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To all members the audition for edgeworth was by me and not oneknux just to clarify that also my audition was done on a bad mic so once i get a new one i will be perfect for edgeworth as the other candidates dont quite fit the role thanks again prosX
Well well Prosecutor X, we shall see won't we? Good luck and let the best man win.
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The Xs wrote:
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To all members the audition for edgeworth was by me and not oneknux just to clarify that also my audition was done on a bad mic so once i get a new one i will be perfect for edgeworth as the other candidates dont quite fit the role thanks again prosX
Well well Prosecutor X, we shall see won't we? Good luck and let the best man win.


War of the X's, anyone?
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SORRY! I've been punished/on vacation for a while. Now I really need to catch up. PM or e-mail would be appreciated. :phoenix:
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Ayasato-chan wrote:
SORRY! I've been punished/on vacation for a while. Now I really need to catch up. PM or e-mail would be appreciated. :phoenix:

We've all been waiting for the latest copy of the script from you so we could expand on it. Last we heard, you had the script last. No hard feelings, we just kinda need that script.
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random idea for the scripting process.


im not an expert on wiki... but would it be possible to get a wiki site thats free, and also to assign certain members to edit certain things. like certain rank titles can only edit in one spot of the wiki. I think it'd be easier then sending .doc files via email/pm and so we don't get a situation like ayasato(where she couldn't go on the computer)
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current assignment I want writers to do:
1) hand in a copy of the first case script by the end of the month. rough or not, we need something.
2)work on case 2.

try to make it suspenseful and comedic.
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Here, for all to see:

Spoiler: THE SCRIPT v.1.0
[The apartment door opens, and Cindy walks in with a suitcase. She walks to a table and takes the Thinker out of her bag, looks at it and smiles a little, then sets it down. She presses a button on the nearby answering machine.]

Answering Machine: You have 58 new messages.

[Cindy presses the button again with a surprised look on her face.]

Automated Message: Saturday. August. First. Ten. Oh. Five. AM.

Answering Machine (Larry): "Hey, baby, Larry here. Uh, I don't know if you got my other messages, but we really need to get together again sometime, y'know? I mean, what's it been, 2 months-"

[She rolls her eyes and presses another button several times.]

Automated Message: Message deleted.

Automated Message: Saturday. August. First. Ten. Oh. Seven. AM.

Answering Machine (Larry): "Hey, baby, Larry again. I thought that maybe you misplaced my number it's 9-

Automated Message: Message deleted.

[She walks into her bedroom and tosses her suitcase into the corner before sitting down on her bed. With a sigh, she squeezes her eyes shut and rubs her temples as if she has a headache.]

Automated Message: Saturday. August. Third. Eleven. Fifty. Six. AM

Answering Machine (Sahwit): Hm? Oh, sorry. Wrong number!

Automated Message: Saturday. August. Third. Twelve. Thirty. Nine. AM

Answering Machine (Larry): Hey, baby! It's Larry! I thought I might stop by your place, see if everything's alright. I should be there in about twenty minutes. See you there!

[Cindy pushes a button on her answering machine]

Automated Message: All. Messages. Deleted. End of Messages.

[Suddenly, there's a crash. She starts, then cautiously walks out into the living room.]

[Close-up on the Thinker as a shady-looking hand grabs it. The hand swings the Thinker through the air, and... THUD! Cindy falls to the floor. The hand, very shakily, sets the Thinker back on the table.]

??? (aka Sahwit): [out of breath and very freaked out] Oh no... no... no! What... What have I done?! It's all over... I'll rot in prison for the rest of my life! ...No... somebody's got to take the fall for this...

[close-up on his face, but the top part is shadowed, so all you can see is his EBIL grin.]

???: ...And it's not gonna be me.

[He walks to the door and looks out into the hallway, Larry is walking by. He notices ???, looks over his shoulder and waves at him.]

???: I'll pin this murder on him!

[Cue Opening Theme]

[End Opening Theme]

[The sun starts shining, birds start chirping slightly as the sun is zoomed out and pans over to view the entire office as Phoenix walks in.]

Phoenix (A little tired, speaking in a yawn): *Yawns* Morning, Chief!

Mia (On her computer, cup of coffee in hand): Morning, Phoenix. How are you this morning?

Phoenix: Oh, I'm doing okay.

[Phoenix moves to recline on the couch, sighing in relief as he does so.]

Mia (Continuing to type on her computer when the phone rings. Mia takes it): Fey and Co. Law Offices. [pause] Uh-huh. [pause] Uh huh. [pause] Uh huh. Well, you know our rates, ri- [pause] I see. Well I'll ask him.

