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Ms. Attorney's Fanfictions (NEW: Miego!)Topic%20Title
OfflineSuspect Mon Mar 08, 2010 8:17 am
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Hello; I'm new here, but I've been lurking around this site as a non-user for about a year. :godot:

Anywho, this is my official fanfiction thread! I'm excited to post some of my AA stories here; so far, I'm working on a multiple chapter novella about the life of Diego Armando :javado:
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that follows his life just before his coma and wraps up a bit after the end of T&T.


I'd appreciate any critiques! This story is Mature Content and contains game spoilers so I will post its off-site FF link.

The Bitterness of Blend 102 Rated M

Title: The Bitterness of Blend 102
Author: Ms. Attorney (Ronnen @ Fanfic)
Rating: M
Genre: Drama / Tragedy
Status: In-Progress
Pairing: Mia Fey x Diego Armando (Godot)
Summary: We know very little of Godot the man and therein lies the journey. Diego Armando travels the pathway to Hell and back again. This is his story of "death", revenge, and revival. M for sensuality, language, and brief sexual dialog.

Thanks for stopping in; love to hear what your thoughts are! :pearl-blush:
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Re: Ms. Attorney's Fanfictions (NEW: Miego!)Topic%20Title
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Definitely liked it, thought it was well written. The way Dahlia went suddenly from "Oh help me Mr. Armando!" to rubbing poor Diego's imminent death in his face was brilliant and suits her character perfectly.
I also found the interaction between Armando and Grossberg pretty funny (even if it was very cheesy).
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Re: Ms. Attorney's Fanfictions (NEW: Miego!)Topic%20Title
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KingRaptor wrote:
Spoiler:
Definitely liked it, thought it was well written. The way Dahlia went suddenly from "Oh help me Mr. Armando!" to rubbing poor Diego's imminent death in his face was brilliant and suits her character perfectly.
I also found the interaction between Armando and Grossberg pretty funny (even if it was very cheesy).


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What did you notice to be cheesy? xD I would like to know so I can change it; I hate cheesiness, ESPECIALLY in my own writing! I put in the whole spanking thing as sort of a joke as well as a play off of an early in-game mention of Mr. Grossberg being gay; as accused by Phoenix Wright. Lol, maybe I'll keep that scene there--I liked it. :gant:
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Re: Ms. Attorney's Fanfictions (NEW: Miego!)Topic%20Title
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Ms. Attorney wrote:
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What did you notice to be cheesy? xD I would like to know so I can change it; I hate cheesiness, ESPECIALLY in my own writing! I put in the whole spanking thing as sort of a joke as well as a play off of an early in-game mention of Mr. Grossberg being gay; as accused by Phoenix Wright. Lol, maybe I'll keep that scene there--I liked it. :gant:

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Yeah, the spanking is what I found cheesy. It's definitely funny though, so certainly keep it. :godot:
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Re: Ms. Attorney's Fanfictions (NEW: Miego!)Topic%20Title
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KingRaptor wrote:
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Yeah, the spanking is what I found cheesy. It's definitely funny though, so certainly keep it. :godot:


Ok, thank you so much! I will certainly heed your word. :gant:
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