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End of part 1 of Cravatman's backstory.
What do you guys think?
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Um. Now the Doc's gone that makes me.... Head of the Project.
*Dan Dan Daaaaaan*
I've promoted Ceres to VP, to stop me going mad with power. This won't change that much for you all really, except that we might get more done. Or might not, who knows.
As for FeyS's first part of the history, it fits well. :)
I'd say
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Here's part 2 of Cravatman's story:
Here is the end of part 2, hope you guys like it.
Now part 3 is the most difficult to write.
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Well, congrats anyway, Gerk and Ceres! ^_^
Anyway, I LOVE how you're making Cravatman's story.
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Maybe his anger from being used in such a way becomes so strong that maybe dormant powers that he's had all along awaken?
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ps: I too am liking how the story is turning out.
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You mixed DL-6 and SL-9 together. XD
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Also the heroes's plan could fail because of an earthquake. I mean, I need to put an earthquake somewhere in the story.
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Yogi is the guy who gets sent down for the crimes, even tho he didn't commit them. Thus, he needs to trust Hammond, until Hammond sends him to the loony bin.
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Hows that?
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...For some reason, this completely ruins the seriousness of the situation. XD
*rumble rumble*
Heh heh heh. *drops*
Ouch! *cries*
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Also, with the changes is everyone okay, with part 2?
I mean, the ceremony at City Hall, Yogi's fiancee as a hostage, the rescuse plan, Yogi receiving the blame for the plan's failure and Perfection taking Miles as a son?
I also had an idea for Misty.
She is a hero that worked with Citro, her powers would be the same a Lady Life's power, the healing touch and the warm stare. Those powers fits her well.
She could try to save Gregory's life, but fails to heal him, and he dies. Of course, Miles begin to hating the Fey for letting.
Citro could try to defend her, saying that it's she tried her best, but everyone thinks that her healing powers are a sham.
She could go to Hazakura to train under Eldoon, remember that I said he could be a sage, that is an expert in healing.
In the end she would die, and she passes her powers to Iris, turning Iris into Lady Life.
Misty could be the Queen of Life, the Birth Royal or Mana Mistress, by the way, mana is a type of life force.
I know I'm creating another character, but she is important for the story of many other characters.
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It's pretty clear that Citro was the one who sold Misty to the press, which is why Redd has dirt on him. Since he was there at the accident, it also means he's being blackmailed by Karma. If Citro blags.... bye bye Maya...
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Nah, but seriously, seems like a good idea so far.
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I just want something that is sharp and will go straight through Gregory when it falls on him, for massive damage :)
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They could easily tie that to von Karma, though. Don't we need something that would make Lil' Miles think the Heroes did it? A weapon of one of the Heroes involved stolen by Manfred, perhaps?
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Ooh, ooh!!! I got it!!!
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Since they all becme prosecutors too, maybe they all go to the same law school? Then Riff figures out that Miles and Franny have superpowers like he does, but he soon realizes that they are not cut from the same cloth that he is. (being that they are villainous and he is heroic)
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Maybe some secret evil lab where they receive the weapons?
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*waits for them to take the bait*
But seriously, this is an interesting project. I'll have to keep an eye on it.
Maybe contribute a little, even.
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I'd say
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OF COURSE NOT... silly.
We all know who that belongs to.
Well, what are you guys currently working on, anyway?
Just know I'm a writer and can write some very good stuff if I have the write thing to right about.... owait, reverse that.
*shot for misuse of homonyms*
So yah. I'll keep an eye on this thread then.
(I still think Fedora Guy would be an awesome hero though *SHOT* JK! LOL.)
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I vote for an intentionally cheesy name like the 'The Temple of Evildoery'
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