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Thanks! Ideas are something I'm good for. Fully writing something? Not so much, so it helps me as well.

My goal is more fanfics. :draw: ...I love the Vera smiley.

Idea # 10: Dahlia's spirit rips a hole in space/time/reality, and tosses Nick, Maya, and Godot into...his office? What's with all these magic props? Lawyer!Nick, Mystic!Maya, and Prosecutor!Godot...Meet Hobo!Nick, Master!Maya, and Gobucks-CEO!Godot. Oh, and your Future!Daughter-Trucy and Future!Lawslave-Apollo.

Crackish, I know...But it could be fun.


EPIC WIN. Oh my gosh, if my hands weren't full....just...YES.


I'd love for someone to pick this up. I just have one extra thought on it... Lawyer!Nick has to punch Hobo!Nick while yelling 'Take that!' in front of Apollo. Just to prove he's actually do yell it while hitting someone.
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An erotic moment between :minuki: and :mrhat:

That's a bit sad... I think I've seen a doujin of it though...
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Which is where you're going for thinking those dirty thoughts JK.

Though I haven't seen the second one in doujin or fic form yet...
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I had an idea like that. The time travel one, I mean. I'm writing it now.

Here's one: Miego, Mia turns into an actual kitten.
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I'll be lookin' forward to it then.

It's kinda lame, but I've written roughly half of my Phoenix/Maya day entry (and only the start and end... T-T), and I need all the inspiration I can get.

Now let's see, ideas, ideas...Ah!

Chaple Idea # 11: The sky comes crashing down. Persona 3/Phoenix wright x-over

Set after Justice for all, but before trials and tribulations. Dreams are plaguing Phoenix, upright Coffins lining the street, monstrous shadows, and himself fighting them...only ,he never has. With these memory-like dreams on his mind, how will he defend his client, a young man on vacation from japan named Akihiko Sanada? And why does that name sound so familiar?
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Got another Idea.
During a raffle, Maya (with Phoenix & Pearl) wins a rare limited addition Steel Samurai Figure. Maya can't stop talking about it which annoys Phoenix, who has to carry the figure. Phoenix jokes about wanted to get rid of it which angers Maya and Pearl. Maya and Pearl seperates from Phoenix. Sure enough, a kid trips Phoenix and steals the figure. Maya thinks Phoenix gave it away on purpose and she kicks Phoenix multiple and Pearl slaps him a lot and they leave not wanting to speak to Phoenix again. Phoenix goes to find the thief. Phoenix suspects Cody Hackins who really wanted the figure. It turns out the thief is a 12 year old Wocky Kataki who refuses to give Phoenix the figure back and will have the Katakis get him if he tries anything. Phoenix has to decide if he's going to get the figure back and face the wrath of the Katakis or leave and risk never talking to Maya & Pearl again.
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rydus65 wrote:
Got another Idea.
During a raffle, Maya (with Phoenix & Pearl) wins a rare limited addition Steel Samurai Figure. Maya can't stop talking about it which annoys Phoenix, who has to carry the figure. Phoenix jokes about wanted to get rid of it which angers Maya and Pearl. Maya and Pearl seperates from Phoenix. Sure enough, a kid trips Phoenix and steals the figure. Maya thinks Phoenix gave it away on purpose and she kicks Phoenix multiple and Pearl slaps him a lot and they leave not wanting to speak to Phoenix again. Phoenix goes to find the thief. Phoenix suspects Cody Hackins who really wanted the figure. It turns out the thief is a 12 year old Wocky Kataki who refuses to give Phoenix the figure back and will have the Katakis get him if he tries anything. Phoenix has to decide if he's going to get the figure back and face the wrath of the Katakis or leave and risk never talking to Maya & Pearl again.


I don't think they would really stop talking to him. Get pissed off? Oh yeah. Big time. Stop talking to a man that's nearly killed himself trying to help them so many times? No way. It would be fun as comedy, with Nick trying to get the thing back, getting savaged by guard dogs/Mobsters, but I can't see that as anything serious.

...With that out of the way, I'd still like to see it written.

