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 Post subject: Hotel Dusk Doujin [Apology added on 08/30!]
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Sooo, I'll say first and foremost this is a slash doujin. Who saw that coming? ;|

So I mentioned it in one post that my fiancée and I were working on a Hotel Dusk doujin. We RP'd it out initially, and now I'm fronting the script and she's doing the fantastic art. I think she gave Bradley quite the nice face...!

So a general synopsis of the doujin is it's a year after Hotel Dusk takes place. Kyle has dumped Mila somewhere unannounced in this doujin and is back on the road in search of Bradley. He lands outside of another crappy hotel on an anonymous tip, and the only reason he abides? He has that feeling again. I won't say much more than this.

This doujin is a simple visual novel. There's no choices to be made. It's a click & read deal. Besides our psychotic love for the game, it's a sample of the work done at Flaming Radical Productions, consisting of myself, Mikenno, and Ignati. Our bigger project (After we finish this one) is a Phoenix Wright Dating Sim a little less scary than Phoenix Drive... I hope. There's already some posts at the website link above about the PW Dating Sim, so if you'd like to go view what's there and vote in some polls, please do.

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Spoiler: Thar be pics in here
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She's made progress on a few of these images recently. These are all old things I have. Will post more stuff and progress updates as they come.

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 Post subject: Re: Hotel Dusk Doujin. Woo! (In progress)
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More rough sketches.

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He looks kind of like Edgeworth... kind of.

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"Buh-buh-Bradley-boo?"

"Goddamnit Hyde, those condoms in that red box weren't for nuthin'"

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I'm nowhere near finishing HD yet, but that's mindblowing art. Please continue.


 
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 Post subject: Re: Hotel Dusk Doujin [In progress; spoilers abound]
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Hah! Not even Hotel Dusk is safe from the all-consuming Rull #34.

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"Buh-buh-Bradley-boo?"

"Goddamnit Hyde, those condoms in that red box weren't for nuthin'"


Hee, hee.

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 Post subject: Re: Hotel Dusk Doujin [In progress; spoilers abound]
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This Bradley watches you in your damn sleep. ;___;

Spoiler: Actually, I forgot to post its creepy ass with the last set of pics
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Also, we're open to any questions about this, if there actually is any.
Right now I have to go back and delete what I have because we decided to go from Kyle's POV instead of third person. SIGH.
But it also means I can rewrite the timeline, which means we've decided to include more than just the scenes from one year after HD!

New additions with the POV change now include FLASHBACKS. Not to HD, but before that. Detectives. Hur hur. Before they both became wandering hobos. <3

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"Buh-buh-Bradley-boo?"

"Goddamnit Hyde, those condoms in that red box weren't for nuthin'"


Oh, you have no idea.. *sob*

Bradley slaps him and then dives into the river with condom floaties.
"This is how I didn't die. SEE YA."

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 Post subject: Re: Hotel Dusk Doujin [In progress; spoilers abound]
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*impressed whistle* That's some nice art you have there. I am now watching this project =D


 
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HAY GUYS.

I decided to share some script with you. Enjoy.

Spoiler: If you don't want to know any of the script stuff before the VN is released, DON'T LOOK. FOOL.
"..."
"The name's Kyle Hyde."
"I'm no one big. You've probably never even heard of a guy like me."
"I'm actually just a detective at the 89th precinct in New York City. One of many out there trying to bust the asses of idiot criminals."
"Hell, for all I know, you're probably one of them. You wouldn't know me because you'd avoid me."
"Makes sense."
"I don't care if you know me or not. That's not my job. It's not why I do what I do."
"Fuck, I don't even know why I'm a cop. But being a cop is what made everything that happened this year happen. Or, at least, it allowed me to meet the one person that made a huge impact on me."
"And he was a son of a bitch rookie."

scene police station
with fade

k "..."

b "..."

k "...{i}This{/i}? This little blond bimbo is my partner?"

"I remember how he just smiled at me. He looked right out of Hitler's book of 'How to be a Model Citizen.'"
"Blond hair... blues eyes..."
"Bimbo."

c "You're in no position to protest, Hyde. Standard procedure. Now you two kiss and make up and head out."

"The chief left us alone."
"And he kept smiling at me. I was getting fed up with that arrogant little smirk on his face, so I grabbed my keys and began to head out."

k "Just stay outta my way."

"Naturally, like a lost dog, he followed. He seemed pretty confident that I was going to be a loving owner."
"I hate dogs."

b "Depends on which way you're going, Hyde."

"And he had the balls to talk to me like he'd known me for years."

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 Post subject: Re: Hotel Dusk Doujin [In progress; spoilers abound]
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"Are you retarded or something?"
"I'm the goddamn KYLE HYDE."

That's kind of the vibe I got from it. In other words, it's boss.

