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Roc Wright - Ace AttorneyTopic%20Title
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After 10 years that Phoenix lost his badge, a new defense attorney appears named Roc Wright, the unknown Phoenix's brother.

Profiles:

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Name: Roc Wright
Age: 21
Occupation: Lawyer
A young lawyer, who, unknown to himself, is the brother of one of the best attorneys there ever was; Phoenix Wright.

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Name: René Basset
Age: ??
Occupation: Prosecutor
René used to live in France, but for unknown reasons he moved to the US. Some people say that he was really good in France, but Phoenix doubts it.

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Name: Agatha Mythe
Age: 27
Occupation: Prosecutor
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Name: ????
Age: ????
Occupation: ????

Name: ????
Age: ????
Occupation: ????

Profiles to be unveiled soon!

Game on PyWright.
(Was supposed to be on LuAA, however B12Core cancelled it.)

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Cases:
1 - Turnabout Remains
Status:
Scripting finished, beginning the case.
Synopsis:
Spoiler:
A murder is committed during a meeting and a... boy is the only witness?


2 - Turnabout Meetings
Status:
Script being written.
Synopsis:
Spoiler:
For some time, Roc had no idea he had a brother, so didn't Phoenix; but one day...


3 - Turnabout Rebeginnings
Status:
Scripting finished, beginning the case.
Synopsis:
Spoiler:
A magician forces Roc to time travel back to 2012, thus changing the past events, causing changes in the present (2029).


4 - Linked Turnabout
Status:
Scripting finished, beginning the case.
Synopsis:
Spoiler:
The changes made in 2012 by Roc causes his present day to be extremely changed.


5 - The Last Turnabout
Status:
Script being written.
Synopsis:
Spoiler:
Roc, now 18 years older, has to face his hardest case ever.


Screenshots:

(Old version) Case 1:
Spoiler:
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Re: Roc Wright - Ace Attorney - Writer neededTopic%20Title
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This thread has so many coincidences with RK:AA
I'll keep an eye on you. :grey:
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Auraion wrote:
This thread has so many coincidences with RK:AA
I'll keep an eye on you. :grey:


Seconded. Auraion was telling me how you plan to have the same third case as him :S
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let me guess, pearls going to be the prosecutor
Go to the Trucy Wright AA forum
http://forums.court-records.net/games/collboration-trucy-wright-ace-attorney-may-contain-spoilers-t18321.html#p1044314
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I'll post the "coincidences" here...
Lokao0 wrote:
After 10 years that Phoenix Lost his badge, a new defense attorney appears named Roc Wright, the unknow Phoenix's brother. The jurist system don't exist anymore because Mr. Wright disappeared.

Ok... same timeline... well TW:AA has it, so I guess it's ok... No more jurist system?...
Auraion wrote:
Takes place 10 Years after Trials & Tribulations (3 years after AJ) The begining of the story of Ryu Kenji, a young "rookie" prosecutor. Lost his memory, he was found by the fierce prosecutor Franziska Von Karma. He was trained by Von Karma to become a prodigy. The story takes place in the same country as AA games (Los Angeles, Japusa) The jurist system was taken down because Mr. Wright left, and a corrupt person took charge, making a lot of Guilty people, declared Innocent. Now Udgey has his power back! :karma:

Also...
Lokao0 wrote:
Hopefully on LuAA

Hehe... funny I wrote the same.
Auraion wrote:
Casemaker: Hopefully on LuAA


The profiles... well, I guess I'm not the firs one to make it that way.
but...
Lokao0 wrote:
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Name: Franziska Von Karma
Age:29
Occupation: Retired Prosecutor
Comments: Friend of Roc Wright, but she don't see him anymore, she's busy now.

Oh, a retired prosecutor? The great Von Karma? Why is she busy if she's not a prosecutor anymore? In my game, It's because she's taking care of her family.
I know I agreed that Ryu could make a cameo, but why did you wanted to make the third case, "Turnabout Shattering" too? (That conversation was on msn)

Well, that's all I can say for now.
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Sorry D:
I deleted some coincidences :edgy:

About the "Turnabout Shattering" that's because i wanted to in one game you play as a prosecutor, and in another, play as a Defense attorney
:lana: But i don't want to make this anymore xD

And i'm adding more infos :hotti:
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Trybien wrote:
let me guess, pearls going to be the prosecutor

She's not a prosecutor, she's a defense attorney.(as Auraion stated )

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Lokao0 wrote:
Trybien wrote:
let me guess, pearls going to be the prosecutor

She's not a prosecutor, she's a defense attorney.

No, she's a spirit medium.
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:lana: Yeah. My head is confused :grey:
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Lokao0 wrote:
Trybien wrote:
let me guess, pearls going to be the prosecutor

She's not a prosecutor, she's a defense attorney.(as Auraion stated )


It was just a joke, because of all of the "coincidences"
Go to the Trucy Wright AA forum
http://forums.court-records.net/games/collboration-trucy-wright-ace-attorney-may-contain-spoilers-t18321.html#p1044314
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Fixed Logo :edgy: adding more info (again) :hotti:
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Dick Gumshoe is now the witness for case 3 :eh?:
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Okay...
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After over 9000 years, I'm back.
I changed some things on the topic.
I'm not sure if Auraion will want RK to make a cameo in the game, must talk with him 'bout that.
Case 1 has been changed, and is being made on AAO.
Bye D:
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FIRST CASE RELEASED!
Link to play: http://aceattorney.sparklin.org/jeu.php?id_proces=34689
It's on AAO, so whatever.
Please post here if you find glitches or random crap.
Also, tell me what you think of it; what's good, what's bad, what's horrible, what's whatever.
Thanks!
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I stopped playing after some hastily written dialogue and when the Judge said "Court is in session for the trial of Mr. Kiky Oass." That's the victim, right? Why is he on trial?

Needless to say, this isn't very good. You need to start over, work out the facts of the case, get characters and their back story straightened out, (Seriously? Godot is out of jail and is rude to Phoenix after the two found an understanding with each other in the last case of T&T?) and work on the dialogue. If you're going to make a game, you need to put your heart into it. Otherwise, no one will bother to give this a second glance. I apologize if I came out as rude, but no one will bother to play if you don't take making a game seriously.
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SilentBobX wrote:
I stopped playing after some hastily written dialogue and when the Judge said "Court is in session for the trial of Mr. Kiky Oass." That's the victim, right? Why is he on trial?

Needless to say, this isn't very good. You need to start over, work out the facts of the case, get characters and their back story straightened out, (Seriously? Godot is out of jail and is rude to Phoenix after the two found an understanding with each other in the last case of T&T?) and work on the dialogue. If you're going to make a game, you need to put your heart into it. Otherwise, no one will bother to give this a second glance. I apologize if I came out as rude, but no one will bother to play if you don't take making a game seriously.


I know that this first case is not explained correctly, and it's very short.
However, that is actually proposital.
This first case is related to the third one, which will explain thing over.
About the things you said...
I don't see Godot being rude with Phoenix. He's just talking as he always would.
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He's talking to Phoenix as if he still hates him. Godot called Phoenix "Trite" because he didn't like him. And, after playing a little more this is what Godot says : "Witness, you may testimony what you saw the day of the crime." ... My god... When you're done writing your script for the game, proofread it and make sure it makes sense.
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