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I decided to make a sprite comic, i already knew about the cases so i got to work right away, it is about Carlos Trial, an attorney working for Gavin & Co Law offices, it is set a year after trials and tribulations. I hope you enjoy this Trial & Co Production.

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Case 1:
Spoiler: Case Start
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Intro

01# - Intro

Day 1- Trial 1

02# - Wow! it's the one and only Kristoph
03# - God dammit I have a client
04# - The Brilliant track record of MR. C. Trial
05# - DO you even hear your self talking?
06# - the todally awesome detective
07# - of course, it's testimony 1
08# - guess what! it's the flashback
09# - sorrow tales and a monocle
10# - the witness is lying! I'm sure
11# - the wife of.... the victim
12# - the one of three gramare
13# - testimony 2 I choose you!
14# - no! strike that, revise it?
15# - do you remember when...
16# - the cake evidence is a lie
17# - the mysterious note from no where
18# - OMG Carlos in shock
19# - that card... never mind
20# - yo judgy bro what you doing here eio?
21# - the murder weapon is... what I wonder?
22# - what! Impossible but it's...
23# - The box is a lie (not the cake)
24# - The Verdict is right, not wrong
25# - The End of the end
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Case 2:
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intro
01# - intro

Day 1- Investigation 1

02# - Too the Airport Kristoph and step on it
03# - It's only the Start
04# - Like a gum on your shoe he's always... gummy
05# - oops adaisy I did it again
06# - Tick Tock Tick tock round the clock
07# - get him! ha ha lucky I had a watch
08# - Don't wine wait! This isn't so bad!
09# - solo tour of the house
10# - my name is... Frank...Smith
11# - Yo Yo Do you like my Keen eye?
12# - Bad timing! knock next time!
13# - Gill (Nye the science guy)
14# - you unwanted son of a @*$%"
15# - Hey Pal! Look here do you want a cookie?
16# - NO! that's quite impossible my friend!
17# - The facts, the fiction and the detention centre
18# - to the detention mobile!
19# - er... I sort of have a request
20# - Evidence my dear watson.
21# - unexpected things always happen
22# - Rookie from no where

Day 2- Trial
23# - The New Courtroom
24# - The Justice in the scales of justice
25# - The Justice scales
26# - Look through A Diffrent Light
27# - your Opening Statment
28# - Gumshoe get behind that stand me friend
29# - There's no law against thinking
30# - The random Floor Plan
31# - Everyone's favorite Procecutor
32# - Testimony please, and hurry
33# - Mad Fransiska
34# - He's....Dead

Day 2-investigation
35# - Strange Detective
36# - I don't know!!!!
37# - It's....It's open!
38# - investigation mode on
39# - murder weapons
40# - Wocky Kitaki?
41# - Ivy university?
42# - dat is d hat
43# - anyone got a keen eye?
45# - it's better then his other phone :)
46# - Director Hotti

Day 2 - Trial
47# - Franziska on the defence!
48# - pictures and places
49# - The Autopsy!!
50# - He's in perfect health, It's the Panty statchers dad himself
51# - What! where did he come from?
52# - back in buissness matey.... argh!
53# - ...doh! why do I always do that!?
54# - The competley worthless diary in the trash
55# -The last witness, who will it be?
56# - The photos and the letters
57# - Random Outrage
58# - The True Verdict, and a sorrow end.

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Case 3-
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intro:
01# - The Intro

Day 1- Investigation
02# - The Note, Mr. Gavin and his cool office
03# - The Lennon Cafe' *Beatles refrence*
04# -Yin, Yang and... wait a minute does anything look familiar?
05# - Your going to get kicked out!
06# - Soft tears and a rag doll
07# - He's nearly blocking the camera!
08# - Oh great! Now he won't look at me!
09# - Ben Hope... Get it?
11# - Oh good, distractions
12# - The Detective
[url=Copy and paste your URL here]13# - Room Service![/url]
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Tell me what you think so far and i'll continue

EXTRA: 01# - Awkward...
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Credits
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This Sprite Comic is brought to you by Trial And Co.!
[jingle]Giving you a more brighter day![/jingle][/quote]
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Re: Carlos Trial Ace AttorneyTopic%20Title
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Whatever happened to Justin Order: Ace Attorney?
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Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
Whatever happened to Justin Order: Ace Attorney?

nobody liked it and both of the OC names had been taken
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Meh, some grammatical issues that need to be corrected. Kristoph's extended vocabulary doesn't seem to be applying here. Apart from these issues, everything is in "Order", he. :franny:
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UPDATE: Comic 4 & 5 are now up
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Erm... the Objection bubble?

