
did care about Dahlia than evidence that she didn't.
Franzise Deauxnim wrote:
I'd really like to think Valerie isn't dumb enough to believe Dahlia lost the diamond when she jumped in the river just because she says so, but whether she did or not wouldn't change the fact that Valerie agreed to the plan for the money.
Raging rapids. If Dahlia had claimed she lost it, why would Valerie have any reason to think Dahlia was lying? The Eagle River is renowned for its
vicious, uncontrollable currents. Valerie did do it for the money, but that seems far from the only reason...and going through with the plan obviously weighed on her conscience for five long, long years.
Franzise Deauxnim wrote:
If Dahlia had asked someone else to make the transfer, there would have been a very good chance the police as a whole would get involved.
But if Dahlia was so afraid of police intervention,
then why did she ask her stepsister, a police officer, to help her? That makes no sense! Dahlia had to have believed that Valerie
would help her and lie for her unconditionally. Dahlia didn't want a police officer betraying her and ratting her out to her co-workers. Dahlia trusted Valerie above and beyond just scheming, because if anyone knows about double-crossing, it's Dahlia, and she had to have some proof that Valerie really had a vested interest in cooperating! Otherwise, she would have tricked someone into helping that didn't have ties with the police. She didn't need a police officer to make the plan worked, she just needed an otherwise "upstanding citizen" as a witness to Terry's "crime". Again, why did Dahlia ask Valerie, her stepsister?
Why Valerie Hawthorne? That's the million dollar (two million dollar, as it were) question.
Franzise Deauxnim wrote:
I'm pretty sure Dahlia's view of Iris as a traitor was more because of the deal with Phoenix and the necklace than the fake kidnapping. If Dahlia thought her sister would betray her, she wouldn't have agreed to let Iris get the necklace back, let alone give her half a year to do so.
I don't remember the exact phrasing, but I
believe that Dahlia (as Iris) tells Phoenix in 3-5 that it was a betrayal "from eleven years ago" that hurt her. Which would be the kidnapping for which Iris didn't show up. Dahlia may have let Iris help get the necklace back, but it was only because Dahlia still loved Iris deep-down and saw no threat that would compel Dahlia to kill her. I don't think Dahlia thought the Phoenix deal was a "betrayal" as much as it was Iris just being incompetent and bumbling.
Franzise Deauxnim wrote:
Realistically, how is a 14-year-old supposed to support herself without any money? And again, whether Valerie actually was paid off or not does not change Valerie's motive. It's highly implied that she was though, the diamond was supposedly the entire motive for the kidnapping at the time; Dahlia wanting to get back at her father wasn't even brought up until 3-5.
Dahlia's motive for the crime was the gem; no one cared about Valerie's motive in the case because as far as they were concerned in that trial, Valerie was just the victim and a former accomplice. They know that Valerie was involved, but
her motive wasn't important in figuring out her death. And just because we don't hear about Dahlia hating her father until 3-5 doesn't mean it wasn't a motive for the crime.
Franzise Deauxnim wrote:
It was selfish as far as Dahlia goes. Valerie wanted to confess because she felt badly for taking part in the kidnapping and wanted that weight off her own shoulders. I'm not saying that she was wrong for wanting to come clean, but she didn't want to do it for the right reasons, and she definately wasn't doing it for Dahlia's sake. If Valerie wanted to confess just because it was the right thing to do, she wouldn't have waited five years to do it, and you can't tell me she just decided it was at the exact time Terry called her.
"The right reasons"? Uh, I hope my last two-paragraph answer wasn't tl;dr worthy. XD. I claim that Valerie
did do it in part for Dahlia's sake because if she couldn't live knowing she did wrong, then it would make sense for her to want to lift the burden from her stepsister's shoulders as well. If I knew that someone I cared about had committed a crime, I would want them to confess, not because I somehow would take pleasure in seeing them behind bars, but because, uh...it's the right thing to do. Why did Valerie want to talk to Dahlia? Please answer me this. Was there any reason to talk to Fawles and Dahlia if Valerie really didn't feel truly guilty? Was there any reason at all for her to do that? She wouldn't confess for no reason.
Also, I think that it was
because of Fawles' escape that Valerie acted. Five years is too long to keep a secret, but once Fawles escaped, it was almost like a sign, a
message to her. It woke her up from her little hibernation and she decided to face the music because she couldn't lie to herself anymore. She felt bad for Fawles because she lied to him, and she wanted Dahlia to admit her involvement as well. Admitting would send Valerie to jail, and Valerie obviously knew this. So why, why would she do that? What would be the "right reasons"? She did it because she felt morally responsible and wanted to be punished; sounds good to me. There was no ulterior motive to confess. No bad person would ever turn themselves in "because they felt bad", because a truly bad person
would not feel bad about it, and a bad person certainly wouldn't reach out to others (Terry and Dahlia) in order to get the "whole truth" known. We know Valerie had a sense of morals even if she did act naive and stupid when she was younger.
Lastly, I posed two hypothetical questions before that I'm still wondering about.
1. If Iris had grown up in the Hawthorne family, do we really think that she would have turned out like Dahlia? Knowing what we know about Iris' personality, do we really think she could have been so completely different had she grown up in the Hawthorne household for six extra years instead of Dahlia? Would the kind, forgiving Iris really have been able to not forgive her father for treating her so unkindly?
2. If Dahlia had really disliked her angry, unloving household, and she really wanted to be with Iris, why didn't she run away and live with Iris? She knew where Iris was, and even at the age of 14, Dahlia was out and about on her own, being proactive. We know she
could have gone to the shrine. Why, then, instead of leaving her father for Iris, did Dahlia stay and choose revenge over a loving household?
That's all I have for now. Sorry if I rambled on a little.
Also, agreed: We all have crushes on Dahlia, 'cause she's adorable.
:D That's the intention, at least :P