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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EIxi85ZrzEs&e

So yeah, as of now it sucks. I'm going to do a little more research into Vegas and revisit this little project. On the whole, though, I think it came out so-so.

Please, for your own eyes watch it in high quality. The original file was 476 MB, the quality got reduced a lot in the shuffle.
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Is this your first time making something like this?
Because I'd say its good for someone who doesn't have a lot of experience, cept for the fact that most commercials wouldn't put a spoiler in XD
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Yeah, this is the first time I've ever done something quite like this. xD And yeah, I just realized that I had put in spoilers after I had finished the vid, and I didn't want to take it out, so I just marked it. But thanks for the feedback!
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I don't have Vegas, so I can't give you specific suggestions, but....

I think you should make the screens with the character art more dynamic. And zoom in on at least the upper half of their bodies when their names come up. Also, I know it's because of the quality it was recorded, but the soundtrak doesn't sync with the visuals during actual gameplay. But I think you can tweak the timing so it matches! :) Also, maybe you could darken the opening screen a bit? It was kind of hard to read some of the white text..... Also, you might want to remove the spoilers. XD There were quite a few.

Well, that's my professional opinion. :) (although I think I can hardly be called a professional, lol. XDDD)
I love the idea, though! I'm sure you can improve it greatly! :D
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Thank you very much for your feedback! There's still a lot I don't know about Vegas myself, and I actually wanted to zoom in on the characters but had no humanly idea how. That bothered me like nobody's business.

It was stupid of me not to edit the opening sequence, I admit that. :P I tend to get a little overexcited and miss some details.

Overall, I don't have much experience at all, and this was just something fun to do for me. When I figure out how to do some more tricks, I'll be sure to edit this, I promise! Again, thanks for your suggestions! :D
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