Anyway, grammatical errors aside, pretty good. Although i'm not sure why Payne needed an Objection pose...

Oh, and Stan Still made me laugh, for some reason.
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Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
Erm... the Objection bubble?

Anyway, grammatical errors aside, pretty good. Although i'm not sure why Payne needed an Objection pose...

Oh, and Stan Still made me laugh, for some reason.

Oh and i can't fix the objection for some reason
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Luke Atemy? Luke Atemy Sandwich?
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The spriting has room for improvement, as does the grammar. It's a bit early for me to judge the plot, though, so I'll be keeping an eye on this comic.
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First off, who the hell is Luke Atemy? I think you mean Luke Atmey. Second, what happened to Angel Starr? Third, Please only update once per day. It gets confusing otherwise. I mean, update with as many comics as you want, just do it all at once. Finally, the reinstated Luke Atmey? Should he be, erm... in jail? Unless Luke Atemy wasn't a mispelling and is intended to be a different person...

Also, when is all of this actually happening? Clearly it's pre-AJ, 'cause Kristoph is here, but post T&T 'cause of the backgrounds.


Finally, you may want to use the proper text boxes.
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First off, who the hell is Luke Atemy? I think you mean Luke Atmey.

it was just a typo

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Second, what happened to Angel Starr?

I had to change it because of the plot

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Third, Please only update once per day. It gets confusing otherwise. I mean, update with as many comics as you want, just do it all at once.

Ok, I'll start to do that

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Finally, the reinstated Luke Atmey? Should he be, erm... in jail? Unless Luke Atemy wasn't a mispelling and is intended to be a different person...

after he was found out and Ron was free Luke went to Kristoph for an attorney and Kristoph managed to pin the blame on Kane, (he said it was suicide) so that is why luke is free

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Also, when is all of this actually happening? Clearly it's pre-AJ, 'cause Kristoph is here, but post T&T 'cause of the backgrounds.

What do you mean?

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Finally, you may want to use the proper text boxes.

I want to but i do not know how to get them

P.S: thanks for killing my fingers with all this typing :will:
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DefenceLawer wrote:
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Finally, the reinstated Luke Atmey? Should he be, erm... in jail? Unless Luke Atemy wasn't a mispelling and is intended to be a different person...

after he was found out and Ron was free Luke went to Kristoph for an attorney and Kristoph managed to pin the blame on Kane, (he said it was suicide) so that is why luke is free

I'd love to see that trial.
:garyuu: : Kane Bullard killed himself, sounded the alarm without leaving fingerprints, then stuffed his own body in a safe!"
:udgy: : Well, i'm convinced.
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DefenseLawer wrote:
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Also, when is all of this actually happening? Clearly it's pre-AJ, 'cause Kristoph is here, but post T&T 'cause of the backgrounds.

What do you mean?

What I mean is, what is the date? You never gave us one.

DefenseLawer wrote:
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Finally, you may want to use the proper text boxes.

I want to but i do not know how to get them

P.S: thanks for killing my fingers with all this typing :will:

It's in this sprite sheet.
http://www.court-records.net/rips/miscs ... 0basic.png

P.S: You're welcome :will:
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NEW Luke Atmey seems OK, though the hair could use some improvement in his spike pointing to the right. Apart from that and the OBJECTION! bubble issue (not pointing grammatical issues), everything is C OK.
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I kinda like how this comic is going at the moment, but there is one thing that is really bugging me.
Spoiler: AJ Spoilers
If Kristoph knows who Apollo is (meaning the whole "fine" comment) shouldn't he be in jail? Or dead depending on if he got the death penalty or not.
Other then that I would like to see you make more.
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Darklord Qwerven wrote:
I kinda like how this comic is going at the moment, but there is one thing that is really bugging me.
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If Kristoph knows who Apollo is (meaning the whole "fine" comment) shouldn't he be in jail? Or dead depending on if he got the death penalty or not.
Other then that I would like to see you make more.


no he still knows apollo because he has just shortly joined Gavin & Co Law offices, it just hasn't been apollo's first trial yet.
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Interesting new issue... But...

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How could've Kane Bullard killed himself THEN sound the alarm? Maybe if he stabbed himself, sounded the alarm and stuffed himself in there would've sounded better.

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Bitter_Godot wrote:
Interesting new issue... But...

Spoiler:
How could've Kane Bullard killed himself THEN sound the alarm? Maybe if he stabbed himself, sounded the alarm and stuffed himself in there would've sounded better.

