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it all ended with a crash-A klavier story chap. 1Topic%20Title
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Klavier is mine, B!tch

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Dark.
All I can see.
But the voices..ugh...m-my head....my back....owwww......
"Klavier...KLAVIER!!!!"
"Move! We need to get through! NOW!"
"Polly...will he be okay?..."
F-fading.......
BEEP.BEEP.BEEP.
"Klavier!"
I try to open my eyes....light hurts...feel like i've been asleep forever.
And...Herr Forehead?!?!
Then it hits me. In a hospital bed.Can't feel a thing below my neck.
"Forehead.....what happened?"
He looks sullen. Shattered,even.
"Well,uh your motercycle..."
He proccedes to tell me. Then it all returns, the blue car, the collision.
Something else hits me.
Goodbye, prosocuting.

CHAPTER , TELL ME WHAT U THINK.
If u do want chap.2 it won't come out for a while as i'm going on a trip. :kyouya:
Chap. 2
it's been a week.
Still thinking about what i'm going to do. Going around doing motivational speeches isn't my thing.
I saw a documentary on guitars today. It made me cry. Id do anything to feel the fine,polished wood under my fingers again. I'd do any thing to feel my fingers agian.
Herr Forehead has a new rival. As expected, Forehead's kicking this guy around. That trucy fraulien came by again. I forced a LOL, but I knew her tricks. Oh well, the snackoos she smuggled from Ema tasted nice.
Anyway, Forehead's coming over. He doesn't know it of course, but it's the same time my aid comes over to help me to the bathroom.
He must figure he owes me for humiliating me in court, ja?

Wish I could write this in some sort of diary, but my thoughts will have to do.

*click*
Oh there he is. Told him just to come over. I'm glad he came early......
Well, look at that. Herr Forehead and Herr hobo have food....and a walker?
Aw crap, I told them theese attemps are good for nothing but getting bummed.
Oh well....


CHAPTER 2 YAH.TELL ME IF U WANT 3. :kyouya:
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Re: it all ended with a crash-A klavier story chap. 1Topic%20Title
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Experimental Hydroxyacelunodosetrase

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I want to read more.
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You’re so small in such a big world...

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This is really good so far. I'm hooked.
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Klavier is mine, B!tch

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well, 2's out.
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Thanks 2 edgeygavin!
"Hippopotomonstrosesquipedaliophobia- Fear of long words."
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~Vervollkommnung~

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I like this fic so far!
Please update soon!

I love your sig, BTW. Hippopotomonstrosesquipedaliophobia FTW!
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Where's Pikachu? ...I mean Wally!

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Wow, I've never read a story like this before. Please continue, it's really good!

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I'm intrigued! Can't wait for chapter 3, it would be awesome if they were longer though >:D
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