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Of course due to the spam blockage that FanFiction thinks is so necessary I can't post up the whole chapter for another day D:~ So while I await I decided to give out part of the beginning, to see what people think. It's not much but then again, it is only the start of Chapter 1 (which in Word alone is about over 4,000 words).
Note: This fanfiction will contain spoilers for Ace Attorney, Justice for All and /especially/ Trials and Tribulations.
Name: The Prologues to Guilt
Rating: T
Pairings: Phoenix/Iris, Phoenix/Dahlia (since Phoenix did think he was with Dahlia the whole time), Implied Dahlia/Doug Swallow, Mia/Diego.
The first chapter is now up! Go read and review ;3 Any comments can be posted here as well~
First Chapter ---> The beginning of an end (Dahlia Hawthorne POV): http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4059498/1/T ... s_to_Guilt
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Edit: One thing I just noticed. No matter what happened, Iris and Dahlia could never be Master of Kurain because their spiritual power is too weak (which was why Morgan was passed over in the first place) so there would be no reason for Morgan to flip out like that. If Maya is gone, Pearl would still be next in line.
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Mafia- Serious Business..lol
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Thank you~ I'm still in the process of proof-reading it since I still have time before FanFiction will let me go submit documents.
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Edit: One thing I just noticed. No matter what happened, Iris and Dahlia could never be Master of Kurain because their spiritual power is too weak (which was why Morgan was passed over in the first place) so there would be no reason for Morgan to flip out like that. If Maya is gone, Pearl would still be next in line.
You have a good point x3 But if you think about she just found out that a daughter that you abandoned more than a decade ago was still alive. Though they lacked spiritual power Morgan probably became scared since she was planning for so long to get Pearl up as the master.
I should have probably made that a little more clearer x3;;~ Thanks for pointing that out.
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Thanks again for the suggestion/criticism~
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Great work. I look forward to more!
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Mafia- Serious Business..lol
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So it's more like: she'll have to live /dealing/ with him for a while, instead of literally living with him x3; Sorry if that wasn't made clearer~ Thanks for your review on here and FF.
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