I know, i'll have to change it, it was Lind_L_Talior who said the joke, i just wrote it down wrong
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DefenceLawer wrote:
Bitter_Godot wrote:
Interesting new issue... But...

Spoiler:
How could've Kane Bullard killed himself THEN sound the alarm? Maybe if he stabbed himself, sounded the alarm and stuffed himself in there would've sounded better.

I know, i'll have to change it, it was Lind_L_Talior who said the joke, i just wrote it down wrong


Oh! Don't worry 'bout it, just trying to cooperate.
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Thank you for asking to use those first.

I mean, go ahead and use them, but in future, ask first. That's generally considered sprite theft otherwise.
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Her personality... I like it!
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UPDATTEEEE!!!!
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DefenceLawer wrote:
UPDATTEEEE!!!!

You... certainly took your sweet time telling us that.

Nah, just joking.
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Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
Thank you for asking to use those first.

I mean, go ahead and use them, but in future, ask first. That's generally considered sprite theft otherwise.


Sorry, i waited for hours for you to come on, when you didn't i tried to give you as much credit possible
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DefenceLawer wrote:
Lind_L_Tailor wrote:
Thank you for asking to use those first.

I mean, go ahead and use them, but in future, ask first. That's generally considered sprite theft otherwise.


Sorry, i waited for hours for you to come on, when you didn't i tried to give you as much credit possible

Erm... why didn't you just PM me? i'd receive the message as soon as I logged on next...

And for the record, I do actually have to sleep sometimes.
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I'm pretty sure its impossible to have cracked the case with the current info, though I may be wrong >_>
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I'm pretty sure its impossible to have cracked the case with the current info, though I may be wrong >_>

sorry i missed out a page

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Ok, now this comic makes a bit of sense. It made none previously but I didn't want to say anything...

Anyway, I think you forgot to add Hold It! bubbles.

Also, a tip: to make the bubbles not go seethrough, colour the outside differently, and then make paint leave out that colour.
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UUUUPPPPPPPDDDDDAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTEEEEE!!!

but i am still editing the objection and the hold it bubbles,
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A whiff of hot air? What was that?!
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The plot is not really judgeable right now, but you should do something about the grammar and the spelling first. I don't want to be a nitpicker, but it really destroys an important part of the atmosphere. You could send the text through a spellcheck.
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Perrydotto wrote:
The plot is not really judgeable right now, but you should do something about the grammar and the spelling first. I don't want to be a nitpicker, but it really destroys an important part of the atmosphere. You could send the text through a spellcheck.

Seconded.
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I just noticed this addition to the top:

DefenceLawer wrote:
it is set in 2023 (the same time as kristoph Gavin Ace Attorney) so i don't contradict anything Lind_L_Talior has wrote.



Actually, you've already contradicted something that happens in case 3!

Although i'm not really sure as to why it matters. It doesn't make a difference if you contradict other people's fanworks. Hell, i've contradicted Francis Equitas already! (Francis calls Kristoph his boss, although Kurtis would be his boss at this point.)
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Update! comics 11 to 23 added!
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DefenceLawer wrote:
Update! comics 11 to 23 added!


Huh, it's nice and all that you want to end the case, but, adding about 12 issues in a single is day is kinda too much. You need to keep the crowd in suspense.
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Whoo, that was a big one.

Anyway, aside from the obvious faults - Poor grammar, faulty logic, not looking accurate to the games, etc. - this is looking pretty good. I like the whole twist with Luke being the killer. You'd think that the police would have noticed that there wasn't enough glass for a glass of water, but I suppose that if Atmey was in charge of the investigation, he could have rigged it as such.
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How could he have known the card had something to do with Luke when it says in the description: "a strange card I don't know what it is"?
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How could he have known the card had something to do with Luke when it says in the description: "a strange card I don't know what it is"?

He read the trial record
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I'd really like to read this...if not for the fact I'm the worst example of a grammar/spelling nazi ever... >_o;
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DefenceLawer wrote:
Greeny wrote:
How could he have known the card had something to do with Luke when it says in the description: "a strange card I don't know what it is"?

He read the trial record

Between the time he recieved it stating he knew nothing about it and the time he yelled at Payne?
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Oyashiro-Tan wrote:
I'd really like to read this...if not for the fact I'm the worst example of a grammar/spelling nazi ever... >_o;

I second this. The only HUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGE fault this comic has is the spelling and grammar.

Please, use a spellcheck or something! I don't mind a typo here and there, but please!
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