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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 1/3)

Sun Jan 06, 2008 12:44 am

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My comments? Well...um...happy to help...? :larry2:

Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 1/3)

Thu Jan 10, 2008 3:49 am

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And I fixed up Painful Memories for Mia_Fey. As always, great work, and I swear I'll get to the other fanfic you sent me tomorrow.

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 1/19)

Sat Jan 19, 2008 6:19 pm

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New story up. This is my attempt at a more light-hearted Phoenix/Iris fic although I'm not certain I succeeded. This is set about a year and half after Iris is released from prison, so they've been together quite a while by this point (especially since I factor in the time Iris was in prison to their relationship) and they do act like it. There are minor GS4 spoilers in this story (somewhat worse than the ones in "Moving On" but they are purposely left very vague). Special thanks goes to Jenna Darknight and Xero Wright for proofing this for me. The link for "Love and Family" has been added to the top post. Enjoy! Reviews would make me very happy.

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 1/19)

Sat Jan 19, 2008 9:06 pm

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Sorry I neglected to comment on this earlier, but Painful Memories was a nice tug on the ol' heartstrings. My heart really went out to Iris, there. Love and Family I like too. I can tell we don't see eye-to-eye on sex and marriage, but I won't let that prevent me from enjoying a well-written fic. The reconciliation over the broken urn was cute and I liked seeing Phoenix's impish side come out. Good work. If I may be pedantic, I have one minor wording correction: When Maya comments on the fact that the urn has been broken several times before, she refers to a "right of passage." I think you might be looking for "rite" of passage. Again, good work.

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 1/19)

Sun Jan 20, 2008 5:53 pm

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Gregory Wright wrote:

If I may be pedantic, I have one minor wording correction: When Maya comments on the fact that the urn has been broken several times before, she refers to a "right of passage." I think you might be looking for "rite" of passage. Again, good work.

She accidentally uploaded the un-proofed version. The proofed version is up now. I remember fixing that to 'rite of passage.' XD

Anyway, as I've said before, it's a very nice oneshot. As always, you hit things spot-on, and it was a smooth read. You're really putting a lot out there, keep it up!

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 1/19)

Mon Jan 21, 2008 4:18 am

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Thanks for the kind comments! I'm so happy you guys liked it. Sorry about the uploading mistake. I had a ditzy moment (not really a rare event for me). :oops:

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 1/19)

Mon Jan 21, 2008 7:33 am

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Oh, that's perfectly understandable. Why, I first posted my E/F fic with some fairly important lines missing! The ensuing editing frenzy would've doubtless amused a paying audience. :will:

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 1/19)

Thu Jan 24, 2008 9:44 pm

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It's good to know I'm not alone in that respect. :edgy:

On another note, the lack of reviews here makes me want to cry. :larry:

Please let me know what you guys think of my story. When I hear nothing, I tend to assume the worst (like that no one is reading or that it was horrible and no one can bring themselves to tell me so). Feedback is very important to me so please review.

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 1/19)

Thu Jan 24, 2008 10:44 pm

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I hear you, Mia_Fey. To my knowledge, Treasure in the Abyss has yet to receive one reply. Admittedly what I have at the moment is relatively short, but it was kind of depressing seeing people take a look at it and then greet it with silence. I'm not nearly as confident in that work now as I used to be. I intend to soldier on, though, and see if I can't garner a little hard-earned respect for E/F fandom eventually.

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"The offensive will continue! I'm gonna take that hill even if I have to charge up there alone and kill 'em all myself!"
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You know, it's funny. We seem to be a relative rarity in that we post reviews in the Testimony section on a regular basis. A lot of people comment once or twice and decide they've exhausted their worth as reviewers, apparently. There are probably more people reading and enjoying your fanfics than you're aware of. Heck, I heard from Graph for the first time in, of all places, the Berry Big Circus! I had no idea she liked Crime and Punishment until I lightheartedly asked what she thought of my grammar in the Family Tree thread. All the same, it is easy to become pessimistic about the size and attitude of your audience. In the meantime, I offer my sincere reassurance that you have considerable talent and it comes through in your writing. For what it's worth, I like your work and would be disappointed to see you give up. Hang in there. amiga. :javado:

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 1/19)

Thu Jan 24, 2008 11:20 pm

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Thank you for the reassurance, Gregory. Your post has made me very happy and I really appreciate your kindness. I love to write, but I tend to lack confidence in my writing abilities which is only exacerbated by silence. Again, I thank you for your support from the bottom of my heart.