Chaple Idea # 12:Hollow Law, Death God's Court. Bleach/ Ace Attorney

He had always thought that death would be less...feudal japan-ish. More clouds and harps. Phoenix Wright, and his assistant Maya Fey have died. A huge earthquake bringing the office down on them. Walking toward what they were told is called the 'court of pure souls' he arrives in time to see a young girl being judged without anyone defending her, and cannot help but yell "OBJECTION! Everyone has the right to a proper defense!" Rukia Kuchiki had never been more relieved in her life to see someone pointing directly at her.
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Yeah, I agree, although Maya might run away crying, which would also be hard for Nick to deal with. I can imagine Maya wouldn't talk to him for a while as well.

And sorry, but I haven't played even one of the 2nd parties in your crossovers.
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Neil and Jake Marshall are sent back in time to a wild western town.

After a brawl and a gunfight, Jake is convicted and sentenced to a hanging.
Neil has to find the real killer before the hanging.

:Hoboright:

Would be good but maybe kinda long.
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Herr Blondie wrote:
Neil and Jake Marshall are sent back in time to a wild western town.

After a brawl and a gunfight, Jake is convicted and sentenced to a hanging.
Neil has to find the real killer before the hanging.

:Hoboright:

Would be good but maybe kinda long.


I'm guessing that this happens either before Neil dies, or it's AU. Any idea how they would get to the wild west? Would they run into any familiar faces(or the wild west versions of them)?
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I'd think it's safe to assume that based on the subject matter alone it'd be AU. It's a cool idea, methinks.

Well, good news, I've successfully completed the very first fanfic that's idea was formed here. I finished the fic that Hikari had suggested about Nick and Maya baking cookies. But, I figured that since it has Phoenix and Maya in it that I'd save it for P/M Day (Spetember 5th), so you guys can read it then. It also inspired me to do a fic following this one that also involves mayhem while baking goods. So I'll work on that one next.
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If you'll pardon the pun...Sweet!*shot*

I'm looking forward to it. Hopefully I'll have mine ready in time, but it's slow going.
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chaple wrote:
Herr Blondie wrote:
Neil and Jake Marshall are sent back in time to a wild western town.

After a brawl and a gunfight, Jake is convicted and sentenced to a hanging.
Neil has to find the real killer before the hanging.

:Hoboright:

Would be good but maybe kinda long.


I'm guessing that this happens either before Neil dies, or it's AU. Any idea how they would get to the wild west? Would they run into any familiar faces(or the wild west versions of them)?


Go alternate universe and I don't care how you pull off the time travel. Maybe professor Crazystein wanted to show them a new time machine he'd invented allowing them to prevent crimes before they happened (I swear this seems very familiar somehow) and something goes wrong.

Include Wild West versions of the current characters if you like :garyuu:
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I suggest what I cannot write - exciting adventure with thrilling combat, with some sort of supernatural twist. Essentially inspired by Tigerlily by La Roux

I'm thinking one character gets turned into something exciting, vampires being easiest (but not sparkly ones, because it has to be readable.) I guess (OOOH OR CREATE SOMETHING NEW THAT'D BE AWESOME), and gathers followers/minions. Someone needs to take them down, and I'm thinking a supreme team of Defence Attorneys. I initially thought of prosecutors becoming creatures, but villains would be a lot of fun. (Kristoph and Dahlia going on a spree?)

...but yeah, it would need to be badass. That'd be awesome.

It'd probably end up being fairly epic.

(I would write it, but I simply cannot write combat scenes...)
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...Vampires? If Nick got turned into one he'd starve. He entirely too 'friend of justice' to actually kill other human beings for food. Maya, while I would like to say something nice for her too, has eating habits that would clear the city of people in a few weeks. Edgeworth could probably pull it off, but all his friends are...Well, look at Gumshoe.

It does make me think of something though. so here's~!

Chaple Idea # 13: Maya the vampire slayer! Ace Attorney/Buffy the Vampire Slayer

On a request from a young man named Alexander Harris (who's under the request of Rupert Giles), Maya summons the spirit of a girl named Faith...Normal channeling job, right? Just one problem. When the spirit leaves, her abilities don't. Which they find out when she accidentally rips the door off the channeling chamber. How will she handle a power meant to fight ancient evil? With her closest friends at her side and the aid of new allies she'll be sure to learn quickly.


