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Title: Unthinkable Turnabout
Author: EdWright24
Rated: PG-13 for Language and Violence
Chapters: 16 (13 Main 3 Filler)
Pairings: Phoenix/Maya Friendship
Timeline: After Trials and Tribulations (Gyakuten Saiban 3)
Synopsis: It's Christmas Eve, a fire claims the Wright & Co. Law Offices and Phoenix is believed to have been killed in the fire! But is it all as it seems? And why is Franziska Von Karma being blamed for the apparent murder? Find out!
Main Story:
Part 1: An Old Enemy
http://fullmetalninja25.deviantart.com/ ... 1-63044207
Part 2: Meeting Old Friends
http://fullmetalninja25.deviantart.com/ ... 2-64662404
Part 3: The Investigation
http://fullmetalninja25.deviantart.com/ ... 3-64859651
Part 4: Reunion and Detention
http://fullmetalninja25.deviantart.com/ ... 4-64912738
Part 5: Escape?
http://fullmetalninja25.deviantart.com/ ... 5-65148049
Part 6: Investigation Continues
http://fullmetalninja25.deviantart.com/ ... 6-65263889
Part 7: Investigation Concludes
http://fullmetalninja25.deviantart.com/ ... 7-65355742
Part 8: Von Karma Tells All
http://fullmetalninja25.deviantart.com/ ... 8-65516265
Part 9: Trial Begins
http://fullmetalninja25.deviantart.com/ ... 9-65676800
Part 10: All Hope Lost?
http://fullmetalninja25.deviantart.com/ ... 0-65811601
Part 11: The Devil Went To The Courthouse
http://fullmetalninja25.deviantart.com/ ... 1-65923333
Part 12: The Prosecution Rests
http://fullmetalninja25.deviantart.com/ ... 2-66115738
Part 13: Finale
http://fullmetalninja25.deviantart.com/ ... 3-66172228
Blank Fillers:
Filler 1
http://fullmetalninja25.deviantart.com/ ... x-64665720
Filler 2
http://fullmetalninja25.deviantart.com/ ... a-64746067
Filler 3
http://fullmetalninja25.deviantart.com/ ... K-65014579
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Don't worry I plan on doing just that, it'll be I'd say about 10-15 chapters altogether.
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She didn't, Maya did she kept it with her ever since Mia's murder.
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Be patient ok? I'm almost done, it'll be up by Noon (Eastern).
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Damn it I should've posted this before but....NO BADGERING ME WHEN I DON'T POST A CHAPTER UP IMMEDIATELY ON THE DAY I SAY IT'S GOING TO COME OUT! BE PATIENT!
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Some people need to be paitent. *Smiles sweetly*
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P.S. Oh and I won't badger you anymore...
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Excellant story though. That is one angry Franziska. I can't wait to see what she does to De Killer.
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You're doing great.~
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You're doing great.~
Thanks, by the way I like your story Turnabout Knockout.
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Can't wait for Part 10!
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What did I say about criticism? Unless it's helpful keep it to yourself. From the very beginning I wasn't planning on having the trial last long (but its not over yet).
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Can't wait for Part 12!
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*sniff*
It was a good bit, too.
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The reference to the games at the end made my day.
Fantastic story. I give it 9/10.
I would have given it 10 if it were a bit longer and had a little more to it, but it was still excellant.
Here's hoping you make more.
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The reference to the games at the end made my day.
Fantasitc story. I give it 9/10.
I would have given it 10 if it were a bit shorter and had a little more to it, but it was still excellant.
Here's hoping you make more.
Thank you for the 9, yes I will make more but I'll probably write a few one shots before I try a multi-chapter story again.
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But overall, great job!
Keep working at it, you've got lots of potential~
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But overall, great job!
Keep working at it, you've got lots of potential~I've gone back and fixed all the "hai"s and "demo"s, I'm afraid with all the Japanese stuff I read and hear its become a habit of mine to type Japanese terms. Anyways thanks for the compliment.
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