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Welcome to my fanfic thread. I'm a first-timer at this, so critique is greatly appreciated.

Right now I only have one offering:

In My Father's Shadow
Spoilers: AAI-5
Rating: K+
Genre: Angst/Family
Pairing: Byrne/Kay (parental)
Summary: After the events at the Allebahst/Babahl embassy, Kay reflects on her past, her relationship with her father, and her path in life. Fluffy oneshot.

It's my first ever fic for a public audience; let me know if you liked it (or didn't).

EDIT: Whoops. Fixed spoiler notification
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We have no dreams at all or interesting ones. We should learn to be awake the same way — not at all or in an interesting manner.


Last edited by KingRaptor on Sat Apr 03, 2010 2:23 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Re: KR's Fics - In My Father's Shadow (oneshot)Topic%20Title
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As perfect as I am, I'm also unique

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Nice, she go's into the past and realises how much she misses him thats so sweet
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That is actually pretty good, especially for a first published story! I like how you focused on a relationship that was a little more than a plot device in the game. Keep up the good work!
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