Mia (putting her hand over the receiver): Phoenix, someone is requesting you to be their attorney. Interested?

Phoenix: (Lazily) Hmm...? What's the case?

Mia: It's a murder case.

Phoenix: (Sarcastically) What idiot would ask exclusively for me?

[Mia takes her hand back off the receiver and puts it back over her ear]

Mia: Sorry, but what was your name...? *Pause* I see. (To Phoenix) He says his name is Larry Butz.

[Phoenix's face slowly becomes more and more shocked, making noises to reflect this. He rushes over to the phone and snatches it from Mia, to her surprise.]

Phoenix: Larry! Don't worry about a thing! I'll represent you in court, you have my word!

[Phoenix hangs up the phone, then grabs his coat and rushes out the door.]

Mia: Phoenix!? What's the matter?!

[Locks the office and runs after Phoenix, who is running at a fast pace.]

{Scene Transition ~ Detention Center}

Phoenix: I'd like to see Mr. Butz please.

Guard: Wait a few minutes...

[Guard leaves to retrieve Larry, who you can hear sobing in the background.]

[At this point, Mia comes in, short of breathe]

Mia: W-will *gasp* you te-ll me *gasp* what's the matter now...?

[Phoenix looks grim as he slowly turns towards the Cheif, a.k.a. Mia]

Phoenix: This man... Larry Butz, is a close friend of mine.

Mia: (sympathetically) So that's why you dashed out...

Phoenix: (Jokingly) You could say he's the reason why I wanted to be a defense attorney...

Mia: (surprised) That's news to me. Why don't you tell me abo-

[Larry entersand starts to break out in a rush of emotions]

Larry: WAAAHHHH! Nick! My Cindy... MY LOVELY CINDY!!! Please Nick help me get outta here! They think I did it... But she was my cupcake! How can they think that!

[Phoenix performs a facepalm]

Phoenix: (soothingly) Calm down Larry... tell me what happened.

Larry: Dude, my girl... MY CINDY! She's d...d...

Phoenix: Dead?

Larry: (Switching over to fearful) Y-yeah! and they think I did it! They put it in this paper too.

[Larry hands Nick the Local Paper, where he reads the front page. Phoenix reads aloud:]

Larry Butz, Age 22, was arrested this morning on the grounds of murdering his girlfriend, Ms. Cindy Stone, in her apartment building.

[Phoenix pauses and looks at Larry who is biting his nails. He then continues.]

A statement by the police investigators reveals that Ms. Stone was killed by being hit with a blunt object. The object in question, however, has no yet been revealed to the public. Mr. Butz's trial has been scheduled for this afternoon.

[Nick stops reading and looks at Mia]

Phoenix: I'm taking Larry as my first client Chief...

Mia: A murder trial right off the bat? That really says alot about you... and Mr. Butz here. Okay then.

[Both leave the DC and walk over to the courthouse]

{Scene Transition ~ Courthouse: Defendant's Lobby}

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I love it already :will:
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Hey guys, I took it upon myself and made a Wiki Page for this projects:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phoenix_Wr ... me_Project

So you guys can keep it updated, I will too with whatever I can. HTML Knowledge is a plus. If need be I can maintain if for you guys fully?

Also, for critiuque, cuz I'm looking for my, my new Phoenix Audition audio is up for a listen:

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The Xs wrote:
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To all members the audition for edgeworth was by me and not oneknux just to clarify that also my audition was done on a bad mic so once i get a new one i will be perfect for edgeworth as the other candidates dont quite fit the role thanks again prosX
Well well Prosecutor X, we shall see won't we? Good luck and let the best man win.



That's the spirit, I was only inducting friendly banter anyways, a little competition never hurt anyone!


Also I will be working on the script tonight and will hand in a draft copy to? any writer or hakuro de killer?
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Hakuro is a wise choice. But could you send me the corrections/additions you put also, so I could keep up?




EDIT: I'm working on piecing together the courtroom scene, which will be a tiny bit easier than original writing. :)


EDIT2: Court Scene 1 Finished. Up for critique and editing.

Spoiler: THE SCRIPT! ~COURT~ v.1.0
Judge: The court is now in session for the trial of Mr. Larry Butz.

Payne: The prosecution is ready, Your Honor.

Phoenix: (nervously) The, um, defense is ready, Your Honor.

Judge: [Clears throat] Ahem.

Judge: Mr. Wright, This is your first trial, is it not?

Phoenix: Y-Yes, Your Honor. I'm, um, a little nervous.

Judge: Your conduct during this trial will decide the fate of your client.

Judge: Afterall, Murder is a serious charge. For your client's sake, I hope you can control your nerves.

