Hi everyone, My name is Sid, this is where you can find some stuff of mine. Feel free to use, unless it say's you need permission. In that case, just send me a message (PM or MSN button below). I also do requests, send me a message if you want me to make something by saying so in a comment or by clicking PM button below. I'll take 3 request at a time.
Your other sprites are all ok but this one seems really, dare I say, lazy for an OC. Anybody could make this in 5 minutes. You need to change more than clipping off his spikes, removing his bracelet and changing just two shades on his suit. There's still loads of red bits left.
I like your Edgey objection, particularly in the sprite test.
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Your other sprites are all ok but this one seems really, dare I say, lazy for an OC. Anybody could make this in 5 minutes. You need to change more than clipping off his spikes, removing his bracelet and changing just two shades on his suit. There's still loads of red bits left..
And the first Nick edit was so small it didn't even see it at first other than the fact he was flipped! Also the mouth on the labtop nick to akward. It has a strange shape and no shading or anti alas. And you should hear this now but elarging something in MS paint (or anything eles really) is a bad idea, I know I've tried, it never comes out well.
I'm sorry if this sounded harsh but its better you get this construtive criticismnow rather than later so you can improve! Keep at it! (ps if two commets from me show up I'm not trying to be a troll. Internet explorer is acting stupid so if that happens I'm sorry.)
They're nice. I like the Gumshoe prison one. Sorry to nitpick, but on the laptop on, in my opinion, Nick's mouth is moving too fast. You can leave it if it doesn't bother you, I'm just telling my opinion.
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P.S. If you're doing requests, I'd like one of Furio Tigre Defence. EDIT: Scratch that, already found one. Now I need Troupe Gramarye Franziska.
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To my knowledge, there's nothing enlarged in my post at all.
The head on the criminal Oldbag is enlarged see. and here is the original head
By the way what I meant on the prosecutor Phoenix Wright is that all that I can see is that you flipped the direction he was facing and removed the badge. All I was saying is that the change was slight.
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