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 1/19)

Thu Jan 24, 2008 11:50 pm

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Haven't been reading for a while so i guess ill get started. 2 more chapters and Xero are you done editin yet?

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 2/2)

Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:50 am

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-T&T SPOILERS IN THIS POST- Important to read before the story though, so I'm not using a tag here.
New story up. Its my first non-pairing fic and I'm a bit nervous about it. You guys actually need some background for this. This story is based on a discussion I had with some friends (on the forum) about Dahlia's motivations and by the end of it, we had come to some interesting conclusions which I then incorporated into this fic. For the sake of this story, I will simply list these assumptions in the story so that you understand the context of this fic. As I mentioned, I actually did not pull these assumptions out of thin air and I do have a logical argument for them, but this not the place for debating character motivations. This is the place for writing about them. I'll be happy to debate motivations elsewhere in the forum if anyone wishes to do so.
1) Despite Dahlia's words, she not did not suggest leaving her sister behind and was actually very upset by this.
2) The fake kidnapping was never about revenge for Morgan's sake, but revenge for Dahlia's own sake for the pain she endured once she was separated from her sister.
3) Dahlia did not start out the way she is portrayed in the game, but developed into that over time. The majority of this development occurs after Iris is given away.
Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoy the story and please let me know what you think. If you want more info about my logic then go here. Be warned that there are major spoilers if you follow the link as well as in the story.
Special thanks to Xero Wright and Franzise Deauxnim for proofing this story.
Please review guys. The lack of reviewing on my last story seriously depressed me, so please let me know what you think.

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 2/2)

Sun Feb 03, 2008 6:33 am

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I think this one sentence I'm about to say sums up my review for this (as I beta'd it):

"Separation and Transformation: Wonderful or WONDERFUL?"

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 2/2)

Sun Feb 03, 2008 7:54 am

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Wow, this is the first time I've posted here. Mia, you should give up. I never read something so brilliant. Lovely work, girl. I support you for that!

Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 2/2)

Sun Feb 03, 2008 9:07 am

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That's quite a debut, Mia_Fey. Separation and Transformation was brimming with cuteness, sorrow, and black humor. This might be your best fic yet. Spectacular work. :jazzedgy:

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 2/2)

Sun Feb 03, 2008 3:17 pm

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Even after a half dozen or so reads, this still gets me. :larry:

Just...awesome.

I wish people were more open-minded so the disclaimers weren't needed...

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Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:04 pm

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Yay for reviews! Thanks guys. I'm so happy you liked it and thank you so much for reviewing! You have officially made my day.

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 2/2)

Sun Feb 03, 2008 5:16 pm

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Before reading Separation and Transformation, I used to overlook the sibling relationship between Iris and Dahlia but now, I've realised that it's more complex than I thought at first. I loved the interaction between the twins and how you have portrayed Dahlia.

I haven't read your other stories, but I really enjoyed this one and it has gone straight to my FF favourites. Great work!

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 2/2)

Sun Feb 03, 2008 8:42 pm

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See, Mia? I told you people would like it :D (And I'm sure Franzise did too.)

Now, offtopic, writing inspiration has FINALLY hit me (Yay!) so I'm gonna go write on my break.

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 2/2)

Mon Feb 04, 2008 1:36 am

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Elriel wrote:

Before reading Separation and Transformation, I used to overlook the sibling relationship between Iris and Dahlia but now, I've realised that it's more complex than I thought at first. I loved the interaction between the twins and how you have portrayed Dahlia.

I haven't read your other stories, but I really enjoyed this one and it has gone straight to my FF favourites. Great work!