[Still sweating]

Phoenix: Thank... thank you, Your Honor.

Judge: (Pauses) Hmm...

Judge: Mr. Wright, given the circumstances...

Judge: I think we should have a test to ascertain your readiness.

Phoenix: [sweating profusely at this point] Yes, Your Honor.

Phoenix: (Gulp... Hands shaking... Eyesight... fading...)

Judge: This test will consist of a few simple questions. Answer them clearly and concisely.

Judge: Please state the name of the defendant in this case.

Phoenix: Um... the defendant... is me, right?

Mia: (shocked) Wright! Have you completely lost your mind? Focus!

Mia: The defendant is the person on trial!

Mia: [sighs] You're his lawyer!

Phoenix: Um, er, eh? Oh yeah, right! Eh heh heh.

Mia: This is no laughing matter!

Mia: You did pass the bar, didn't you?

Judge: Sorry, I couldn't hear your answer.

Phoenix: (More confidently) The defendant? Well, that's Larry Butz, Your Honor.

Judge: Correct.

Judge: Just keep your wits about you and you'll do fine.

Judge: Next question, This is a murder trial. Tell me, what's the victim's name?

Phoenix: (Whew, I know this one! Glad I read the case report cover to cover so many times.)

Phoenix: (It's... wait... Uh-oh!)

Phoenix: (No... no way! I forgot! I'm drawing a total blank here!)

Mia: Phoenix! Are you absolutely SURE you're up to this?

Mia: You don't even know the victim's name!? You heard it this morning at least a hundred times!

Phoenix: Oh, the victim! O-Of course I know the victim's name!

Phoenix: I, um, just forgot. ... Temporarily.

Mia: I think I feel a migraine coming on.

Mia: Look, the victim's name is listed in the Court Record.

Phoenix: O-oh! I see. Thanks Cheif!

Mia: *sigh*

Phoenix: Um... the victim's name is Cindy Stone.

Judge: Correct, Now, tell me, what was the cause of death?

Judge: She died because she was...?

Phoenix: Right... she was strangled, wasn't she?

Mia: Please tell me that was you talking to yourself.

Judge: If you wish to hang yourself, Mr. Wright, you're welcome to, but not inside my courtroom.

Phoenx: S-sorry!

[sweats alittle then looks at a file]

Phoenix: She was struck once, by a blunt object.

Judge: Correct.

Judge: You've answered all my questions. I see no reason why we shouldn't proceed.

Judge: You seem much more relaxed, Mr. Wright. Good for you.

Phoenix: Thank you, Your Honor. (Because I don't FEEL relaxed, that's for sure.)

Judge: Well, then... First, a question for the prosecution. Mr. Payne?

Payne: Yes, Your Honor?

Judge: As Mr. Wright just told us, the victim was struck with a blunt object.

Judge: Would you explain to the court just what that "object" was?

Payne: The murder weapon was this statue of "The Thinker."

Payne: It was found lying on the floor, next to the victim.

Judge: I see... the court accepts it into evidence.

Judge: Mr. Payne, the prosecution may call its first witness.

Payne: The prosecution calls the defendant, Mr. Butz, to the stand.

Phoenix: Um, Chief, what do I do now?

Mia: Pay attention. You don't want to miss any information that might help your client's case.

Mia: You'll get your chance to respond to the prosecution later, so be ready!

Mia: Let's just hope he doesn't say anything... unfortunate.

Phoenix: (Uh oh, Larry gets excited easily... this could be bad.)

COURT SCENE 1 FIN...

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Hakuro de Killer wrote:
Shadoninja wrote:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m8FKHDuf6mM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vs_tq7inB5M


Also, to comment on the videos:

Judge
OneKnux: Your first audition was very close to what I would have thought the Judge would sound like, but I think the Sean Connery was a little over the top. Your second one didn't match the Judge at all because there was no signs of age in the voice as it sounded like a young man of 17-24.


Thanks very much. Listening back, I think you're right about the second one, sounds way too young. Thanks for the opinion though ^^
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Spoiler: Script from pros x v1.0
The screen opens up to the view of the city to which music is played as you see lots of happy things such as people playing and people in cars etc, until the music turns dark or fades and it pans towards cindy's house

Cindy: "What?, what's this? another missed call, who from I wonder.
Checks her phone contacts "...Larry" and with a muted sigh she then places it down ready to go out of the apartment. She opens the door and sees a dark shadow in front of her and an expression of fear and shock appears on her face.

Meanwhile larry is walking up the stairs and heads towards her room and see's the door open

Larry: "Cindy are you in there?" he shouts with a little confusion sensing no reply
he then heads closer towards the door while the shadow is still across the corridor

Figure: *gasp*...gasp*...

