This Fan Fic is about Mia and Godot...and Mia doesn't die...

Last edited by Gotta Luv Edgey! on Wed Jun 11, 2008 5:29 pm, edited 1 time in total.

I had decided that I had to tell her. I jumped up suddenly from the bench I was sitting on. I grabbed my coffee and took a sip. I scanned to see if she was here with her sister. I looked down at my watch. It was Six O' Clock. I looked outside and there she was. That beautiful Brown hair that parted before her twinkling eyes. And her sweet perfume, Oh I could almost taste it. I choked on my coffee as a young girl came and greeted her. The young girl's hair was as dark as my coffee.

"Maya!" Mia said opening her arms. I wish she would welcome me like that someday. She wrapped her arm around Maya's and they skipped towards the door. "How long has it been? Four years?"

"Nearly sis. I'm hungry, I could really go for a burger." Maya hinted with a grin on her face.

"You're always hungry for a burger you bottomless pit." Mia teased and stepped up to the counter to order. I had guessed that she was out celebrating that she was now a defense attourney. She was so young, just like me. Maya turned around and looked at me. She poked Mia and she turned around to look at me. Her eyes met mine and I dropped my coffee mug. It broke. i could feel the hotness against my skin. It burned like my love for her.

"You've got an admirerer." Maya giggled.

"Diego Armando? Is that you?" She was shocked. She dropped the cups that she was holding. Maya started laughing really hard and Mia gave her the look. Maya became silent, she looked down at her sandals. Mia was blushing scarlett.

"Sir, your shoes are on fire." Said a man in the stall beside me. "Sir?" I didn't hear him. I still looked at Mia who was picking up the cups. "SIR?"

"W-what?" I asked impatiently. I was forced to take my eyes off of her. I looked at the old man then Mia said:

"Mr. Armando, you're on fire sir!" I turned back to her as she ran for me. She stomped on my feet trying to put out the fire.

Please comment and tell me what I spelled wrong and what you thought so far. Should I continue?

Her Black leather pants caught on fire.

"Roll!" I ordered and she looked at me confused.

"What?" She asked. The flame was getting bigger.

"Roll! You know~Stop, drop and roll!"

"Why?" She asked, still stomping on my feet. She finally stopped. "There Mr. Armando, it's out."

"Stop, drop and roll!" The flame moved up her pants. How could she not feel it? I pushed her over and I tripped on her legs. I fell on top of her and moaned. I rolled over and maya pulled Mia away.

"Oh my God, your pants are on fire!" Maya kicked her pants and Mia came right back down on me.

"Maya that didn't help!" Mia grumbled as I got off of the ground. I grabbed the man's drink and splashed it on her pants. By now the whole restraunt was watching. Mia got up and examined her burnt pants. Leather was missing from her ankles to just above her knees.

"Food's here!" Maya squealed as she dug into her burger. "If only I would've had this earlier...then I would've had some entertainment!" Mia swiped their meals away from Maya.

"We're leaving," she declared. Tears ran down her cheeks and I felt ashamed.

...I like this so far. It's ironic: He catches fire without noticing, and then Mia catches fire without noticing. Talk about awkward! XD

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they're too busy looking at eachother and having thoughts about eachother that they don't notice...lol