@Mia_Fey: Woohoo! Hear that? Your readership hath expanded. :redd:

Elriel, this is the woman whose writing cemented me to this forum and inspired me to write Crime and Punishment. You might know this already as I kind of said that on the first page of this topic, but I thought "Just in case..." I highly recommend giving her other works a look. ...Perhaps we can each act as an ambassador to the other's corner of fandom. This is not a command, of course--just an idea. :will:

At any rate...I'm off to read more Miego. :javado:

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 2/2)

Mon Feb 04, 2008 1:45 am

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She's even inspired me to almost write something! :butzthumbs:

Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 2/2)

Mon Feb 04, 2008 3:05 am

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Well, Mia's a great person to have round. Even her fanfiction is cool. That's it, time to finish my fanfiction...

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Mon Feb 04, 2008 4:10 am

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Wow. Thanks so much everyone! You have no idea how happy your comments have made me and you guys are all far too kind. Thank you so very much! :redd:

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 2/2)

Mon Feb 04, 2008 5:21 am

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Wow. Didn't know you did so many stories so fast too.

*stickies link on desktop* :P

Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 2/2)

Mon Feb 04, 2008 7:40 am

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Wow, after reading your latest fic, you managed to do something I never thought was possible. You actually made me feel sorry for Dahlia. The sisterly bond she and Iris shared, then having her asshat of a father break them up... It's no wonder she turned out as she did. A very deep and emotional story indeed.

Excellent work Mia, I may not be a Phoenix/Iris shipper, but now I have the urge to read your other fics. :meekins:

*scoots off to the first page to get started*

Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 2/2)

Mon Feb 04, 2008 4:50 pm

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Thank you so much! I'm very happy you enjoyed it. I hope you liked my other stories as well.

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Sun Feb 10, 2008 4:07 am

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I'm an evil person for double posting without anything new to show for it (and I'm so sorry), but I have an idea and I wanted opinions on it. I'm contemplating writing a series of Phoenix/Iris drabbles (only a few hundred words each) which would sort of be like snapshots in time throughout their relationship. I may also do a few where the pairing is implied. I have an amusing idea for one where Iris and Trucy go shopping and buy Phoenix's hobo hat (I need to do some research on this one and see if the game goes into how he got the hat so that I don't contradict the canon story line). Anyway, feel free to suggest any scenes that you really wish to see and I'll do my best to write them. Hopefully I can actually get this project off the ground (Writer's block being enhanced by school is evil :chinami:

).

And to anybody who hasn't reviewed, please do. Even if its just something simple "Like nice work" or "Not bad". Trust me when I say that it doesn't sound repetitive and it means a great deal to me. Constructive criticism is also always welcome. That's the way I learn to improve my writing. Thanks again to everyone who has reviewed. You guys are all fantastic!

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Sun Feb 10, 2008 4:23 am

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Are you talking college years, or after 3-5? If it's the latter, Apollo Justice is only a week and a half away, do you really want to risk spoiling yourself now?

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Sun Feb 10, 2008 4:27 am

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It would be set after 3-5 during that seven year period up to AJ. And no worries about spoilers. I got impatient a while ago and I've thoroughly spoiled myself already, but there won't be anything overly spoilery (nothing more than what we already know from trailers) in the drabbles (and if a few do have spoilers, I'll be sure to mark them separately).

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Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 2/2)

Sun Feb 10, 2008 4:30 am

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Well if the research won't ruin anything for you, then sure, I say go for it. :butzthumbs:

Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 2/2)

Sun Feb 10, 2008 5:47 am

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Just go for it Mia. You're the only other reason why I write as well since I don't get a lot of motivation from writing fanfiction but this place is sort of a good idea ground...BTW, all Pheeris supporters, could you chuck me a lifeline as I really having a bad time trying to write up the next chapter of my fanfiction.

Re: Mia_Fey's fanfiction (Updated 2/2)

Sun Feb 24, 2008 3:20 am

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You seem to have improved with regard to transitions from one character's perspective to another. There's still a little room for improvement. The part of Love and Family quoted below confused me, but I got a fair sense of what was going on there regardless--I just had to re-read it a few times to get that sense.

Seeing the annoyed expression forming on Phoenix's face as he spun to face Maya, Iris shooed the two girls back into the side room and pushed Phoenix down to the far side of the Winding Way so they could speak without upsetting the girls.“What was that all about?” Phoenix demanded angrily, his hands on his hips.

“Huh?” Maya asked in obvious confusion. “What is with you two?”

