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These were made as a request for Zxblade.
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I see improvement.
However, I still have to critique:
- Try adding some extra details- It still looks too much like Bat in Grey's outfit.
- In that one pose, it looks unnatural because you just mirrored the arm.
- The moving mouth doesn't look like a mouth at all. Before scratching your mouths, practice first. I had the same problem. But after a while it will come. Now, I scratch all of my mouths, and they don't look unnatural. Tip - All mouths have a tongue and teeth.
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Decided to move the hands.
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EDIT:Animations and mugshot:
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Lisa Basil TWEWY style
It sucks.
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Sweating:
I Love these.
You have improved :D
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Improvement x10 :3
Nice job :) It's nice to see your improvement! ^^
About your self sprite redux, on that one there's improvement x20. Keep it up~
Also, as crit in general, you should practice scratching mouths some more. Try really looking at the in-game ones, as mouths were actually quite tricky - for me as well.
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AN EDIT!
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The defence ones are like that only so it would be noticable enough.
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The cuteness of Neneko compels you <3
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Aww, that's so good! :D
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Try editing Redd's body or making the defence Phoenix's body bigger and then adding the hand to it.
It would propably look better in that way, not that there would be anything wrong with that one either.
Try it.
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Sorry to ask so many times, it's just been a really long time since I requested it.
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Yes, I believe I had a thread about that in the introductions section, but I don't want to bring that up again. Anyways, it's ok if you aren't able to do it. I don't know if I can do it, but I can try.
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I'm okay with it.
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EDIT: Lazy animations of Terry.
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Made with Franziska's body and Phoenix's head.
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