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Title: the boys of my house / atashinchi no danshi
- based on a korean drama called: "Atashinchi no danshi". I found it cute and funny so I wrote a PW-based one.
author: windrain
status: ongoing
rating: G, for general
genre: comedy, romance

warning: may contain Out of character-ness, since it seemed funny to make them that way. And this does not follow a PW storyline. Just the characters.

Spoiler: Summary:
When Maya was young, her Mother fell terribly ill, her father Kristoph left them and lived his own life. Maya's mother the passed away, leaving Maya alone. She then finds out that Kristoph has gambled a lot, and has earned one heck of a debt- and he put the debt all o MAYA'S NAME.

So now Maya is earning money to pay off that debt. She then meets Gumshoe, a n old but rich toy maker who owns the company "Miracle". He tells her that he only has 3 months to live. Maya shares her problem about the debts to him, and he offers her his hand in marriage, so that she could have a little inheritance when he dies, since she's his wife. She then accepts, signing the contract without reading it.

When Gumshoe passes away, his lawyer Lana and assistant Gant approach Maya and tells her about the contract she signed. Since she never read it, she finds out about the many conditions she agreed to do before she gets her money.

One of them is that she needs to be the MOTHER of his 6 ADOPTED SONS for 3 MONTHS.

Maya thought this was fairly easy. But then when she sees his huuuuuge mansion and his sons who hate each other and won't get along, she has second thoughts.

With Maya's "skills", will she finally be able to make them see her as a mother?

or will they see her as something else.... a girlfriend, maybe? a wife?


Spoiler: cast
~CAST~:

Maya :
role - the girl who Kristoph, her dad, left so much debt to, and has to be teh mother of 6 6 unusually weird boys for 3 months.
age - 20
why i gave her the role: I just though it was "fitting" for her cheery attitude, and all that.


Gumshoe:
role - a rich (but old) toy maker who owns the company "Miracle". has 6(?) adopted sons.
age - deceased
why i gave him the role: I find it fun to make him OOC since he was always poor in PW, and i wanted to imagine him as RICH for once. So he's one of the characters i "played around" with a bit.

Kristoph:
role- Maya's dad. a jerk. duh.
age - around 40...
why i gave him the role: Well in AJ, He lost in poker, so since he lost, i just put him here in this role since he has lots of debts since he lost. And he's a jerk.

Daryan:
role- the first eldest son who doesn't live in the mansion.
age- around 25
why i gave him he role - it suited him.

Larry:
role- the 2nd eldest son who lives in the mansion. a gangster/delivery boy/womanizer who has no women.
age- around 24
why i gave him the role - it suited him, too.

Phoenix:
role- 3rd eldest son, divorced with Iris, lives with his daughter Pearl (5 years old) in an apartment. works as a host (entertains girls in a club)
age- around 22
why i gave him the role - well, since the guy was married and had a kid, i put phoenix...and....because he ends up with %)*!&^@% in the end...that's a secret. hehehe.

Klavier:
role - the 4th son. afraid of women. handsome? yes. works as a model. lives in the mansion.
age - around 21
why i gave him the role - i played around with him too. I made him have a trauma for girls! he's afraid to go near any of them. So because of this, he kinda acts gay (but he's not). i found this fun. ^^

Apollo:
role- the 5th son. lives in the mansion. locks himself in a room, never came out ever since he got adopted. a talented magician.
age - around 18
why i gave him the role - i played around with him too. I found it fun that he's a magician this time, and not trucy.

Edgeworth (Miles):
role - the youngest son, lives in the mansion. Devilishly handsome and smart. always doing his homework.
age - 13
why i gave him the role: awww cute kid edgey! and handsome plus smart! just like edgey! <3

Franziska:
role- maid of the mansion. equipped with silent but deadly fighting skils. doesnt talk that much.
age - ???
why i gave her the role- ok, i REALLY laughed hard on this. seriously. i think you already get why i gave her the role... its because i played around with her a bit.

Gant:
role- assistant of gumshoe.
age-???
WIGHTR: uhhh...i don't really know...

Lana:
role- lawyer of gumshoe
age- ???
WIGHTR: I don't know either.


Spoiler: Chapter 1 - Apollo, magician extraordinaire
Maya...

she's once again alone...on her own.

Living in a wooden small "box" she made for herself in a park, along with other homeless people.

"Time to wake up..." Maya thinks, as she stretches and rubs her eyes.

"Time to get to work."

She steps out of her wooden "house", and walks to her current work.

The Net cafe, an internet cafe.

"Maya! good morning!" Wesley (yes, Wesley Stickler) says as he looks at Maya with pure adoration.

"Um, hey, Good morning." Maya smiles.