...Sounds kinda like a movie advertisement.
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So I finally thought up an idea:

Spoiler: Phoenix/Maya pairing
AU: Nick and Maya have been dating for a while, and it's gone so well that Nick's ready to pop the big question. On Maya's birthday, Nick sneaks Maya's ring into her birthday cake, but unfortunately for Nick, Maya doesn't notice the ring and completely swallows it with her cake. Hilarity ensues.
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...I can totally see that actually happening.
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Well, I imagine that Maya's digestive system works similar to a vacuum, so if she were to see cake and not notice anything in it, then...
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Yeah, but that's one of the reasons we like her.
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Vacuum cleaner is an understatement. It's more like a black hole.

Which makes me want to write a Science fiction fic. Anyone up for a star wars/Phoenix wright crossover?
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Space lawyers? That'd be pretty cool.
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Yeah, sounds fun. I can also see a Doctor Who/PW crossover
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Phoenix could be a clone trooper commander, and his gun would shoot "Objections!" at the enemy.
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More like he'd completely ruin the Emperor's plans. It'd go something like this:

Emperor: All in favor of giving me the power to rape the galaxy?

:phoenix: :Objection! He's obviously evil!

Senate: Oh snap, how come we didn't notice before!?

Vader Jr: But what about my secret wife!? Who's going to die in childbirth!?

:franny: :No one foolishly dies in foolish childbirth anymore, fool! Take her to see a damn doctor, you foolish fool.

And thus, the saga ended before it began...In a galaxy far, far, away.
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Or we could do an epic, exciting, not involving senate universe, AKA PW/SW4-6 crossover! (Because 1-3 was all about politics, and nobody likes that)

Here's my idea:
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Let's see, I totally screwed up the SW timeline, but
Nick= Han Solo
Maya: Princess Leia
Mia= Princess Amidala
Edgey= Vader
Manfred= Palpatine
Von Karma= Stormtrooper commander
Judge= Obi-wan
Who's Luke?
LUKE ATMEY of course.

It could be some weird universe where Luke's a showoff, and ends up dying when faced off against Darth Cravat (vader) because he's too concerned about showing off in front of his step-sister, Princess Meia (u c wut I did thar?) Emperor Karma is about to capture Princess Meia when all of a sudden, Here comes Nick Sowright and his trusty wookie friend, Butz! Butz attacks Karma and throws him off guard ( like in 1-4, mirite?) and causes him to flee, , while Nick beats Darth Cravat in a lightsaber duel (using the late Luke Atmey's lightsaber, of course), and then gets Princess Meia and they fly away in the Millenium Phoenix. Meanwhile, Darth Cravat swears revenge on Nick Solo, who goes to re-unite Princess Meia and Queen Miadala. As thanks for saving her sister, Queen Miadala directs Nick Sowright to the Judge, who teaches Nick how to break the law....of physics! And use the Finger (hey, I mean the lawyer finger, not the middle one), the only way to defeat Darth Cravat. Then Nick returns to the the Queen's palace to get Butz so they can destroy the Death Sentence, a ship that will help Darth Cravat and Emperor Karma control the galaxy! Princess Meia insists on accompanying Nick Sowright in defeating Darth Cravat, after all, he killed her step-brother. The strange trio set off in the Millenium Phoenix, not knowing what awaits them at the Death Sentence...
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Wow, I put way too much thought into that.
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Or we could do an epic, exciting, not involving senate universe, AKA PW/SW4-6 crossover! (Because 1-3 was all about politics, and nobody likes that)

Here's my idea:
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Let's see, I totally screwed up the SW timeline, but
Nick= Han Solo
Maya: Princess Leia
Mia= Princess Amidala
Edgey= Vader
Manfred= Palpatine
Von Karma= Stormtrooper commander
Judge= Obi-wan
Who's Luke?
LUKE ATMEY of course.