"Dammit! ...Why me?"

"I can't get caught
Not like this!"

"I-I've gotta find someone
to pin this on"

He then looks round and is distracted by a large haired figure heading towards the same room he came from.

"Someone like... him!"
He begins to regain his breath from a sudden adrenaline rush from the idea of him framing the murder

"I'll make it look like
HE did it!" now his expression growing more and more sinister.

Sure enough larry reaches the apartment and enters hapharzordly

Larry: "Cindy, c'mon babe don't leave me out in the cold.....hey you've got the door open, getting some fresh air? Anyway I have something to tell you babe....I......" he then sees the body of his other on the floor drenched in her own blood.

"Cindy??!......C....Cindy babe???.........CINDY!!!!!!!!!!"

After a moment of shock and awe, police sirens echo in the background and dramatic music begins to play.


*Phoenix Wright anime theme tune begins*

Resuming the movie, the camera is panning across the city again and all is quiet in the early morning.

You see a cat walk towards a spot and lay down to rest.......a few seconds later a bike suddenly rushes past and makes the cat jump out of it's skin

Phoenix: "Sorry, I'm going to be late!"

Sure enough Phoenix is riding on his bike to the courts for his first trial, with a slice of toast in his mouth.

Through a few scenes of comedy regarding phoenix rushing through washing lines and getting undergarments on his head and unintentional bike stunts, he's still on the road not crashing or falling until he reaches the courts.

He finally gets there and parks his broken bike up

"Man I wish I had a proper means of transport" he says to himself with a sigh

Once inside he's looking round at the courts remembering the trial where he was the suspect, although you see vague images of the flashback, he sees young mia looking at him and shouting Wright at him. Sure enough the flashback ends by the current Mia interupting him by shouting Wright!

Phoenix: "Oh hiya chief!" he said still in a daze

Mia: "Phew I'm glad I made it on time" she said wiping a tear of sweat away from her forehead.
"Well I have to say Phoenix I'm impressed, not many people take a murder trial right off the bat like this you know...says a lot about you and your client as well"

Phoenix: "Umm thanks.......er...chief!"

Mia: "Now now Phoenix, I do have a name, It's Mia"

Phoenix: "Oh yes, sorry" he said awkwardly, rubbing his hand down his neck.

Mia: "I havent heard of our client yet, what's their name again?"

Phoenix: "His name's Larry and I kind of owe him a favour anyway"

Mia: "Oh you knew the client before this case?" she said slightly surprised.

Phoenix: "Yes, you see he was one of the reasons why I became a lawyer"

Mia: "News to me!"

Phoenix: "Yeah, I just want to help him, he's my friend, I owe him that much..."

Then the voice actor doing larry can add their own version of the doomsday lines he says next if they wish...

to be continued

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ProsecutorX wrote:
Spoiler: Script from pros x v1.0


I don't see anything :meekins:
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Ergheiz Zero wrote:
Hey guys, I took it upon myself and made a Wiki Page for this projects:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phoenix_Wr ... me_Project


Hey, sorry if it's a bother, but I've gone and edited that pages, ordered it out and added sections. If there's anything to be added, could you please tell me? I need to keep the page in the same system it's in, so if I could be the editor, that'd be good?
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JohnnyIo wrote:
ProsecutorX wrote:
Spoiler: Script from pros x v1.0


I don't see anything :meekins:




Woops! *edits* now you do :edgy:
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Ummm... I thought we'd agreed that Sahwit wouldn't be revealed in the beginning?

But we could incorporate some of those ideas into the script. I'll ask Shadoninja when he's on.
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Ayasato-chan wrote:
Ummm... I thought we'd agreed that Sahwit wouldn't be revealed in the beginning?

But we could incorporate some of those ideas into the script. I'll ask Shadoninja when he's on.



I see, may I ask why?

Also the writers should have each others IMs or something for easier feedback
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Suspense, I believe. I mean, sure we all KNOW he did it, but it was the director's idea...

*shrug*

And I'll PM you my info.
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Ayasato-chan wrote:
Suspense, I believe. I mean, sure we all KNOW he did it, but it was the director's idea...

*shrug*

And I'll PM you my info.



Fair enough.

We could edit mine so it doesnt show it's him but a shadowed figure instead? with no real way of seeing it's sahwit
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I suppose. Try it and we'll see. :)
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I have a feeling that wiki page is going to be delorted at some point. We have no sources you see. We'd have to have other sites mentioning it, to make it notable. :(

Still waiting for some assistance on what needs doing. Otherwise I'll get started on 1:2 Ep. 1
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Spoiler:
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I meant, what needs writing. I'm a writer with no idea what you need. XD

think you can gather a few writers and start work on case 2?