Wesley is one of Maya's friends from her high school. By the way, he adores her.

"Wesley, get out of Maya's way!" Max shoves Wesley aside and beams at Maya.

"Maya, Good morning! Ms.Maya bodyguard crew, assemble!" Max shouts.

So a whole group of men suddenly appear out of no where.

These are a bunch of people who adore Maya. WEIRD people, may I add.

"Um, yes, good morning." Maya smiles.

"Ah...." everyone melts at her smile.

So they go on and work, just like the usual day.

Let's move on to a few hours later, late evening, after work.

"Ahhhh... work's done. time to get to my next work." Maya says out loud. She walks on the street until she sees headlights of a car heading towards her, fast!

"AHHHHH!!" She blocks her face using her hands.

"Am I...alive?" Maya asks out loud.

"Idiot!" A voice shouts.

Looks like that voice was scolding the driver.

An old man suddenly gets out of the car.

"Pal, are you okay?" The old man asks.

"Ah, yes, thank you very much for asking." Maya replies as she bowed politely.

"I'm very sorry, pal. Would yo like to have a cup of tea with me, as a little apology from me, pal?" The old man smiles.

"Ah, thank you, mister. But I have to get to 3 of my jobs." maya bows again.

"3? IT's already 11pm. Do you plan on working until morning?" the old man tilts his head.

"Ah, yes, that's how i live, you see, everyday." Maya smiles exhaustingly.

"Why is that? you're still so young, pal. You should enjoy life." the old man smiles.

"Ah...my mother passed away you see, and my father...has...a lot of debts, that he gave to me.." Maya sighed.

"Oh dear... well, come and have a cup of tea with me, pal. And you'll never hve to work that hard again." The old man smiles as he motions her to get in the car. a shiny BLACK big car, may i add.

"What?" Maya asks.

"My name is Dick Gumshoe. I'm a to maker, owner of-" Gumshoe was cut off.

"...MIRACLE!" Maya shouts as she points at him.

"Ah, yes, you've heard of my company." Gumshoe smiles.

"Yes, of course! the most famous toy company around!" Maya smiles.

"Well, let's have a little deal... I'll pay off your debts for you...but...theer are conditions." Gumshoe smiles.

"These conditions are....?" Maya asks.

"Get in. We'll talk." Gumshoe gets in the car.

"a way to pay off my debts..." Maya thought.

She then gets in the car.

The car then moves on.

"I'm afraid...I only have a few months to live, you see." Gumshoe replies.

"What?! why?!" Maya is shocked.

Gumshoe smiles. "That's a secret. but...Marry me." Gumshoe looks at her.

"WHAT?!" Maya is even MORE SHOCKED.

"If you become my wife, and I die, you'll have a part of the inheritance. I have 6 sons, you see. adopted. You'll share with them. But i assure you, it's more than enough to pay off your debts." Gumshoe smiles.

"..." Maya became silent.

"So, you'll marry me?" Gumshoe smiles.

"YES." Maya says.

"That was fast, pal." Gumshoe laughs.

"Here, read and sign." a voice said.

"WOAH! where did you come from?!" Maya jumped.

"...read and sign please." Lana said, Gumshoe's lawyer.

maya took the pen and signed it. of course, without reading it.

"Then it's settled. You're my wife now." Gumshoe smiles.

"Just like that?! no ceremony or anything?" maya tilted her head to the side.

"Nope. We have two witnesses, and you signed a contract, that's enough." Gumshoe smiled.

They arrives his house.

"WOAH! HUGE MANSION!" Maya yelled.

"Hahaha. I made this house. It's full of little tricks." Gumshoe laughed.

They went in the gate.

They were now facing the front door.

Gumshoe then patted the head of a monkey statue that was beside the gate.

"Who is the president of the Philippines?" the monkey statue said.

"Woah." Maya was stunned.

"Gloria macapagal arroyo." Gumshoe answered.

The gate flung open.

"All the passwords are about the philippines." Lana said.

"I happen to like the country. It's very amusing." Gumshoe laughs.

They enter the house. Gumshoe leads her to the main hall.

There was 1 boy sitting on the table eating with another boy sitting on the sofa.

"Larry, Klavier, this is my wife, Maya."

The two boys just stared at him.

"Finally got a wife, old man?" Larry grunted.

Maya happily approached Larry and held out her hand.

Larry snobbed it.

Maya then approached Klavier.

"Ahhhhhh!" Klavier shouted and backed away.

"He's afraid of women, get away." Larry snorted.

"...2 of my adopted sons. the other 2 are in their rooms, the other 2 are not living here." Gumshoe sighed.

"But why? you're family." Maya sadly said.

"Family? don't joke around, lady." Larry laughed.