It could be some weird universe where Luke's a showoff, and ends up dying when faced off against Darth Cravat (vader) because he's too concerned about showing off in front of his step-sister, Princess Meia (u c wut I did thar?) Emperor Karma is about to capture Princess Meia when all of a sudden, Here comes Nick Sowright and his trusty wookie friend, Butz! Butz attacks Karma and throws him off guard ( like in 1-4, mirite?) and causes him to flee, , while Nick beats Darth Cravat in a lightsaber duel (using the late Luke Atmey's lightsaber, of course), and then gets Princess Meia and they fly away in the Millenium Phoenix. Meanwhile, Darth Cravat swears revenge on Nick Solo, who goes to re-unite Princess Meia and Queen Miadala. As thanks for saving her sister, Queen Miadala directs Nick Sowright to the Judge, who teaches Nick how to break the law....of physics! And use the Finger (hey, I mean the lawyer finger, not the middle one), the only way to defeat Darth Cravat. Then Nick returns to the the Queen's palace to get Butz so they can destroy the Death Sentence, a ship that will help Darth Cravat and Emperor Karma control the galaxy! Princess Meia insists on accompanying Nick Sowright in defeating Darth Cravat, after all, he killed her step-brother. The strange trio set off in the Millenium Phoenix, not knowing what awaits them at the Death Sentence...
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Wow, I put way too much thought into that.


Fanfics like this make me die inside. :sadshoe:
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And it makes me jump for joy. UTTER WIN :O
Someone's gotta write that.
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Parodies are funny sometimes...As long as the characters have that 'Ain't I supposed to be a lawyer?' point in the story when they realize something is wrong.

...Larry would be the weakest Chewy ever. At least physically.
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Yeah, he's pretty useless. Somebody better get him a crossbow.
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Chaple Idea # 14: The Defender's Way.

Set after 4-4. Enraged that someone Had been able to kidnap Maya, and depressed that he couldn't have done anything to stop him even if he had been there, Phoenix decides it's time to learn how to fight. Luckily for him, A near legendary martial arts master needs to be defended! Guess who's paying in lessons?
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Idea number......um....2/3?

In a world where words are meaningless, Lawyers and Prosecutors must fight it out to determine the truth and deliver justice on the wicked.

Oops I appear to have written it myself in my boredom.

Spoiler: "Part one :Long and with spoilers for AA1-3"
Start with Phoenix and Karma fighting in courtroom, Karma wielding his cane as a weapon. Karma slams Nick against a wall and pushes a button on the hilt of his cane causing a small sharp protrusion to emerge on the bottom. He rushes to stab Nick but then Edgeworth bursts through the wall above Nick grabs Karma as he rushes Nick and slams his skull into the ground. Throwing Karma against the opposite wall he and Nick glance at each other an nod briefly understanding, before they both launch a blistering assault on Karma ending with a double kick sending him flying through the wall out into the street. Karma struggles to rise using his cane as support but Edgeworth throws a gun through the hole in the wall shooting him in the shoulder once causing him to fall defeated to the ground. Edgeworth and Nick step outside and give each other a high five, but between them you see a furious Matt Engarde in Nickel Samurai costume (minus the helmet) rushing towards them wielding a katana. Noticing the new threat the friends quickly dash to the side to dodge a fatal strike between them but Engarde is fast and dashes to Edgeworth's side. Edgeworth raises his hands to block but it's nothing against his sword and in a flurry of bloody slashes Edgeworth falls. Phoenix rushes to the aid but Engarde quickly turns on him and slices in a triangular pattern around him. Phoenix barely escapes but the shockwaves from the slice cut into the courtroom behind him as the building explodes into a pile of rubble. Phoenix looks back in horror before returning his attention to Engarde but he has disappeared. With a bloodcurdling battlecry Engarde descends from above ready to deal a final blow to Nick who looks on in shock unable to react in time. Suddenly with a tremendous thundercrack a whip wraps itself around Engarde's waist before snapping him away and slamming him into a building which promptly crumbles. Franny looks back at Nick from in front of the building and smirks. Engarde raging now rushes from the rubble but Franny whips at him causing him to stumble. With a sadistic smile she catches Engarde's ankle with her whip and raises him high over her head slamming him into the ground in front of Nick causing him to drop his sword. As he struggles to get up Nick dashes forward and punts him into the air. Franny expertly wraps her whip around Engarde's face to his surprise and slams him into the ground once again before she starts to spin Engarde around with her whip. The whip wraps around Franny's arm drawing Engarde ever closer before eventually she smacks Engarde with a straight punch in the face sending Engarde flying through several buildings before the last one collapses on him and he doesn't move. Franny turns around and smiles arrogantly at Nick before gasping and coughing up blood as she falls to her knees then the ground, stabbed by Dahlia behind her. Nick gasps as Dahlia seems to teleport towards him lunging for him but Nick dashes back evading the knife only to find Iris in matching uniform to Dahlia behind him who promptly whacks him on the shoulder causing him to fall forward towards Dahlia who lunges again. Nick twists his body around the knife and spins striking Dahlia with the back of his fist causing her to disappear in a cloud of purple smoke but Iris appears from nowhere in front of him aiming a blow for his head. Nick catches the punch with ease and sends a one-two volley into her stomach before throwing her behind him where she disappears in purple smoke as well but Nick is shocked to see Dahlia standing there. Stepping back he bumps into Iris who appeared behind him. Pinned between the two girls they unleash a furious volley onto Nick's head with their fists before Dahlia leaps forward and plunges her knife into Nick's chest knocking him to the ground. Getting up triumphantly Dahlia walks into the center of the street and raises her arms to the sky causing a wave of darkness to descend over the world. Gumshoe and his police precinct emerge from their HQ and gaze at the sky in wonderment while Gant, as part of the police grins maniacally knowing that darkness has triumphed. Nick's vision starts to fade as he looks to the sky he sees the images of Diego Armando and his old mentor Mia looking careworn and sad as everything fades to black.


