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Well, while I mostly write (wrote. Been in a writing funk for a while) for other fandoms... I do have PW fics to share.

Like anyone cares about that. I'm sure most just want to see fics. :keiko:

Well, I only have one completed 'first chapter' of a fic right now. One, the fic below is kind of crackish and silly. Another fic I have planned is also silly 'crack' fic (cuze I like the road not taken? Even one that shouldn't exist?). Phoenix/Lisa Basil. And my 'main' PW fic which is, sort of normal (Phoenix/Franziska) lemon fic that, despite having written a ton on it, isn't quite ready for showtime. So at the moment, this is all I have. :lana:

Title: The Secret of Ron DeLite

Category: Phoenix Wright: Ace Attorney
Character(s): Desirée D. & Phoenix W./Nick


Words: 3,776
Genre(s): Humor/General
Rating: Rated: T
Summary: Acquitted as Mask DeMasque, Desirée and Ron now live happily ever
after. Or do they? Desirée discovers a secret about Ron that will change
everything.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5810157/1/T ... Ron_DeLite

Feedback is appreciated. As well as any comments, constructive criticisms and problems with my fics. I always aim, no matter how silly and stupid the storyline, to keep the characters in character. I'm curious if I have succeeded. Or failed. :godot:
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They've been married for how long and she discovers this only now?

A good read, characterization is appropriate and the plot looks good thus far. Do want more.
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Re: SimmyC Multichapter ficsTopic%20Title
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Heheh. Thanks.

As for her being married for so long and missing that fact... I did say it's a crack fic. That being said... I do believe that in a crack fic, there needs to be some logic to make it work. And there is a twisted logic to it...

I mean, she did completely miss the fact 'he' was Mask DeMasque in the canon.

Makes you wonder what else she missed. :P
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