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Re: Jade Edgeworth: The not so Perfect Prosecutor.
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Jade Edgeworth wrote:
"Jade Edgeworth? Is that her name? Miles nodded as the door creaked open slightly, a girl walking in a second later.
She looked about the age of fifthteen, her hair and her eyes were the same colour as Miles',
She looked about the age of fifthteen, her hair and her eyes were the same colour as Miles',
A spelling mistake. It should be "fifteen".
That out of the way, a good start. I thought Wright overreacted to the fact he has a sister, though. Keep on writing more. I tend to like OCs.
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