Spoiler: "Part 2: Also long with spoilers for AA1-3"
Meanwhile Maya and Pearl are seen in Kurain performing an ancient ritual over a Magatama....Nick's Magatama starts to glow on his chest where the knife slashed him as his body slowly levitates into an upright position. Mia's translucent spirit appears over Nick's upright body as Nick opens his eyes and the Magatama on his body shatters unleashing a wave of light over the surrounding area causing Edgeworth and Franny to stir. Nick breaks into a sprint towards Dahlia and Iris. The recently revived Franny joins him on the left side and Edgeworth on the right as they leap at Dahlia and Iris. The two twins spin and begin parrying the ferocious onslaught desperately. Dahlia glances at Iris mid-fight and Iris looks at Dahlia apologetically before Edgeworth's fist slams into her face sending ripples throughout her flesh and she disappears in a burst of purple smoke for the last time. Dahlia looks back at Nick and Franny who she had engaged and is shocked to see what appeared to be the ghost of Mia and Nick striking an objection pose beside each other. A beam of intense green light emits from Nick's finger striking Dahlia square in the chest and propelling her backwards at an alarming rate. Whats more alarming is that Edgeworth dashes forward to match this speed elbowing and beating Dahlia off the ground like a basketball as they move before leaping high into the air. Dahlia blinks in shock as Edgeworth descended with incredible speed planting his hand on her face from a high height and crushing her head into the ground. Edgeworth smiles satisfactorily as a 5 foot crater surrounds the point of impact before standing up and throwing the dazed Dahlia into the air behind him where Franny's whip snaps her out of the air and into the ground. Franny looks to the sky and at Dahlia and spins her around repeatedly before slingshotting her into the sky. Dahlia blinks confused as the wind rushes through her hair until 3 familiar red bars appear in her path. Godot grins floating in the air as he punches Dahlia the opposite direction before teleporting above her again and hitting her with a double axehandle slamming her earthwards. Teleporting once more Godot roars as a massive red beam emits from his visor blasting Dahlia horizontally across the ground until she meets Nick's fist. Dahlia groans as she gets up, not beaten yet but Nick smiles. Through the pain Dahlia sees not only Nick but the ghost of Mia smirking at her briefly before they launch into a double -barreled assault. Dahlia raises her arms to stop Mia's attack but Nick hits her in the stomach while the Mia illusion smashes the knife out of her hands. Nick spins into a kick in the stomach which she blocked only to be tripped up by Ghost Mia striking her legs to which Nick followed up by hammering her in the stomach sending her sprawling back towards Godot who had armed himself with Mystic Misty's swordstaff. In a few vicious slices Dahlia was sent sprawling skywards trailing blood along the way before Edgeworth drove her into the ground again with another face-to-floor manouver. Barely conscious Dahlia staggers to her feet coughing blood before her eyesight focuses on Nick rushing towards her from the front. But Godot hit her in the back first, turning to face the new aggressor Edgeworth struck her in the side which she moved to block before Nick arrived and hit her causing her to stagger dizzily. The three men looked at each other and nodded once more before they unleashed their fury on the demon before them in a flurry of kicks, punches and sweet manouvers before with a massive uppercut Godot sent her flying into the sky where a floating Franny waited. Franny sliced into Dahlia's body with lightning fast whip strokes before binding her with her whip watching as the others positioned themselves around Dahlia.
Edgeworth took up a position below Dahlia on the left as the police force assembled around him and began to fire volley after volley into the demon.
Godot hovered at the left of Dahlia and chuckled as he tapped a button on the side of his visor unleashing another concentrated energy blast into her body.
Dahlia roared and struggled against her constraints as the true demon within revealed herself projecting herself out the top of her frail human form. With demonic hair blowing everywhere and eyes of white the police force almost halted their barrage but a quick rally from Edgeworth assured their aim remained true. Nick and the spirit of Mia inside him looked up at the true demon above knowing what had to be done. Shuffling his foot back a little so his legs were apart and his shoulder faced Dahlia he raised and extended his arm into a climactic point while the Spirit of Mia mirrored his movements. When the pose was finished Nick cried out "FINAL PHOENIX BLAST!" as together they unleashed a beam of energy so strong it banished the demon into the skies and beyond.
Ghost Mia looked at Nick gratefully as she faded away and sunlight burst through the skies above as the darkness spawned by Dahlia disappeared into the netherworld once more.

