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Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya]Topic%20Title
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Me likey bouncy!

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I enjoyed it quite a lot. I remember seeing your picture on devianart. Very nice illustration. <3 Hope there's more illustration for the next chapter.

Illustrations give me good visualization of the story <3
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Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya]Topic%20Title
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Awesome fic. My favorite pairing.
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I love this pairing. :) Great job on the fic, and what a lovely illustration! :maya-shock: Hope to see more of those. :D
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Lana+Ema=LOVE

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Awesome fic! Its my second favorite pairing! :larry2:
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I hate most pairings.

But this is brilliant.
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MUST GET

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This story is really looking great
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must...read...more...
this story is addicting...plz keep writing more!!!
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Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya]Topic%20Title

OBJECTION!

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Eh? Since….since when did she grow a pair of…ack NO!He panicked, trying to stop himself from the next part of his thought.
What the hell am I thinking?!This is Maya! Stop! STOP!


:D
That's hot.
Great story (so far) and drawing. Like it :)
Interesting idea, Maya should have some "going out" clothes in the game?
Even though Phoenix is 25 years old, thats a very understandable reaction he would get, looking at Maya in a very different way...
Nick and Maya - Friends and Lovers....
Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya]Topic%20Title
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Official Lurker

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Hmm.... well... I don't read a lot of Maya/Phoenix (I'm not opposed, I just prefer Edgey/Phoenix) but I do like this story so far. I do have a couple things I'd like to say. I don't really like how Maya and Pearl aren't wearing their sprite medium clothes. It's probably just me, but I think it's very out of character. They were those outfits all them time, and I could see Maya kinda not wearing them if she had good reason, but I don't think Pearl would, since she's been raised by her psycho mom who would have been all "YOU MUST ONLY WEAR THESE CLOTHES" or whatever. Also, I agree that there should be more description. I think it's just cause I'm tired but I did get confused a couple times do to the lack of description about the scene changing.

I hope you don't think I dislike your story, because that is not the case, I just am trying to give you some tips for improvement. Please don't get discouraged, I would hat it if this story were left unfinished.
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Tee Hee Hee...Boom!

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i love it!!!!!!!
i just love :phoenix: // :maya: (points at avatar and sig)
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Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya] THIS FIC ISN'T DEAD YET!Topic%20Title
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Fabu♥

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Hey guys, sorry I haven't updated in the last several months or so. XD;

I didn't want to continue my story until I got my hands on T&T. That's because I want my story to be accurate to the games' plot as possible. :3 Although, it IS fanfiction, and not all fanfictions have be canon to the actual storyline now do they? But that's what I try to do in my fanfics.

Plus I've had a lot of time on my hands with school and all. But once I get the chance, I'll try to finish writing my story. :maya:
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Yuki Fan~!

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oh la la! Phoenix and Maya sont belle!!
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It's stuck?

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Now posting in a thread about to go epic.

*subscribed*
Lana_Skyes_Heart wrote:
SO I was stuck all day inside the changing room with nothing but a glued on bra.

Panty thief strikes again! :-P
Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya] Ch 2 art updateTopic%20Title
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Fabu♥

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Art for chapter 2 has finally been added! Sorry for the long wait XD;

And once again I apologize for the crappy background :larry:
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"Too Awesome to Die"

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Ahhh. Maya looks so sad in that scene...Nice pic!
Child of Lida_Rose and Aliucon. Married to yuzikichan0! Father of Ha³ and Apollo72.
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It's stuck?

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This fanfic is like crack. =/

*pokes incessantly*

Where'd CH3 go? o_O
Lana_Skyes_Heart wrote:
SO I was stuck all day inside the changing room with nothing but a glued on bra.

Panty thief strikes again! :-P
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Lost In Translation

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I l o v e your fan fic and your art!

update soon!
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lol I like that smiley!
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Rise and shine, Mr. Judge.

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That fanfic was great!
please, keep going!
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Isn't my name origina? lol not

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Please update soon! I love :phoenix: / :maya: !
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Future Surgeon

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*girlish squeal* AHH! I love the new art! Ah, LySs, I understand your reasons and the quality is excellent, but you're killing us here.
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Stalker Horse?!

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Aw, this was nice. ^_^ I hope you're still writing this, since it is pretty awesome. =]
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You have absolutely GOT to write more of this. It's amazing!!!

Love Maya/Phoenix. Always will. XD
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my avatar, NO STEALING

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wait... wasnt this a :phoenix: / :maya: story a second ago, or was i just halucinating?

edit: wait! ITS APRIL FOOLS DAY! duh, im an idiot.
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...Objection?!

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I love your story... Dont stop this!!! If you do I might die. Not suicide. I would just drop dead, and you would be the murderer.
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Ac#e to the rescue!!! Avvy be Leeling.