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^Agreed <3 I'm loving this, its going to be beyond epic <3

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"Are you retarded or something?"
"I'm the goddamn KYLE HYDE."

That's kind of the vibe I got from it. In other words, it's boss.

There lacks a hooker in order to properly use that quote.

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Kyle and Bradley KISSING?!?!?!?!?

*vomits*

Ugh...Too mush Yaoi everywhere I go.


...Just kidding about that statment and the vomit but I will not see that again...
What about KylexRachel action!? :redd:

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Kyle and Bradley KISSING?!?!?!?!?

*vomits*

Ugh...Too mush Yaoi everywhere I go.


...Just kidding about that statment and the vomit but I will not see that again...
What about KylexRachel action!? :redd:



You and your anti-yaoiness... such bad vibes :zenitora:

Begone with ye!

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Kyle and Bradley KISSING?!?!?!?!?

*vomits*

Ugh...Too mush Yaoi everywhere I go.


...Just kidding about that statment and the vomit but I will not see that again...
What about KylexRachel action!? :redd:



You and your anti-yaoiness... such bad vibes :zenitora:

Begone with ye!

.....Meanie.....
And hey, I just dont feel right with guy to guy...Maybe if I was a girl or have less testosterone I'd be obseesed with teh Yaoi. (I have NOOOOO idea what I just said...maybe i shoulda took out the testosterone part.. :yuusaku:)

NO YURI ACTION HERE?!?! (lol)


Still....Meanie...T_T :larry: :accordion-head: *insert crying Regina here because I cant find it) No need to said it in such a strong and hurtful way...


Spoiler: EDIT: Something that happened at school involving Yaoi
Ok, I was sitting next to my friends at luch one day, and I see a girl reading a manga with a yellow cover. I took a peek at it and I saw something about love and I saw cross dressing guys....>_< And the girl said it was Yaoi.

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I flash my yaoi at everyone at school :redd: It is amusing.


This doujin is a YAOI doujinshi, there will be no yuris =B

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I flash my yaoi at everyone at school :redd: It is amusing.


This doujin is a YAOI doujinshi, there will be no yuris =B

Oh! I didnt know! I'm sorry... :sadshoe:

And I really thought you were angry at me saying those stuff about Yaoi. I had no idea that this was a pure Yaoi topic. Sorry again.... :larry:

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Sooo, I'll say first and foremost this is a slash doujin. Who saw that coming? ;|
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Sooo, I'll say first and foremost this is a slash doujin. Who saw that coming? ;|
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Sooo, I'll say first and foremost this is a slash doujin. Who saw that coming? ;|

Did you see that coming?

I think we see Bradley coming. :hotti:

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There, fix'd. :redd:
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I think we see Bradley coming cumming . :hotti:

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I'm proud of my Gravitation/Loveless-flashing :D
I'm anticipating this. ANTICIPATING. <3


 
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I flash my yaoi at everyone at school :redd: It is amusing.


This doujin is a YAOI doujinshi, there will be no yuris =B

Oh! I didnt know! I'm sorry... :sadshoe:

And I really thought you were angry at me saying those stuff about Yaoi. I had no idea that this was a pure Yaoi topic. Sorry again.... :larry:


I was never mad xDD I'm just messing with you XD

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There, fix'd. :redd:
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I think we see Bradley coming cumming . :hotti:


oh YES :gant:

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There, fix'd. :redd:
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I think we see Bradley coming cumming . :hotti:


All over the place.


 
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oh my,this is getting naughty.


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All hail the Bradley x Kyle pairing and all of the other yaoi parings! (But not :karma: x :gant:!)

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Did someone mention Bradley x Kyle?!

:takethat:

LOOOOOOOOOOL idk....
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All hail the Bradley x Kyle pairing and all of the other yaoi parings! (But not :karma: x :gant:!)
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Totally off topic, since I can't find PW looking people XP

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That dude on the right has a Kyle Hyde thing going on ;)

If the other guy grew out his hair, there would be Bradley!! =D

HURRAY FOR BRADLEY/KYLE SLASH

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"Are you retarded or something?"
"I'm the goddamn KYLE HYDE."

That's kind of the vibe I got from it. In other words, it's boss.

lol best quote ever XD

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I'm not a yaoi person, but I'm not a not yaoi person, either :hyde:

Nice art n.n

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I'm not a yaoi person, but I'm not a not yaoi person, either :hyde:

Nice art n.n

ditto O.O

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Oh...oh my.
I have been waiting for this...for oh so long.
I think I love you. Really.
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OKAY HI. IT'S BEEN AGES.

So what happened was life. And my fiance's tablet exploded and she couldn't afford a new one.

SO THE PLAN IS:
1. She buys/borrows a tablet
2. She draws until she drops dead
3. We give you sex

I'll update you guys later. Ah hah.. ;_;

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