Let's see, not much to say but REVIEW pleeeeeease I’m working my little brain to the skull making a good mystery(but it's kind of obvious now). I love the phrase 'quack doctor' as you will see in the story.
Apollo rushed in the emergency room full of sophisticated doctors. Unfortunately he got the exact opposite.
Dothcter! I need Methical athention quicth!” Apollo screeched over his swollen tounge.
“…hmmm yes you do seem to have a slight swelling indeed,” the doctor said.
“Well wath do you need to do to fixth it! I’m going to die from alerthic reacthion!” Apollo slurred.
“Hmm yes first tell me how long has it been from the time you er consumed the allergenic food yes..? The doctor hummed.
“Abouth five miniths ago” Apollo slurred again.
“Oh my hmm yes we must act quickly… the doctor replied.
(HOW CAN HE BE SO CALM IM DYING HERE!)
The doctor then walked to a large cabinet and pulled out a pot filled with sharp knives and scalpels.
“AHHHHHHHHHHH!” Apollo shrieked at the sight and fell unconscious.
“He he he… poor fellow doesn’t realize how the treatment works."
The doctor than removed the entire sharp objects from the pot and sat it next to Apollo’s head. He then reached in his medicine cabinet and took a small bottle.
“Hey wake up I’m not going to cut you yes…” the doctor said.
Apollo woke up with nightmares of being cut open and having the cashews removed from internally.
“Here hold this pot and drink from this bottle yes it will make you feel better,” the doctor said with a grin.
Apollo held the pot and drank from the bottle which tasted disgusting and even worse he felt terrible after drinking it.
“BLECH whath is thith stuff ith vile!” Apollo said holding his stomach.
“It’s a special medicine called Cack hmm yes Cack in this case is very good,” the doctor said backing from Apollo.
“Whats Cack?” Apollo asked feling his stomach churn in pain.
“Yes Cack is a medical ingredient that makes you hmm yes vomit,” The doctor said.
“VOMIT why would I need to Vo-
Apollo was stopped by the feeling of stomach juice gushing from his stomach to his mouth and then…
BLEEEEEEEEEEEEEECK!!
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BWAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!
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“Is it over…?" Apollo asked.
His body answered for him.
BLOOOOOOOOOOOCKH!!
“Hmmm you should be feeling better now right?” the doctor asked.
“…Strangely I do…”
“Yes now there's no more allergenic substance, here take this medication it will lower the swelling take it once every hour yes” the doctor ordered.
Apollo was about to leave but over heard the doctor mutter something under his breath.
“He reminds me of the lucky bride choking on tears,” he said.
“Did you say something?” Apollo asked hoping to get more information out to him.
“Hmm oh yes I was just remembering the lucky woman who walked in here yesterday saying she needed some allergy medication too”
“Who was this woman?” Apollo asked again.
“Oh interested I see. Well if you must know I happen to know that a marriage is going on tomorrow even better I know who the mystery bride is”
“And who is it!?” Apollo asked getting very excited.
‘Hmmm I’m not good with names but I know two very important facts!”
“and they are?” Apollo asked
“One she’s cute! Very pretty too!”
(This is one quack of a doctor!)
“And two is she was convicted with murder”
“Well that could be in handy thank you Mr…”
“Hottie Director Hottie from Hottie Clinic, you may get my name mixed with the Hickfield Clinic that’s where my twin brother works Director Hickfield.
(Quack doctors to be correct)
Apollo went back to his room to get some rest from this long day and to recover from his allergenic attack. However when he opened the door there were 3 girls watching The Copper Samurai. Apollo was confused as to whom these other two girls were but one stuck out.
“Trucy are these friends of yours?” Apollo asked.
“Hey Polly, and yeah these are my new friends Pearl and Maya they are good friends with Daddy.
“Hello Polly!” a girl in brownish hair said.
“Hello” the other said.
They were too fixed with the TV to talk at the moment so Apollo decided to go to sleep he had been snooping around the hotel all day and he was really tired. So he walked into his own room, turned out the lights, and went to dream land.