The 4 heroes look at each other and the sunlight happily, the battle had been exhausting but they triumphed. Edgeworth grinned at the police force as Gumshoe broke out instant noodles for everyone. The future of Justice looked bright.

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The way Edgeworth finished off Karma made me lol.
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The way Edgeworth finished off Karma made me lol.


Glad to have made you "lol"

It's originally designed to be visualised with the Cadenza tune, pressing pursuit so it don't fit into written form...ah well I could revamp it if I cared :Hoboright:
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Chaple Idea #15: Turnabout in the Star Ocean. Ace Attorney/Star Ocean 2

...Ignore the time differences, or call it AU.

Fifteen years ago, Phoenix Wright was saved from death by the hero Ronyx J. Kenny, Earth federation admiral, and now blame of the same man's death is being placed solely on the shoulders of his son, Claude C. Kenny. With the help of spirit medium/assistant Maya Fey, and the slew of unusual and talented friends the defendant had brought back with him from some underdeveloped planet, will Phoenix be able to turn this one around? Meanwhile the admiral's own friends gather to find the truth.


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Idea number....3/4?

The Cultured Convicts Poetry club.

Kristoph is sent to jail, for obvious reasons, in his time there he meets numerous other criminals most of which have been convicted of something related to Evidence Forgery. Seeing as they were civilised men unlike some cads in the prison the group agree to form the Cultured Convicts Poetry club, writing poems about the dark twisted hatred they have against one man....

I plan on the CCPC to be about Kristoph, Gant, Karma, and lets say Luke Atmey forming an evil alliance behind bars. An alliance about literature :garyuu:
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Chaple Idea # 16: Smile when you say goodbye.

Phoenix Wright is fading fast and he doesn't understand why the only thing he can think about is his father's teasing smirk, his grandfather's open grin, and Mia's gentle smile. When Maya and Pearl rush into his hospital room he finally understands... and he smiles, wide and confident, just like always, because...You've gotta smile when you say goodbye.
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Idea # 16: Smile when you say goodbye.

Phoenix Wright is fading fast and he doesn't understand why the only thing he can think about is his father's teasing smirk, his grandfather's open grin, and Mia's gentle smile. When Maya and Pearl rush into his hospital room he finally understands... and he smiles, wide and confident, just like always, because...You've gotta smile when you say goodbye.


Cool. But in order for this to be a touching moment, some compulsory third-party character development is in order, wouldn't you say?

Right, now the first thing to start with would generically be his name. Any ideas?
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Name? Phoenix is phoenix.

If you mean the grandfather, then I think Naruhodo Souka would be ironic, and the Father's name I'll leave up to whoever writes this, thought his last name needs to be Wright.
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Oh right, family names come first in Asia. Oops...I'm a disgrace to my own culture.
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You planning on writing this or something?
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Probably not. I'm up to my neck with P/I day.
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