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Was I ever assigned anything in this project? I don't remember, you guys got everything you need? Just PM me an answer if you don't feel like responding in thread.


you can work with Gerkuman on case 2.

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To all members the audition for edgeworth was by me and not oneknux just to clarify that also my audition was done on a bad mic so once i get a new one i will be perfect for edgeworth as the other candidates dont quite fit the role thanks again prosX :edgy:

I don't think I ever got your auditions in the email, so I couldn't add yours.

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Here, for all to see:

[spoiler=THE SCRIPT v.1.0][The apartment door opens, and Cindy walks in with a suitcase. She walks to a table and takes the Thinker out of her bag, looks at it and smiles a little, then sets it down. She presses a button on the nearby answering machine.]

Answering Machine: You have 58 new messages.

[Cindy presses the button again with a surprised look on her face.]

Automated Message: Saturday. August. First. Ten. Oh. Five. AM.

Answering Machine (Larry): "Hey, baby, Larry here. Uh, I don't know if you got my other messages, but we really need to get together again sometime, y'know? I mean, what's it been, 2 months-"

[She rolls her eyes and presses another button several times.]

Automated Message: Message deleted.

Automated Message: Saturday. August. First. Ten. Oh. Seven. AM.

Answering Machine (Larry): "Hey, baby, Larry again. I thought that maybe you misplaced my number it's 9-

Automated Message: Message deleted.

[She walks into her bedroom and tosses her suitcase into the corner before sitting down on her bed. With a sigh, she squeezes her eyes shut and rubs her temples as if she has a headache.]

Automated Message: Saturday. August. Third. Eleven. Fifty. Six. AM

Answering Machine (Sahwit): Hm? Oh, sorry. Wrong number!

Automated Message: Saturday. August. Third. Twelve. Thirty. Nine. AM

Answering Machine (Larry): Hey, baby! It's Larry! I thought I might stop by your place, see if everything's alright. I should be there in about twenty minutes. See you there!

[Cindy pushes a button on her answering machine]

Automated Message: All. Messages. Deleted. End of Messages.

[Suddenly, there's a crash. She starts, then cautiously walks out into the living room.]

[Close-up on the Thinker as a shady-looking hand grabs it. The hand swings the Thinker through the air, and... THUD! Cindy falls to the floor. The hand, very shakily, sets the Thinker back on the table.]

??? (aka Sahwit): [out of breath and very freaked out] Oh no... no... no! What... What have I done?! It's all over... I'll rot in prison for the rest of my life! ...No... somebody's got to take the fall for this...

[close-up on his face, but the top part is shadowed, so all you can see is his EBIL grin.]

???: ...And it's not gonna be me.

[He walks to the door and looks out into the hallway, Larry is walking by. He notices ???, looks over his shoulder and waves at him.]

???: I'll pin this murder on him!

[Cue Opening Theme]

[End Opening Theme]

[The sun starts shining, birds start chirping slightly as the sun is zoomed out and pans over to view the entire office as Phoenix walks in.]

Phoenix (A little tired, speaking in a yawn): *Yawns* Morning, Chief!

Mia (On her computer, cup of coffee in hand): Morning, Phoenix. How are you this morning?

Phoenix: Oh, I'm doing okay.

[Phoenix moves to recline on the couch, sighing in relief as he does so.]

Mia (Continuing to type on her computer when the phone rings. Mia takes it): Fey and Co. Law Offices. [pause] Uh-huh. [pause] Uh huh. [pause] Uh huh. Well, you know our rates, ri- [pause] I see. Well I'll ask him.

Mia (putting her hand over the receiver): Phoenix, someone is requesting you to be their attorney. Interested?

Phoenix: (Lazily) Hmm...? What's the case?

Mia: It's a murder case.

Phoenix: (Sarcastically) What idiot would ask exclusively for me?

[Mia takes her hand back off the receiver and puts it back over her ear]

Mia: Sorry, but what was your name...? *Pause* I see. (To Phoenix) He says his name is Larry Butz.

[Phoenix's face slowly becomes more and more shocked, making noises to reflect this. He rushes over to the phone and snatches it from Mia, to her surprise.]

Phoenix: Larry! Don't worry about a thing! I'll represent you in court, you have my word!

[Phoenix hangs up the phone, then grabs his coat and rushes out the door.]

Mia: Phoenix!? What's the matter?!

[Locks the office and runs after Phoenix, who is running at a fast pace.]

{Scene Transition ~ Detention Center}

Phoenix: I'd like to see Mr. Butz please.

Guard: Wait a few minutes...