The next morning Apollo was full of energy but asked himself a question. (Why am I bothering to talk about this marriage if it’s going to happen today?) He pondered whether or not he wanted to continue this investigation but was still being yanked by Mr. Armstrong’s psyche locks along with Larry’s who knew what they were hiding. Apollo decided to think about it while he took a short walk outside the hotel. He was then greeted by the puppet master.
“Well well well if it isn’t demonic horns” the puppet said laughing.
“Look I’m not trying to play games here I want to know some information and unless you have any don’t bother to get in my way” Apollo said with an angry face.
“Well the kids got some spunk in him maybe we should tell him about the performances” the puppets said together.
Apollo stopped and considered how useful this information could be.
“Ok I’m listening,” Apollo said.
“You already know about the wedding and you know that my gang and I are performing to but do you know who else is?” Trilo Quist asked raising an eyebrow.
“Well no,” Apollo said looking at the ground.
“Well because you got spunk ill let you in on 2 things”
"Prosecutor Gavin and Lamorir are going to be performing along with Machi in a love trio” Trilo Quist said.
Along with that and a little drama including Ron Delite and his wife Dessie Delite” Trilo Quist Jr said.
Apollo found new inspiration and decided that it should be a challenge for him to find out more.
“Thank you that helped me out a lot” Apollo said smiling.
“Ron delites room is on the tippity top floor room 500 and Klavier is at room 450” the puppets said in symphony.
Apollo then walked off but then as he was turning the corner the elevator he bumped into another woman but this one was accompanied by a shaggy looking man. He quickly helped the woman who had fallen down.
“Maggey are you ok!?” the man asked.
“Its ok Sir I just need to find my glasses they’re here somewhere…” the woman replied.
*CRACK*
“… oops found them the shaggy man said with a sad face.
“It’s ok sir I always have an extra pair” the woman said taking out an extra pair of glasses.
“Well now that that’s solved lets take care of this guy” the shaggy man said then picked up Apollo by his collar and lifted him of the ground with one hand.
Apollo was struggling for air but was rescued by the woman.
“Sir Stop this was my fault not his, remember my bad luck prone…” the woman said.
The shaggy man put Apollo down and started growling before leaving.
“I’m sorry about that Detective Gumshoe was just being over protective the woman said smiling.
“Thank goodness! If you hadn’t stepped in, I would be dead or at least in that quack doctor's room again,” Apollo said laughing.
“I’m Maggey and you are?” she asked with a smile.
“Apollo glad to meet you” Apollo said with a smile.
“Apollo… hmm I remember that name from before somewhere…oh I remember you defended a good friend of mine!” she said with bliss in her face.
“Who?” Apollo asked.
“Vera, we meet at a Gramarye show when we were kids and I’ve visited her often,” Maggey explained.
“Oh well that’s great,” Apollo said.
Apollo realized it was already 10:00. The wedding started at 7:00 and if he was going to figure out what was happening he was going to need all the information he could get.
“I’m sorry we couldn’t stay longer but I have to go somewhere,” Apollo said.
“Ok well have a nice day,” she said as Apollo walked off.
Apollo walked upwards flashed his card a couple of times so he could get to the top of the hotel and eventually got to room 500.
He knocked on the door once and was greeted by a beautiful woman with golden brown hair and a sweet smile.
“Can I help you,” she asked.
“Yes you wouldn’t happen to know where the Delites are would you?” Apollo asked sheepishly.
She smiled and said “We are the Delites, Ronny is just in the other room practicing his lines for his performance tomorrow.
“Who might you be?” she asked cocking her head to the side.
“I’m Apollo Justice, Phoenix Wright’s apprentice,” Apollo replied.
“Oh no there wasn’t a murder, was there?” she said with a frightened tone.
“No, No. I just wanted to ask some questions. I want to know a little more about this engagement and I know you know because you were asked to perform along with two other groups.,” Apollo said.
“That’s all? I was afraid you were going to ask for money or plans to an evil scheme,” Delite said with a smile.
(What’s that supposed to mean?)
Apollo walked in and was shocked by a shady character.
Well REVIEW and only a few more chapters before the engagement happens review and tell how you think im doing so far.