Title: My Only Love
Author: kristophlover967 / Phoenix and Maya Fan (You're so awesome. XD)
(Not completed.)

Courtroom Lobby #2
1:02 P.M.

"What the hell?" Miles exclaimed. ("Oh, it's... I've seen you somewhere.) "Oww..." *pause* "That's a nice way to greet someone after 3 years, Miles." (I know that voice...) "Ms. Adrian Andrews, is it? It's been quite a long time since we've last seen each other." "It has, hasn't it? *smiles* "Fancy seeing you here, Adrian. I would have never thought I would bump into you again, this time quite literally. Down on your luck once more?" Adrian sighs. "I believe you could say so... I was pulled in as a witness in the next courtroom. I wish I didn't have the misfortune of seeing so many crimes... It saddens me to see how horrible some people can be." "Ah, so what else have you been up to lately?" Edgeworth asked. "I've been working at the Tres Bien," she said. Miles interrupts. "I know that place all to well. Unfortunately, the food over there was so terrible I haven't been there ever since the murder. Detective Gumshoe invited me... " "It's changed. I bought out the restaurant and revived it." Adrian boasted. Surprised, Edgeworth replied. "Wow. So have you had many customers?" "Yes, it's busier now. It's hard to get a table on Friday or Saturday nights. Enough about me, though. Miles, what's been keeping you occupied?" "Oh, I've been prosecuting. I took a long break for awhile and I had traveled back to Germany. Things are better now." "Well that's good to hear, I've also been happier myself. I have you to thank for that. Miles, you taught me how to face my fears. Without you, I wouldn't be here." "I'm not one for flattery. You of all people should know that, Adrian. Well look what time it is, I need to get back to my office... I have a lot of work to do. You should meet me up there at about 5:00 this evening. Today happens to be my early day out of the office, so we can catch up more then."

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Wow, nice work so far. I can really picture this as I read it; that takes skill, my friend. On your part, that is. ^^

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It's good, nothing more, in my opinion. More vivid, fresher details would be recommended and the fact that it's only dialouge makes less room for the interesting. However, you have a good start and I suggest spacing the text out when Miles and Adrian speak, so that is is less painful on the reader's eyes. At times, it's difficult to tell who is speaking, so please work on that.
6.1/10

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Good so far KL keep up the good work!

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