So this went on everyday...

Maya only ever saw the 2 sons while she stayed in the house.

3 months passed, and Gumshoe finally died.

Maya approached his lawyer, Lana.

"My money...?" Maya sadly said.

"what? you haven't fulfilled the contract yet." Lana said.

"contract...?" Maya said cluelessly.

"The thing you signed." Lana sighed.

"Oh. So, what do i have to do." Maya said.

"THESE are what you have to do." Lana brought out a bunch of papers.

"WHAT?!" Maya shouted.

"The first is...to be the mother of his 6 adopted sons for 3 months." Lana read.

"Their mother...?" Maya repeated.

"Who are you people?" a voice said.

"Miles. nice to see you again." Lana nodded at him.

"Who are you?" Miles asked.

"No one ever remember me!" Lana said.

"Ah, nice to meet you, you must be Me.Gumshoe's youngest son." Maya smiled at him.

"...yes, theoretically, I am. But if you put it in a more hereditary way, I'm-" Miles was cut off short.

"Shut up, you brat." Larry said.

"That's no way to talk to your brother." Maya said.

Larry sneered. "Don't act like my mom, lady."

"But your dad-" Maya was cut off.

"Ms.Maya, they're not allowed to know." Lana said.

"Oh, uhm, okay." Maya said.

"there's supposed to be 4 of you here, where's the other 2?" May asked.

"Klavier's in a photo shoot. Apollo's in his room." Miles said as he adjusted his glasses.

"Apollo...?" Maya asked.

"My 5th brother." Miles said.

"He never gets out of his room, so don't even think you can meet him, lady." Larry laughed.

Maya then went out of the main hall and went straight to Apollo's room.

She knocked.

"Apollo...? I'm Maya, your new mother, um... I'd like to meet you?" Maya shouted.

"Leave me alone." A voice answered.

You can' stay locked up like that forever." Maya said.

"I did, i can, and i will." Apollo replied back.

"You're a wimp!" Maya shouted.

Maya heard footsteps and the door opened.

"Excuse me?! What do YOU know, lady! You don't know what I've been through! I'll never go outside! Besides, I can't stand sunlight!" Apollo shouted.

"You're a wimp! coward! GAY!!! Only a REAL man would face his problems and not run away from them like hiding in his room all day! whatever problems you have you should be a man and face it, head on! That's when you'll truly enjoy life!" Maya shouted back.

Apollo was silenced.

"Besides, i'm not asking you to go outside the mansion yet. Just outside your room. It's time for breakfast." Maya smiled.

She grabbed his wrists and lead him to the main hall.

"Oh yes, I'm Maya, your new mother." She smiled.

"..." Apollo was silent as he let her drag him to the main hall.

"Here." Maya said as she brought a plate to Apollo's seat.

"Woah, Apollo, dude, you're out of your room!" Larry shouted.

Miles appeared to be shocked, just as well as Klavier.

"Shut up." Apollo blushed. He wasn't used to having so much eyes on him.

"Eat up." Maya smiled at him.

He blushed again and picked up his fork.

"Here." Maya said as she set plates onto everyone's seat.

"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!" Klavier shouted as Maya got near him with his plate.

"Okay, okay, I'll leave this here." Maya set the plate down in the middle of the late.

Klavier stood to get it.

"Why are you so afraid of women, Klavier? Maybe...I can help?" May smiled at him.

"..."

"He won't asnwer you, lady! nice try though!" Larry laughed cruely."

"...I-...I was...dumped..? more than...twice...dumped...b-bad...and...Um..I've been...scared of them...ever since..." Klavier stammered as he stared at his plate.

"HE TALKED!" Apollo was shocked.

"To a GIRL!" Miles continued.

"Woah." Larry added.

"I see... well, not all women are like them , you know...you should get over your fear of them.." Maya smiled.

"I think..I can try talking to women again...but..not...not... Touching...or-or...going n-near..." Klavier stammered.

"Geez what is up with you people? Changing all of a sudden just because of this crazy lady!" Larry shouted and stood up from the table and left.

So...anyone want to tell me his story?" Maya asked.



that's it for now. so... the "Atashinchi no danshi" is a korean drama that is still currently being shown, and you could find it free to watch online in mysoju.com. I tried imagining the cast above as the characters while watching it and i burst out laughing... :edgey: you'll understand why i put them in those positions if you watch the drama or read my fic. :edgey:
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Re: The boys of my house (too many pairings to mention)Topic%20Title
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Uhm, just in general: If you'd like to write it, then do so. As long as you have fun writing something, you should give it a go!
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It sounds interesting. I'll be prepared to read it!
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Hmmm....this looks interesting. I might check up on it when you put up the first chapter.
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