[Guard leaves to retrieve Larry, who you can hear sobing in the background.]

[At this point, Mia comes in, short of breathe]

Mia: W-will *gasp* you te-ll me *gasp* what's the matter now...?

[Phoenix looks grim as he slowly turns towards the Cheif, a.k.a. Mia]

Phoenix: This man... Larry Butz, is a close friend of mine.

Mia: (sympathetically) So that's why you dashed out...

Phoenix: (Jokingly) You could say he's the reason why I wanted to be a defense attorney...

Mia: (surprised) That's news to me. Why don't you tell me abo-

[Larry entersand starts to break out in a rush of emotions]

Larry: WAAAHHHH! Nick! My Cindy... MY LOVELY CINDY!!! Please Nick help me get outta here! They think I did it... But she was my cupcake! How can they think that!

[Phoenix performs a facepalm]

Phoenix: (soothingly) Calm down Larry... tell me what happened.

Larry: Dude, my girl... MY CINDY! She's d...d...

Phoenix: Dead?

Larry: (Switching over to fearful) Y-yeah! and they think I did it! They put it in this paper too.

[Larry hands Nick the Local Paper, where he reads the front page. Phoenix reads aloud:]

Larry Butz, Age 22, was arrested this morning on the grounds of murdering his girlfriend, Ms. Cindy Stone, in her apartment building.

[Phoenix pauses and looks at Larry who is biting his nails. He then continues.]

A statement by the police investigators reveals that Ms. Stone was killed by being hit with a blunt object. The object in question, however, has no yet been revealed to the public. Mr. Butz's trial has been scheduled for this afternoon.

[Nick stops reading and looks at Mia]

Phoenix: I'm taking Larry as my first client Chief...

Mia: A murder trial right off the bat? That really says alot about you... and Mr. Butz here. Okay then.

[Both leave the DC and walk over to the courthouse]

{Scene Transition ~ Courthouse: Defendant's Lobby}

that's so amazing
thank you so much.

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Hey guys, I took it upon myself and made a Wiki Page for this projects:

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Phoenix_Wr ... me_Project

So you guys can keep it updated, I will too with whatever I can. HTML Knowledge is a plus. If need be I can maintain if for you guys fully?

Also, for critiuque, cuz I'm looking for my, my new Phoenix Audition audio is up for a listen:

Phoenix-Wright-Audition-1

Phoenix-Wright-Audition-2


thank you so much, but is there any way to make it so only certain people can edit it? or are we on a trust system. I think a few people should back up the info on a .doc or something. just incase we get like wiki trolls.

and I haven't quite listened to your phoenix' yet, but I will when I do the phoenix aud vid.

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[spoiler=Script from pros x v1.0]The screen opens up to the view of the city to which music is played as you see lots of happy things such as people playing and people in cars etc, until the music turns dark or fades and it pans towards cindy's house

Cindy: "What?, what's this? another missed call, who from I wonder.
Checks her phone contacts "...Larry" and with a muted sigh she then places it down ready to go out of the apartment. She opens the door and sees a dark shadow in front of her and an expression of fear and shock appears on her face.

Meanwhile larry is walking up the stairs and heads towards her room and see's the door open

Larry: "Cindy are you in there?" he shouts with a little confusion sensing no reply
he then heads closer towards the door while the shadow is still across the corridor

Figure: *gasp*...gasp*...

"Dammit! ...Why me?"

"I can't get caught
Not like this!"

"I-I've gotta find someone
to pin this on"

He then looks round and is distracted by a large haired figure heading towards the same room he came from.

"Someone like... him!"
He begins to regain his breath from a sudden adrenaline rush from the idea of him framing the murder

"I'll make it look like
HE did it!" now his expression growing more and more sinister.

Sure enough larry reaches the apartment and enters hapharzordly

Larry: "Cindy, c'mon babe don't leave me out in the cold.....hey you've got the door open, getting some fresh air? Anyway I have something to tell you babe....I......" he then sees the body of his other on the floor drenched in her own blood.

"Cindy??!......C....Cindy babe???.........CINDY!!!!!!!!!!"

After a moment of shock and awe, police sirens echo in the background and dramatic music begins to play.


*Phoenix Wright anime theme tune begins*

Resuming the movie, the camera is panning across the city again and all is quiet in the early morning.

You see a cat walk towards a spot and lay down to rest.......a few seconds later a bike suddenly rushes past and makes the cat jump out of it's skin

Phoenix: "Sorry, I'm going to be late!"

Sure enough Phoenix is riding on his bike to the courts for his first trial, with a slice of toast in his mouth.

