sing songs into my lips
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I'm new here, and seeing as it has been a VERY long time since I wrote anything(and my first time writing fanfiction!) I thought I'd start off lightly and just post the opening paragraph.
It's actually the only part I've written yet, I just wanted to hear your views on it, see if I should continue? Anyways here goes... (oh wasn't sure if needed a spoiler tag as it doesn't really say anything to exact about the circumstances.Let me know if i'm wrong!)
Awakening
Something familiar. A subtle sense of something recognisable tip toeing in the darkness. A smell. Creeping in. A bitter aroma dancing in his memory, gripping hold of his senses and wrenching him out from the abyss within.
Eyes open. Awake.
A whisper, barely audible... “coffee...”
Gettin' Old!
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You’re so small in such a big world...
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Eyebrows are amazing. Full stop.
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"Life's too short to read bad books." - E. Temple
Just to say that, due to coming exams etc. I will probably be gone for the next few months or so. Hope to be back in the summer!
sing songs into my lips
Gender: None specified
Location: England
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Joined: Sun Nov 23, 2008 9:50 pm
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You’re so small in such a big world...
Gender: Female
Location: In front of the computer, where else?
Rank: Ace Attorney
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