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Heh, the Judge is funny. "We all know Mr. Wright's going to win!" I choked on my waffle. Good job!
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Um...Chapter five is in progress?
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.Awaiting next chapter.
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It's fun to watch Iris help with the investigation and I thought it was cute that Phoenix had Maya take the Magatama away to show his faith in Iris.
Good job. I'll keep an eye out for more. Hopefully, your writer's block will break soon.
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You certainly have a point. I wasn't in my right mind. (Hardly ever am anyways.)
My writer's block has lifted. Chapter six in progress. Like before, it's pretty long, so it's going to be uploaded in two separate post edits.
Also, I've been meaning to change my Topic's title. Anyone want to help me? PLEASE??
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It's short, but that's because my writer's block hasn't entirely lifted. I planned chapter six out differently, waaaaaaay differently...but...somehow my impulse got the better of me. Huh
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There'll be two versions of Chapter eight. This post is getting too cluttered so Chapter eight won't be posted here. It'll be labeled:
"Indecision--A Phoenix/Iris FeenRis fanfiction: Original ending" and "Indecision--A Phoenix/Iris FeenRis fanfiction: Alternate ending". They were supposed to be "good" and "bad", but after careful consideration, I decided to make them both rather happy.
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Can't wait to see how it all turns out~
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Minor typo I noticed.
I felt the investigation phase to stay true to the gameplay but you make seem worthwhile to read with the seriousness of the situation and Phoenix's tone through the chapter. I felt Dahlia wasn't given enough time in the chapter considering her major role in T&T but that's just me. Aside from that and the typo I enjoyed it.
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i could see her with this look again:
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Great new chapter!
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No, I don't mean the next chapter is confirmed. I meant that there will be a sequel that comes after the last chapter of this story!
Ten chapters for the story. I estimate about 20,000 to 22,000 words by the end.
And I'll be making more cases afterward. Maya will star as Nick's Co-council.
And Iris will be housekeeper or something. Scandalous *wink wink*
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Instead, chapter 9 will be posted here.
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Still no fans...huh?
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However the trial so far was superb. A little dismayed to see Mia reappear, considering she said at 3-5 she has nothing left to teach Phoenix. Maya and/or Iris could have given him the encouragement he needs. The murder scenairo is actually quite interesting. I like most of what I see.
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However the trial so far was superb. A little dismayed to see Mia reappear, considering she said at 3-5 she has nothing left to teach Phoenix. Maya and/or Iris could have given him the encouragement he needs. The murder scenairo is actually quite interesting. I like most of what I see.
Unfortunately, you're right on almost all accounts. There's really no way to rectify my errors. *Sigh*. Wish there was some way to...
Anyways, I couldn't capture character personalities, really. I put a little of my own personality into everything everyone in my story says.
And Angel was re-hired by a new police chief, namely, the defendant. That's why she's not too happy that he's going to be executed, because she might lose her job (like Gumshoe.)
I think Edgeworth/Lana or Edgeworth/Angel or both, will appear sometime later. It just seemed like a good idea.
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*Evil smile*
I predict Edgeworth/Lana.
Maybe Edgeworth/Angel.
Larry will end up pining after Iris again.
And then he'll shift his attention to Maya
Who will never reciprocate.
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However the trial so far was superb. A little dismayed to see Mia reappear, considering she said at 3-5 she has nothing left to teach Phoenix. Maya and/or Iris could have given him the encouragement he needs. The murder scenairo is actually quite interesting. I like most of what I see.
Unfortunately, you're right on almost all accounts. There's really no way to rectify my errors. *Sigh*. Wish there was some way to...
Anyways, I couldn't capture character personalities, really. I put a little of my own personality into everything everyone in my story says.
And Angel was re-hired by a new police chief, namely, the defendant. That's why she's not too happy that he's going to be executed, because she might lose her job (like Gumshoe.)
I think Edgeworth/Lana or Edgeworth/Angel or both, will appear sometime later. It just seemed like a good idea.
In regards to the errors, just keep writing the story and I'll review it one chapter at a time. Thank you for the clairfication of why Angel was re-airing.
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I'm looking forward to if it appears.
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