Here's where I put the sprites I make:
Magnus Orion:


Agent Payne:


Prisoner (no name, First Sprite, didn't feel like posting entire sheet on old forums):

(I'm going to animate him, only partially finished though)

Comments and critiques PLEEEEEAAAAASSSEEEEEE!!!!

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I like Magnus Orion very much, but the nameless prisoner isn't my taste at all. His hair looks wrong at his "shocked" expression and his shoulders are too big for his head. If you could fix that he would be much better

Edit: Yesterday I tried to make a sprite, too. Kill me, I'm nooooo good XD Now I'm even more impressed by your work!! You really did a good job, screw nameless prisoner XD

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Last edited by Ralvor on Thu Oct 23, 2008 8:22 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Ha...!

First one: I Love It!!
Second: This too, but not as much.

Still...Michael (prison guy) is pretty cool.

...I hope ya don't mind If I call him as Michael? ^^
Ya know...Michael from prison break.

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Meh, call him what you like. (Never heard of Prison break, don't keep up on my media, unfortunately, or know many older ones, sadly )
He is my first sprite, so I didn't expect it to turn out that great anyway. Supposed to be the defendant for a fan-case I was planning (serial killer as defendant! ) but I have become ridiculously busy since school started, and since Casemaker 3 didn't come out yet and the code for the other two looks like its difficult (at least, when mixed with the little free time I now possess), the project is on hold. School is evil sometimes .
Thanks for pointing out the shoulders. Thats the second thing wrong with him someone's pointed out that I didn't notice. He felt like something was wrong with him, but I spend so long, I lose touch with what it is . Its cool when other people can point to where the problem is so I can fix it. Constructive criticism is the greatest idea ever! :)

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i think hes phykotic(good thing)!
i like sorta phykotic characters

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