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MS's Long fanfics. 1st one: The Art of Love.Topic%20Title
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Hi there. According to the new rule every Fanfic writer only gets 2 topics. I have a really creative mind and like creating stuff like this so I've created this one for all my multi chapter ones. I'm starting off right now with one I call "The Art of Love".

Title:The Art of Love
Author: Masked Sensation
Rating: IDK
Genre: Romantic/Comody
Status: just started
Pairing: Larry/Fraziska
Summary: If you must.
Spoiler:
Franziska's modeling for Larry's book turns into a on night stand ending up with Franziska getting pregnant.

Notes: Sort of inspired by PW Ace Daddy-to be by kitty_sneeze. That is a good one too.

Spoiler: Part one, The book
It was the day after Iris's trial ended. Larry had just inherited his mentor's studio and began his work there. He started by painting a picture of some of his ex-girlfriends when he was interrupted by knocking on the door. "Hold on a minuet" shouted Larry as he raced for a cover to cover his little "broken heart parade". He then went to the door and opened it to revile Franziska vonKarma.
"Let's get this over with" she said and walked right in.
Larry was confused "um, get what over?" Fraziska gave him a good whip to the face. "Owww" he said.
"You fool, I am modeling for your book you asked me to model for. What was it called again 'Franzi's Whipsplash'?" replied Franziska.
Larry remembered and then stated "It's actually called 'Franzi's Whiplash Splash' but I didn't know that you wanted to model today".
"I'm just doing this to get it over with" she remarked.
"Ah, I see" said Larry. "Well OK then where should we start?"
"I say we go chronologically" said Franziska.
"Ah then" said Larry. "Just let me get something quick" and he went to his desk. He took out his story boards for the book. "OK then, are you ready?" he asked.
"Sure" she replied.
"Well let's get started then. Now then..." he asked her to pose in all sorts of motions, but none of them provocative (Well one but he got whipped for that and he asked for a different pose). It went on to about 9 pm. When they where finished Larry said "Well I'll add the finishing touches tomorrow, I'm going out for a night on the town".
Fraziska had nothing else to do so she asked "can I come along?"
"Sure" said Larry and they where on there way. The went to a local nightclub and went for the bar. "I'll have a mix of Vodka and Cognac" said Larry.
"I'll have a hard lemonaid" said Franziska.
Larry whispered "Aren't you under age?"
"I've got it" she replied.
When the bar tender saw her I.D. he said "Hey, your under age".
Franziska flashed her whip in a violent manor, "You where saying?".
"One Hard lemonaid coming right up" said the bartender.
Two hours later they where both REALLY drunk. Larry spotted a really gorgeous babe and and went by her. He said "Hey would you care to dance baby?".
The babe replied "Sorry but I don't dance with drunken losers" and she kneed him in the stomach.
Franziska noticing the struggle went there and said "Hey, that's m_my friend you're hurting m_missy".
"Oh yeah what are you going to do about it" the babe said. It was at that point that Franziska whipped her really hard. "Ow" she screamed. "You're going to regret this" she said storming out of the building.
Franziska helped Larry up off the ground. "Are you OK?" she asked.
"Fine, I'm fine" said Larry.
Franziska in all her drunkness felt sorry for Larry and said "You don't need a slut like that to have fun. I'll show you I can be fun, let's go back to your place" and they went back. When they got back, they where already in makeout stage and then went into the bedroom.
The next day Franziska awoke with a splitting head ache. "Son of a bitch, what happened? I don't remember a thing" she said to herself. After looking next to her and seeing Larry there made her panic. Had she really slept with that fool? She had no time to answer because she got out of there but she left a note. On her way out she noticed the pictures she modeled for. The look rather excellent in her opinion and felt something she she had never felt before, joy, was it?

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I like the concept of this. Keep it up, and watch out for the odd spelling mistake.
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Chloebabes wrote:
I like the concept of this. Keep it up, and watch out for the odd spelling mistake.

Like...what?
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Part two for all those following along.

Spoiler: Part two, The News
3 WEEKS LATER.
Franziska was on her way to Kurian village. Larry's book had been on the market for two weeks now and it was allready selling like hotcakes. The train had stopped at Kurian and Franziska got off. She knocked on the Fey Manor door.
Maya answered it "Franziska?" she said. Franziska hugged Maya really hard, Maya was confused."Um, what's going on?" she asked.
"OH I have the most wonderful news" said Franziska letting go "and, while I hate to admit it, you're the closest thing I have to a (sigh) 'girlfriend'".
"Ah" said Maya assesing the situation. "Well come on in" she invited. They went inside and sat on the sofa. "So what's the great news?" Maya asked.
"I'm pregnant" Franziska said with happieness.
"Umm" Maya said, "that's not ussualy good news for someone who's not married. Or not about to get married" she stated.
"But I've been waiting for this day to come" said Franziska "ever since my sister got pregnant. I've allways looked up to her. She told me 'If you get pregnant, no matter how scarry it may seem, just remember, there's a person growing inside you and that person will grow up to be the best thing in your life'".
"Wow that is a smart sister" said Maya. "So do you know who the father is?"
"You know" said Franziska "I don't remember sleeping with anyone".
"Ah, well tell me when you do. Say do you want a drink?"
"Sure" said Franziska "I'll take a leomnaid, I can't have it hard though" and in that moment she remembered everything. "Oh".
"What is it" asked Maya.
"I remembered who the father is".
"Who?" asked Maya.
Franziska looked at Maya, "Larry" she said.
Maya gaspped, "Are you going to tell him?".
"Of course" she said as she got up and started walking toward the door.
Maya asked "Can I come along?".
"Oh, yes, of course" said Franziska and they went to Larry's studio.
They knocked on the door, Larry aswered '''Oh hi Maya, Franziska. Say Franziska did you get the check I sent you?".
"What check?" asked Franziska.
"The on I sent you. You're getting 25% of book sales for modeling" said Larry.
"Oh" said Franziska. "Larry, we need to talk".
"About what?" ased Larry.
"Well" said Franziska "basiclly, I'm pregnant and you're the father".
"Oh, OK' said Larry. "I'll just..." and he fainted. Maya called 911 useing her cellphone.

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