Title: Ditching Eternity
Author: .Symphony.In.The.Abyss. (Me)
Rating: T
Genre: Fantasy/Romance/Action/Adventure
Status: Incomplete
Pairing: FranziskaxAdrian
Summary: Adrian's professor had her life taken away by mystical creatures called elves. She had learned only so much about elves, her professor saying that if they were to kill someone, they would have their reasons. Adrian would like to know why these elves killed her professor. But after being saved by the leader of the elves; Franziska, Adrian's life will either end or not. Her life prolonging only because an elven child wants to play with her. But when a war breaks out, how will things turn out for her?

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3735419/1/Ditching_Eternity

Other notes: I'm co-writing this with my sister. I believe her username here is blehgah_nyahmeh.

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Yeah, it's blehgah_nyahmeh, a hurr hurr.
So, um, yeah. I hope that people comment/like the story.

....I've only written one chapter of that, a hurr hurr. It's really too bad, you know. Oh well.

We're about 1/3 done so far, if you were wondering, folks. Four chapters, the last one mine!
I'll post more when I think of something to say, a hurr hurr.

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So, any comments? critisisms? >.> Anything? ...

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Um...well. I read some of it. I think there were a couple grammar/typo issues. But...eh. The entire thing seems...well, rather unbelieveable. Not just because of the fairies and goblins-the way the characters were portrayed really just...wasn't the best. To me, Franziska and Adrian were OOC, and it affected the storyline. A lot. 3/5 for the chapters I've read.

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Wow, someone finally commented. And... well, let's not say I'm too enthusiastic about this.

So, OOC, you say? Would you like to point out the things that were? It would help a lot because we can go back and fix it to fit the situation.

Also, Bern is new to writing Phoenix Wright, and since most of the chapters were hers... Yeah. >.> No offense, BTW. I'd... We'd really appreciate it if you would at least point out a few things. Like Franziska's speech patterns, or Adrian's general thoughts on things... And we haven't played TaT either, so we don't know how Adrian acts like she did then.

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