Through a few scenes of comedy regarding phoenix rushing through washing lines and getting undergarments on his head and unintentional bike stunts, he's still on the road not crashing or falling until he reaches the courts.

He finally gets there and parks his broken bike up

"Man I wish I had a proper means of transport" he says to himself with a sigh

Once inside he's looking round at the courts remembering the trial where he was the suspect, although you see vague images of the flashback, he sees young mia looking at him and shouting Wright at him. Sure enough the flashback ends by the current Mia interupting him by shouting Wright!

Phoenix: "Oh hiya chief!" he said still in a daze

Mia: "Phew I'm glad I made it on time" she said wiping a tear of sweat away from her forehead.
"Well I have to say Phoenix I'm impressed, not many people take a murder trial right off the bat like this you know...says a lot about you and your client as well"

Phoenix: "Umm thanks.......er...chief!"

Mia: "Now now Phoenix, I do have a name, It's Mia"

Phoenix: "Oh yes, sorry" he said awkwardly, rubbing his hand down his neck.

Mia: "I havent heard of our client yet, what's their name again?"

Phoenix: "His name's Larry and I kind of owe him a favour anyway"

Mia: "Oh you knew the client before this case?" she said slightly surprised.

Phoenix: "Yes, you see he was one of the reasons why I became a lawyer"

Mia: "News to me!"

Phoenix: "Yeah, I just want to help him, he's my friend, I owe him that much..."

Then the voice actor doing larry can add their own version of the doomsday lines he says next if they wish...

to be continued


I like the bike scene idea, if the writers could somehow incorporate it in aya-chans script it'd be great. but if everyone finds it too hard, don't make it harder for yourself.
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I can incorporate it. I just want Hakuro's feedback on it. Or anyother writers for that matter.
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Shadow you have added mine but you called it oneknux instead

The second one on the video is mine




Ah right thanks, it was just to show how clumsy or careless phoenix is at the early stages, anyones more than welcome for more ideas
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Ayasato-chan wrote:
I can incorporate it. I just want Hakuro's feedback on it. Or anyother writers for that matter.


Well, the main problem which was brought to my attention before was the matter of the power outage, which is a key part of the case.

I'll start working on the courtroom script tomorrow.
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Thank you. We'll have to fix that. I'll start doing that later tonight. And as for the court script... Could you look at the Wiki Page? I made a temp. script.
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I thought we'd agreed that the answering machine would cut out due to the power outage. which would cause the killer to be surprised and gasp or something.
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Perhaps instead of listening to her home answering machine, she is listening to messages left on her cell phone? That would solve the answering machine dilemma.

I've been following this project for a while now. I'm really impressed with what you've done.
So, I've been giving this egg business a shot. Click for glory!

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Noble Savant wrote:
Perhaps instead of listening to her home answering machine, she is listening to messages left on her cell phone? That would solve the answering machine dilemma.

I've been following this project for a while now. I'm really impressed with what you've done.



Yeah my original idea was that of a cell phone.


Anyways hows the progress coming ninja?
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I have a feeling that wiki page is going to be delorted at some point. We have no sources you see. We'd have to have other sites mentioning it, to make it notable. :(

Still waiting for some assistance on what needs doing. Otherwise I'll get started on 1:2 Ep. 1


look at the multi-quote post above for what I want you and zeon to do.

my mom and her idiot boyfriend want me to make a site for them, and I might be able to have their sites wiki for ourselves :P.
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I'll fix the script so that the answering machine is on her cell phone instead.
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Hey all. I apologize for not being around to do anything [granted, there hasn't been much to do for the artists]. But now that the writers came back from the dark depths, I'm going to get my butt in motion and actually do something. XD Like finish storyboard-ish-ing that opening I'd been working on. x_x;; I have it down on paper. I just gotta put it into Flash.

And regarding the script [Ayasato's]:

Murira from the script last time in the old thread wrote:
And the bit in the office...Considering the fact that Phoenix is a newbie and hasn't defended anybody yet, wouldn't he be more surprised that someone is specifically asking for him? I kinda imagined he'd be more like, "Wait, what? Me?" and then maybe, "Murder case? B-b-but Chief!" or something like that. And in the part where he talks to Larry on the phone...it all seems so sudden. Wouldn't he first be like, "Larry? Murder?! Larry, what happened?! Did you -- ? What? But I haven't -- all right, all right, don't worry, Larry, I'll defend you." Or something to that effect.


I like the bit with the bike that Prosecutor X had. XD; Though I don't think a defense attorney in LA would ride a bike around. Haha, or it'd just be more hilarious cuz a defense attorney in LA wouldn't ride a bike around.