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I've always loved this pairing. The thing is, a lot of fanfictions I've read aren't so believable. Your version stays true to the characters, and I honestly think that's EXACTLY what they'd do! Thanks for making this such an awesome story... Did that really happen? :D
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This time I'll be bulletproof.

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Oh LySs, I love you.Iluv :phoenix: / :maya: sooo much and you wrote a really wonderful fic.I can't wait for Chapter 3!
Just imagine, if you write a new chapter, you will get a cookie.
If you post a new super-cute-and-perfectly-drawn-picture you will get TWO cookies!
Two cookies,huh, that's a deal,isn't it? ( :cookie: :cookie: Eat those cookies instead , I haven't got any with me...I could E-Mail you some cookies too...muahaha, I'm cruel...)
I'm not using CR anymore.
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Ac#e to the rescue!!! Avvy be Leeling.

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Sorry for being impatient, but PLEASE FINISH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
...Pretty please? Soon? :eh?:
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Thanks to the combined awesomeness of Ceres and the Vickinator, I shall TAKE OVER THE WORLD!
...Just kidding. But check out the sig they made me!
Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya]Topic%20Title

I LIKE ROOOOOOTBEER!!

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same here(including the other country part).
lyss gets another first post.
anyways, i really cant wait for another damn good chapter!
this is the first :phoenix: / :maya: pairing ive read!
Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya]Topic%20Title

I LIKE ROOOOOOTBEER!!

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same here(including the other country part).
lyss gets another first post.
anyways, i really cant wait for another damn good chapter!
this is the first :phoenix: / :maya: pairing ive read!
Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya]Topic%20Title

I LIKE ROOOOOOTBEER!!

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same here(including the other country part).
lyss gets another first post.
anyways, i really cant wait for another damn good chapter!
this is the first :phoenix: / :maya: pairing ive read!
Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya]Topic%20Title

I LIKE ROOOOOOTBEER!!

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Joined: Fri May 23, 2008 4:54 am

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same here(including the other country part).
lyss gets another first post.
anyways, i really cant wait for another damn good chapter!
this is the first :phoenix: / :maya: pairing ive read!
Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya]Topic%20Title

I LIKE ROOOOOOTBEER!!

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Fri May 23, 2008 4:54 am

Posts: 6

same here(including the other country part).
lyss gets another first post.
anyways, i really cant wait for another damn good chapter!
this is the first :phoenix: / :maya: pairing ive read!
Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya]Topic%20Title

I LIKE ROOOOOOTBEER!!

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Fri May 23, 2008 4:54 am

Posts: 6

same here(including the other country part).
lyss gets another first post.
anyways, i really cant wait for another damn good chapter!
this is the first :phoenix: / :maya: pairing ive read!
Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya]Topic%20Title

I LIKE ROOOOOOTBEER!!

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Fri May 23, 2008 4:54 am

Posts: 6

same here(including the other country part).
lyss gets another first post.
anyways, i really cant wait for another damn good chapter!
this is the first :phoenix: / :maya: pairing ive read!
Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya]Topic%20Title

I LIKE ROOOOOOTBEER!!

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Fri May 23, 2008 4:54 am

Posts: 6

same here(including the other country part).
lyss gets another first post.
anyways, i really cant wait for another damn good chapter!
this is the first :phoenix: / :maya: pairing ive read!
Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya]Topic%20Title

I LIKE ROOOOOOTBEER!!

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Fri May 23, 2008 4:54 am

Posts: 6

same here(including the other country part).
lyss gets another first post.
anyways, i really cant wait for another damn good chapter!
this is the first :phoenix: / :maya: pairing ive read!
Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya]Topic%20Title

I LIKE ROOOOOOTBEER!!

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Fri May 23, 2008 4:54 am

Posts: 6

same here(including the other country part).
lyss gets another first post.
anyways, i really cant wait for another damn good chapter!
this is the first :phoenix: / :maya: pairing ive read!
Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya]Topic%20Title

I LIKE ROOOOOOTBEER!!

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Fri May 23, 2008 4:54 am

Posts: 6

same here(including the other country part).
lyss gets another first post.
anyways, i really cant wait for another damn good chapter!
this is the first :phoenix: / :maya: pairing ive read!
Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya]Topic%20Title

I LIKE ROOOOOOTBEER!!

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Fri May 23, 2008 4:54 am

Posts: 6

same here(including the other country part).
lyss gets another first post.
anyways, i really cant wait for another damn good chapter!
this is the first :phoenix: / :maya: pairing ive read!
Re: Changes [Phoenix/Maya]Topic%20Title

I LIKE ROOOOOOTBEER!!

Gender: None specified

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Fri May 23, 2008 4:54 am

Posts: 6

same here(including the other country part).
lyss gets another first post.
anyways, i really cant wait for another damn good chapter!
this is the first :phoenix: / :maya: pairing ive read!
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