“You gasp like that after looking into the area where Trucy and Pearls were playing and I thought what most people would think,” he said, fighting to keep his voice steady. “I thought that they were hurt or...” Phoenix couldn't bring himself to put into words that last thought. It was simply too devastating.

Understanding suddenly dawned on Maya's clueless face and her hand flew to her mouth as she gasped. “I'm so sorry, Nick. They've been playing between those two areas all day, so that thought never occurred to me. I was upset at something else.” Glancing apologetically at both Phoenix and Iris, she smiled sheepishly. “Sorry about that. I guess that was stupid of me... I hope you guys will forgive me.”

In response to Love and Family, I must say that Phoenix and Iris seem to have quite a passionate relationship. I really don't know quite how to sum up my thoughts about it. Given that it hasn't been particularly long, the passion doesn't seem out of place, but it certainly stood out to me.

And as for Separation and Transformation, it was definitely worth reading, but it seemed to have much more potential. Dahlia's transition to a life of crime wasn't covered as much as I would have wanted, but it still tells enough of the story as was needed. I imagine this particular plot has the potential to become much more than a oneshot. Though I'm fine with you staying with what you're good at, I think you should at least think about it.

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Mon Feb 25, 2008 5:43 pm

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Thanks for the review. It's good to hear I've improved a bit. You also made a lot of good points which are very helpful and that I'm very grateful for and I'll be sure to keep them in mind in the future. I'm not sure that my latest story is going to turn into anything more than a oneshot. I really don't have any idea where I'd go with it, but perhaps I'll brainstorm a bit. As for Phoenix's and Iris's relationship in "Love and Family," they have been together for almost two years by that point and would know each other well by that point hence the more passionate interactions between them, but that is only my interpretation of course. Thanks again for the review. You've made me very happy. :butzthumbs:

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Sat Mar 08, 2008 5:22 pm

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Oh, that's you!! O_O
I've read all of your Nick/Iris fanfictions on FFNet and I love them!!
They are pretty touchy and very nice!!
Keep up the good work! Are there any new projects coming up? *eager*

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Sat Mar 08, 2008 6:09 pm

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I'm so happy you liked them! Thank you for the kind review. It really made my day. I do have an Apollo/Vera oneshot that I finished writing a couple days ago. Now I just need to find the energy to check for mistakes and finalize it before I post it. Hopefully, it'll be ready soon. Thanks again!

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Sat Mar 08, 2008 7:02 pm

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If you want a beta for that, I'd be happy to help, Mia :butzthumbs:

My various AA stories (Nick/Maya, Adrian/Celeste, Krissi/Dollie, Klavilami, general stuff, etc). All comments, feedback, and reviews are greatly appreciated! :D

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Sat Mar 08, 2008 8:24 pm

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Thanks for the kind offer, Writer. :) Another friend has already agreed to look it over for me, but I may well take you up on that offer at a later time. Thanks again. I appreciate it.

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Sat Mar 08, 2008 11:16 pm

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Sorry, i haven't been able to read the latest chapters. I'll find some time.

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Sun Mar 09, 2008 7:26 pm

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Mia_Fey wrote:

I'm so happy you liked them! Thank you for the kind review. It really made my day. I do have an Apollo/Vera oneshot that I finished writing a couple days ago. Now I just need to find the energy to check for mistakes and finalize it before I post it. Hopefully, it'll be ready soon. Thanks again!

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I'll be looking forward to read new ones.
Hmm Apollo/Vera... I've never thought them as a couple. It will be interesting to read it! :D *dance*

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Tue Mar 11, 2008 5:59 am

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Updates are fun. So I've come to the conclusion that Apollo/Vera is one of the cutest things on the planet and therefore I decided to write a story about them. Another oneshot. Vera's surprising hard to write so I hope this turned out okay. Be warned that this story takes place after the completion of AJ/GS4 and therefore has spoilers in it. A very special thank you goes out to Xero Wright for proofing this for me. Enjoy and please let me know what you guys think. Reviews are wonderful things and they make me very happy.

Proud Supporter of Phoenix/Iris, Ron/Dessie, Klavier/Ema, and Apollo/Vera
Fanfics Updated-12/25