And regarding a wiki...I have some webspace, so if I could just get my friend to give me access to mySQL...and if anyone can tell me which wiki software is best...we could have our own private wiki. :keiko:
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Murira wrote:
Hey all. I apologize for not being around to do anything [granted, there hasn't been much to do for the artists]. But now that the writers came back from the dark depths, I'm going to get my butt in motion and actually do something. XD Like finish storyboard-ish-ing that opening I'd been working on. x_x;; I have it down on paper. I just gotta put it into Flash.

And regarding the script [Ayasato's]:

Murira from the script last time in the old thread wrote:
And the bit in the office...Considering the fact that Phoenix is a newbie and hasn't defended anybody yet, wouldn't he be more surprised that someone is specifically asking for him? I kinda imagined he'd be more like, "Wait, what? Me?" and then maybe, "Murder case? B-b-but Chief!" or something like that. And in the part where he talks to Larry on the phone...it all seems so sudden. Wouldn't he first be like, "Larry? Murder?! Larry, what happened?! Did you -- ? What? But I haven't -- all right, all right, don't worry, Larry, I'll defend you." Or something to that effect.


I like the bit with the bike that Prosecutor X had. XD; Though I don't think a defense attorney in LA would ride a bike around. Haha, or it'd just be more hilarious cuz a defense attorney in LA wouldn't ride a bike around.

And regarding a wiki...I have some webspace, so if I could just get my friend to give me access to mySQL...and if anyone can tell me which wiki software is best...we could have our own private wiki. :keiko:


remember, nick doesn't have his driver's license.

speaking of driver's license. do you guys think that maya would have one? cause I think it'd be a funny case 3 pre-intro to have nick riding his bike to work, and maya passes by him in a car.

Phoenix: (I wonder what I should cook tonight) *car horns can be heard in the background softly* (maybe I could try a new recipe)
Maya: NICK!
Phoenix gasps and crashes into a light pole
Phoenix: M-maya? where'd you get the car?
Maya: it was my sisters. Hurry up will ya? Im starving and Steel Samurai's about to come on*drives away*
Phoenix: Steel.... Samurai?

*intro*
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remember, nick doesn't have his driver's license.

speaking of driver's license. do you guys think that maya would have one? cause I think it'd be a funny case 3 pre-intro to have nick riding his bike to work, and maya passes by him in a car.

Phoenix: (I wonder what I should cook tonight) *car horns can be heard in the background softly* (maybe I could try a new recipe)
Maya: NICK!
Phoenix gasps and crashes into a light pole
Phoenix: M-maya? where'd you get the car?
Maya: it was my sisters. Hurry up will ya? Im starving and Steel Samurai's about to come on*drives away*
Phoenix: Steel.... Samurai?

*intro*

Haha, he doesn't need to have a driver's license. There are buses in LA, y'know. There's even a subway, but I don't think they're even close to being as extensive as the NY subway or whatever subways there are over in that general direction of the country. There's like...four train lines. Haha, and actually, I think they even go up to street level at some places. I've seen some of the stops along the freeway...

XD;; And I don't think Maya would have a license.
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Murira wrote:
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remember, nick doesn't have his driver's license.

speaking of driver's license. do you guys think that maya would have one? cause I think it'd be a funny case 3 pre-intro to have nick riding his bike to work, and maya passes by him in a car.

Phoenix: (I wonder what I should cook tonight) *car horns can be heard in the background softly* (maybe I could try a new recipe)
Maya: NICK!
Phoenix gasps and crashes into a light pole
Phoenix: M-maya? where'd you get the car?
Maya: it was my sisters. Hurry up will ya? Im starving and Steel Samurai's about to come on*drives away*
Phoenix: Steel.... Samurai?

*intro*

Haha, he doesn't need to have a driver's license. There are buses in LA, y'know. There's even a subway, but I don't think they're even close to being as extensive as the NY subway or whatever subways there are over in that general direction of the country. There's like...four train lines. Haha, and actually, I think they even go up to street level at some places. I've seen some of the stops along the freeway...

XD;; And I don't think Maya would have a license.


Yeah but Phoenix is somewhat of a penny pincher, there's always complaints of having little money throughout all the same. I really like the idea of Phoenix using a bike, probably up until Maya could offer to drive him around. Could have some funny scenes of Maya jamming out to some girly songs or yelling at other drivers, while Phoenix just looks like he wants to escape.

As for not Maya not having a license, according to the timeline, she'd be 16 or 17 years old by this case, so legally she could have one. Course, since she has been somewhat secluded, she could not be aware that you need a license to drive. Cop pulls her over, hilarity ensues :will:
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For opening, we must have all character's on bikes. <3
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Larry must be on his bike Backwards, and Payne needs to have training wheels. XD
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